FF:NAJAAYEZ.Part 17Page24,17/03/10 - Page 3

Originally posted by: jeenal20

hey ananya

that was a good part ==Thanks..

loved the relationship showed between uday wali and bani ==Yes..they share a strong bond..

and even bani loved jai ==They both love each other..

but jai hai ki hamesha bani ko sunata rehta hai ==Jai ki feelings isi tarha baahar aati hai..😃

and banis know all about jais whereabouts ==She must know..

good yaar

loved this lines

Jai--Tamasha?? haan..tamasha hi to ban chuka humari zindagi..banaya kisne?A.BANI JUNEJA.B. BANI JUNEJA.C.BANI JUNEJA. D. BANI JUNEJA..kya life line use kia jaye?
1. Uday Walia ko phone karo.2.Krishna Walia ki rai lo..aur 3.Jai ki zindagi..bolo kaunsa?

Thanks a lot..

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Great concept!!

I can unnderstand Jais point of view but I want to know the secret between UW and Bani.

will be looking forward to next part
byebye

Ranjana

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

one thing is clear... jai's blind anger towards bani is very baseless... did krishna have some problem with kiran that she is treating bani like this...

PART 3

Bani ghar gayi..khana khaa kar hi change karna hai usko..khana kha kar woh kamre me aai..baarish me zara si bheeg gayi hai..nahana

zaroori hai..shower k neeche khadi hokar apne shirt k buttons ko khol rahi hai Bani..achanak puraani ek baat yaad aa gayi..ek din Jai bhi isi tarha Bani k shirt k buttons khol raha tha..US jaane se pahle..Jai ne ek baar Bani ko milne bulaya tha..

Bani jaldi baahar aa gayi ..aur apne bistar me let gayi..pata nahi us din Jai k sar par kaun sa bhoot sawaar ho gaya tha..

Bani ko le kar Baap -Bete me bahut zyada jhagda hua tha..aur Jai ne faisla kia tha India chhodne ka..Bani k lia ek note bheja ..jisme likha tha..Tumhare tutorial k baahar intezar karoonga..Tutorial class k baad Bani baahar aai..toh dekha Jai khada tha...Jai uske paas aaya..aur uska haath pakda Jai ne.Bani ne haath chhoodane ki koshish nahi ki..Jai k paas uske dost Neehal k flat ki chabi thi..Jai Bani ko usi flat me laaya..us waqt waha par koi nahi tha.

Jai--Bag udhar rakh do..aur mere paas aao..aur mere goad me baitho..

Bani ka dimaag kaam nahi kar raha tha..Bani ne bag rakh dia..table par..aur khadi rahi..

Jai--Sunai nahi dia..?Idhar aao..

Bani kaanpte hue kadmo se..Jai k paas gayi..Jai ne Bani ko apne goad me bithaya.. rubaroo the dono..Bani sirf Jai ki taraf dekh rahi thi..Jai ne kaha, "Jo hoga..hum dono me rehna chahie..kisiko mat batana..aur bataogi..bhi..toh mujhe koi fark nahi padta..samajh lo..yeh mera farewell gift hai..tumhari taraf se.."

Bani--Hmm..

Jai--Baat yeh hai..k jo kuchh hua ..tumhari wajah se hua..tumhari wajah se aaj itni tension hai..yuh samajh lo..main usiki keemat maang raha hoon..tumse..aur tumhe yeh keemat chukani hai..

Bani ne khud ko chhoodane ki koi koshish hi nahi ki..woh patthar ban chuki thi.Jai ne bahut der tak usko kiss kia..dheere dheere Jai ne apni shirt utaari..aur Bani ko fir se pakda.. Bani k honthon se khoon nikal raha tha..par Bani kuchh nahi kar rahi thi..Jai ko nahi roka usne..sirf patthar bani thi..andar hi andar Bani toot rahi thi..par kuchh nahi kaha usne..Jai ne dekha Bani par koi asar nahi ho raha hai.

Jai ko gussa aa gaya..kahne laga, "Bahut ghamand hai tumhe..nahi?Main toh sochta tha.. koi kuchh bhi kahe..toh tumhe koi fark nahi padta..lekin aaj pata chala..k koi tumhare saath kuchh bhi kare..toh bhi tumko koi fark nahi padta..ab main aisa kuchh karoonga.. jisse yaad kar kar k tum pal pal pachataaogi..k tum mere saath kyon aai..aur tumne mujhe kyon nahi roka.."

Jai ne Bani ko bistar me khincha..uski shirt k buttons ek ek kar k kholne laga..shirt jaa kar zameen par geeri..aur fir Bani ka inner bhi aa kar geera zameen par.Bani k gale me..aur uske breast par Jai k daant aur nakhoon k nishan bante gaye..Bani ne rokne ki koi koshish nahi ki..akhir kar Jai k haath Bani k trouser k zip ki taraf gaye.Jai ne Bani k chehre ko dekha..aur woh uth kar baitha..aur chala gaya balcony ki taraf..15 minute baad jab andar aaya..tab dekha Bani baithi hai..uske kapde zameen par hi hai..Bani k jism k upari hisson me ek dhaga tak nahi hai..Jai ne zameen me se kapde uthaaye..aur Bani ko dia..aur kaha, "Pahen lo..aur chalo yeha se.."

