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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: jeenal20

hey anaya gr88 start

but u dint open the raaz of banis paidayish
akhir yeh toh pata chale ki bani kiski beti hai
ghosh dear how do manage writing so many ffs at a same time
plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

Well thanks..keep reading..and keep loving..and yes I write several fics at a time..idea comes and I pen it down..😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey gr8 part,,

cont.sooon

Can you say something more than that?Please..😭
Thanks for reading..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tam2

hi ... nice start .... like Swati I will imagine this Jai Bani are Ram Prachi ... really nice concept ... Jai loves Bani but not willing to accept it ... looking forward to JB meeting ... do cont soon ...

Hey..thanks for your comment..but for this concept..Gurdeep is the right choice as you can see the background and the age difference of just 5 years between Jai and Bani.😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ammukutty

Hey,

Great start!! 👏....liked the introduction.................dear,I'm so poor in hindi,but managed to read it somehow.........😊 looking forward to the next part....

Ammu.

Don't worry...I will write in very simple Hindi..you will not have so much problem..😊Keep reading..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 2

Bombay ab Mumbai ban chuki hai.Baarish ka mausam hai..Walia Groups k Office me bahut kuchh badal chuka hai.Uday Walia ne Jai Walia ko Managing Director bana dia hai.Jai Walia..bahut hi rude nature ka hai.Politely baat karna uski aadat nahi.Employees k lia zara bhi humdardi nahi is aadmi k dil me.Uday Walia ne company k nayi Legal Adviser k saath jab Jai ki pehchaan karai,tab Jai aur bhi naraz ho gaya apne Dad se.Bani Juneja,Adovacte Bani Juneja.Office me dono me bahut zyada tension hai..baaki k employees humesha darr k saaye me rahte hai..k kab Jai aur Bani me jhagda shuru ho.Jhagda ek tarfa Jai ki taraf se hi hota hai.Bani jhagda nahi karti.Bani ko aadat ho chuki hai Krishna aur Jai se khari khoti sunne ki..pahle bura lagta tha..par ab usne apne kismat ko maan lia hai.

Bachpan se Jai ne apne Maa Baap ka yeh jhagda dekha tha...use lagta tha..k yeh sab Bani k wajah se hai..kahi na kahi Jai ko yeh bhi lagta tha..k Uday Walia bat gaye hain..woh sirf uske Pitah nahi rahen.Bani ne zabardasti kabza kar rakha hai unke pyar par.....

Jai ne bhi kabhi seedhe muh baat nahi ki usse,aaj bhi Baniko samjhata rahta hai k "Tumko jhelta hoon apne baap k wajah se"...

Uday Walia ne kabhi nahi kaha k Bani ko unhone kyon adopt karvaya..kyon khud nahi kia?Unko sirf intezaar tha k Jai bada hoga..toh usko samjhayenge,woh zaroor samjhega....apni Biwi ko samjha k woh thak chuke the...apne Bete par unko pura yakeen tha...

Yeh thi asal baat k kyon Jai Bani ko bardasht nahi kar pata..

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BANI JUNEJA

Bahut hi khubsurat..par kabhi yeh jataya nahi...humesha formal dress me..formal churidar, yaa formal Office-wearing suit..blazer..trousers..shirts..always with freash look..hair well managed and bound...humesha..ek khamoshi uske chahre pe..uski anhkon me..kabhi koi kamyab nahi hua..un aanhko ko padhne me...koi bhi ladka usse milta hai..uske ridh ki haddi me ek thandi laher daur jati hai Bani ko dekh kar..uski ankho ko dekh kar...itni gahri ankhen par padhne ko kuchh nahi..jaise 'NO ENTRY' ka board laga hai...k mujhe mat dekho..mere paas mat ana..aj tak Bani ko kisine gussa karte hue nahi dekha..Office me Jai ne chhote chhote problem ko lekar sab ko ek aadh baar daant chuka hai..par bade se bada problem ho ..Bani ko kisine nahi dekha gussa hote hue..

Par jis kisine bhi dekha usko court me plead karte hue..kahta hai k Bani ka interrogation Police ki 3rd degree se bhi zada bhayanak hai..itni detail k saath woh case ko study karti hai..witnesses k paseene chhut jate hai..Bani awaz unchi nahi karti ..par low voice k saath bhi woh itna kuchh kah sakti hai..k ..sab ki khatia khadi kar sakti hai.........

Yeh hai Bani Juneja..jo itno k saath itni asani se deal kar sakti hai..par Jai k saamne khamosh ho jati hai..Jai ki Maa,Mrs. Krishna Walia..bahut kuchh kah chuki hai..ab tak.Jai to koi bhi mauka nahi chhodta..par Bani ne kabhi palat kar jawab nahi dia..kabhi bhi nahi.....

Uday Walia jaante hai Bani ka background..aur janti hai Bani khud..Uday ne hi bataya..jab woh 18 saal ki hui ..bachpan se bahut logo ki bahut baatein sun chuki thi woh..Krishna se to humesha..par jab use apne background k bare me pata chala ..tab bhi usne chup rehna behtar samjha......

Uday Walia us din k intezaar me hain jab woh sari baatein Jai ko batayenge..par Jai..ko koi interest nahi Bani k bare me sunne me..humesha Bani ko har tarha se beizzat karta hai......itna nahi karta agar Uday Bani k taraf itna pyar nahi dikhate..par Bani ..har waqt khamosh..

Bahut hi kum umar me Bani ne achha naam kama lia hai.Gupta & Gupta Law Chamber se attached hai woh.Bar Council me kaafi naam hai uska.Walia Groups k Legal Team ki Head hai Bani.

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2005,22nd July.


Meeting me fir se jhamela ho gaya..ek strategy ko lekar..Bani bas is maamle k legal obstacles samjhana chaahti thi Jai ko..par Jai ne bahut rudely jawab dia, "Woh dekhna Lawyers ka kaam hai..isi lia unko itni tankha di jaati hai."

Bani chup ho gayi..par Uday Walia ne Jai ko kaha.."Fir se strategy ko samjhaao..ho sakta hai..Legal obstacles ko hum avoid kar sake..Walia Group k Chairman hone k naate itna toh main keh sakta hoon tumko.."

Aag me ghee ka kaam kia is baat ne..Jai meeting chhod k chala gaya..

Bani--Uncle..Jai ko bahut gussa aya hai..apne kyon nahi uske strategy ko approve kia??

Uday--See...it was a hard core business decision..emotional hone se kuchh haasil nahi hoga..

Bani--Par har bar main sahi aur woh ghalat..aisa kyon??

Uday--Because it is the fact dear...

Bani--Uncle..ab jab apne mujhe settle kar hi dia hai..to ek baat ki ijazat bhi dijiye..mujhe jaane dijiye..main jaana chahti hoon..yeha se door..aaplogon k zindagi se door..main janti hoon..main chali jaungi to sab theek ho jayega..please..

Uday--No..ab tak maine apni zimmewari nibhai hai..ab tumhari baari..tum kaise in sab ko samhalti ho..dekho Bani...Jai..abhi bhi gusse me hai..uski baaton ka bura mat maano..

Bani--Maine kabhi bhi Jai ko ghalat nahi samjha..agar main uske jagah hoti to main bhi yehi karti..bachpan se usne sirf jhagde dekhe..woh bhi meri hi wajah se..uska is tarha react karna hi normal hai...

Uday--Haalaat to tumahre thik nahi the Bani..par tum to aisi nahi bani..Jai sirf isiliye aisa hai k usne apne Maa Baap ko jhagadte hue dekha..par tumne to apne Maa Baap ko dekha tak nahi....kya tum ban gai...aisi short tempered?Maine kitni baar kaha hai..k at least Jai ko sab sach bata do..par tum khamoshi nahi todti..mujhe malum hai Jai tumko zaleel karne ka koi bhi mauka nahi chhodta...

Bani--Jai sach hi to kehta hai..yeh ek sach hai..main inkaar to nahi kar sakti k haa..mujhe paida hote hi dustbin me feka gaya tha..Jai to kuchh ghalat nahi kahta..agar aap na hote to main to andhere me ghum ho jati..

Uday--Mera Beta bhi andhere me ghoom honewala hai..tum bacha sakti ho use..I know that....

Bani--Kya yeh aapka hukum hai??

Uday--Nahi ..yeh ek majboor Baap ki request hai Bani..Jai ka khayaal rakhna..meri itni badi property ..main janta hoon..ise tum kuchh nahi hone dogi..aur Jai ko bhi..kyon ki tum pyaar karti ho usse.....

Bani--Pyaar?yaa right.....

Uday--Bani..baar baar yeh sawaal mujh se poochha gaya..k maine khud tumko adopt kyon nahi kia..tumne bhi puchha tha..wajah yeh thi agar tumko main adopt karta..to tum aur Jai bhai bahen bante..jo mujhe bilkul pasand nahi,aur ek wajah yeh bhi thi..k Beti banata to ek din chali jaati..yeh main hone kaise deta..aur kya pata..woh parivar kaisa hota..mere parivaar se zyada mehfooz jagah tumhare lia aur koi bhi nahi..isiliye..main nahi chaahta tha k tum par koi aanch aye........

Bani--Jaanti hoon..par Jai?

Uday--Mujhe apne khoon pe yakeen hai..Bani..aur apne parvarish pe bhi,fikar mat karo.. ekdin Jai khud ayega tumhare paas..usi tadap k saath jo tadap is waqt tumhare dil me hai..to be very frank and honest..Bani..ghabrana mat..tum ladhna..aakhir tak..

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22/07/2005..

Mumbai ki barish...

Jai abhi tak ghar nahi lauta..Krishna bahut pareshan..thodi der pahle Uday se jhagda ho chuka hai.Raat k 11 baj gaye ..par Jai nahi aaya.......

Krishna--Apne Bete se dushmani karte ho..woh bhi Bani k lia..kyon??

Uday--Apne Bete se pyaar karta hoon..isiliye Bani pe bharosa karta hoon..Krishna..bas karo..aur zaher mar uglo..aaj bol rahi ho kal bahut pachtaogi..apne is harkat k lia..

Krishna--Pachta hi toh rahi hoon..tumse shaadi kar k..

Uday--OK..just cut it out..

Udhar jab raat k 10 baje the..tab Bani gai thi 'Someplace Else' restobar me..woh jaanti thi.. k Jai seedhe ghar nahi jayega....waha jayega..Jab Bani waha pahoochi..dekha Jai ka 7th peg chal raha hai..dost log bol rahe hai k Jai ab aur mat pee...Jai nahi man raha hai..

Achanak Jai k ek dost ne kaha..,hey Jai,Bani..shaayad tujhe dhoondhte hue aai hai... haan..Bani aai thi Jai k lia..

Jai--Tum se bardast nahi hota kuchh k kuchh pal k lia mujhe chain mile?mujhe neecha dikhaya tumne....

Bani--Jai..ghar chalo..baad me jo marzi kahna ..par abhi tamasha mat karo..please..

Jai--Tamasha?? haan..tamasha hi to ban chuka humari zindagi..banaya kisne?A.BANI JUNEJA.B. BANI JUNEJA.C.BANI JUNEJA. D. BANI JUNEJA..kya life line use kia jaye?
1. Uday Walia ko phone karo.2.Krishna Walia ki rai lo..aur 3.Jai ki zindagi..bolo kaunsa?

Bani--Bani Juneja khud jawab de rahi hai..haa ..Jai..main hoon..doshi..maine kabhi inkaar to nahi kia...abhi chalo..tumhari Maa pareshan ho rahi hain..

Jai k dost ne kaha.. "Jai..chala ja..tamasha karega..to Uncle aur bhi door ho jayenge tujhse..."

Bani ne driver se kaha .. "Jai ki car tum leke ao..main apne car me ghar chhod doongi.."

00:15 am..23/07/2005....

Bani Jai ko samhaal te hue..uske ghar le gai..Walia Mansion..Krishna..aai, "Jai beta..kyaa hua??"

Bani--Sorry..mujhe ana nahi chahie tha..par Jai ko is haalat me akele chhodna thik nahi tha..isiliye..main chalti hoon.....

Uday--Are Bani..khana khake jaao na..

Bani--Nahi Uncle..mujhe jaana hai..good night....

Bani chali gai..

Uday--Dekh lo Krishna,tumko pata nahi tumhara beta kaha kis haal me tha,par Bani. Khair..Jai ko jakar sula do kamre me.

Jai tab bhi nashe me keh raha hai.. "Bani...I will not spare you..I wish I could kill you..."

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
hey ananya
that was a good part
loved the relationship showed between uday wali and bani
and even bani loved jai
but jai hai ki hamesha bani ko sunata rehta hai
and banis know all about jais whereabouts
good yaar
loved this lines
Jai--Tamasha?? haan..tamasha hi to ban chuka humari zindagi..banaya kisne?A.BANI JUNEJA.B. BANI JUNEJA.C.BANI JUNEJA. D. BANI JUNEJA..kya life line use kia jaye?
1. Uday Walia ko phone karo.2.Krishna Walia ki rai lo..aur 3.Jai ki zindagi..bolo kaunsa?

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
Great concept!!
I can unnderstand Jais point of view but I want to know the secret between UW and Bani.

will be looking forward to next part
byebye

Ranjana
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
one thing is clear... jai's blind anger towards bani is very baseless... did krishna have some problem with kiran that she is treating bani like this...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi ... nice part ... but confusing too ... it seems Jai has feelings for Bani but in drunken state still saying he wants to kill her ... liked Uday's explanation as in why he didn't adopt Bani .. do cont soon ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: tam2

hi ... nice part ... but confusing too ... it seems Jai has feelings for Bani but in drunken state still saying he wants to kill her ... liked Uday's explanation as in why he didn't adopt Bani .. do cont soon ...

Jai has feelings for Bani..this is a fact..you will know..and keep reading..😉

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