15 minute k baad Jai waha se nikal gaya Bani ko lekar..ghar tak chhodne gaya Bani ko.. tab Avinash ghar par nahi the..Bani k bedroom tak aaya Jai..Bani ne bag rakha..aur Jai k paas aai..aur tab Jai ne Bani k honthon par zor se kiss kia..aur kaha, "Aainda aise kisike saath mat jaana..agar woh le jaana chaahe toh chillana..logon ko bulana..zaroori nahi.. k har baar tum ko koi us haalat me aa kar chhod dega..har admi Jai Walia nahi hota..ek aur baat..agar tum saath deti..toh aaj main bahut kuchh karta..par tum mere saath nahi thi..kisi chees ko paana chaahoon toh puri tarha se chahie mujhe..aadhi adhoori nahi..main baant nahi sakta..bati hui cheeson se mujhe nafrat hai..isi lia main jaa raha hoon..Dad se door..kyonki unka pyaar bat chuka hai.."

Bani sar jhoonka kar khadi rahi..Jai kehta raha.. "Main tumhare wajood ko bardasht nahi kar paa raha hoon..par tumse door hone ka bahut ghum hai mujhe..tum chaaho bhi toh mujhe bhool nahi paaogi..aaj k baad toh kabhi nahi..is zindagi me nahi..isi lia..bata raha hoon..kisi aur ka khayaal apne dil me laana mat..agar aisa hua..toh kayamath aayegi.. main tumko jaan se maar daaloonga..aur khud ko bhi khatam karoonga..yaad rakhna.. tumhare jism par puri tarha se apni mohar nahi lagai hai maine..par ..tumhari aatma..uspe meri mohar lag chuki hai.."

Yeh keh kar Jai chala gaya..fir Bani se woh nahi mila..

Jai ka dum ghoot raha hai..paseena paseena ho gaya hai Jai..subha k 8 baj gaye hain..sar bhaari hai..aaj achanak purani baat yaad aa gayi..naa jaane us din kyaa ho gaya tha Jai ko..uske baad. jab bhi us pal ki yaad aai..Jai shower k neeche khada ho gaya..aur woh saari baatein..kaise keh dia usne..?Bani par koi asar bhi hua tha..?Jai nahi jaanta.Koi itni sahemi hui kaise ho sakti hai?

Darwaze par knock ..

Jai--Yes..

Uday andar aaye..

Jai--Kahiye..

Uday--Good morning nahi kehna hai?

Jai--Ohh..Good Morning..

Uday--Kal raat kyaa hua tha?

Jai--Kuchh nahi..

Uday--Toh fir tumko Bani ka sahara kyon lena pada?

Jai--Kyaa?

Uday--Bani hi kal aai thi..tumhare saath,ghar tak chhodne k lia..tum puri tarha se nashe me the..

Jai--Maine toh nahi kaha tha..k mera peechha karte hue woh aaye..

Uday--Achha ..ek baat kehni hai..Mrs.Jalan aai thi...apni Beti k lia tumhara rishta chaahte hain woh..

Jai--Mujhe shaadi nahi karni..

Uday--Kyon?

Jai--Bas..nahi karni..aapne bhi toh shaadi ki..aur uska kyaa faida?Maine dekha hai apni Maa ko..har roz ..dukhi hain woh..mujhe apni haalat unke jaisi nahi banani..please..

Uday--Ek aur baat...main soch raha tha..ab Bani ki shaadi kara deni chahie..shaadi k laayak ho gayi hai woh..Ajay ka phone aaya tha..waha par bahut se aise ladke hain jo Bani se shaadi karna chaahte hain..

Jai--Jo jee me aaye kijiye..mujhe batane ki koi zaroorat nahi..mujhe Office k lia der ho rahi hai..

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23/07/2005..11:00 hrs

Office me baith kar Jai koi kaam nahi kar raha tha..sirf chhat ki taraf dekh raha tha..ek admi aaya tha kuchh papers sign karane k lia..Jai ne sign nahi kia..admi wahi par file rakh kar chala gaya..baahar gaya toh Manager ne poochha.. "Sign kia Sir ne?"

Admi ne jawab dia.. "Pata nahi..kis Devta ka dhyaan kar rahe hain..baahar ki duniya me kuchh kaam bhi karna padta hai..unko hosh hi nahi.."

Manager--Devta nahi..koi Devijee hongi..woh dekho saamne aa rahi hain woh..

Bani aa rahi thi..

Manager--Ab aayega maza..Devijee andar jaayengi..kuchh sunengi..kuchh sunayengi..

Jai ke cabin k darwaze par knock kia Bani ne.. "May I come in?"

Jai--Yes..

Bani andar aai..Bani ko dekh kar Jai sharminda hua..kal raat ko Bani ne jis haal me dekha use..woh inkaar nahi kar sakta k Bani ne hi usko us haalat me sahi salamat ghar pahuchaya..

Jai--Kyaa baat hai....aaj mere cabin me??kya rasta bhul gai hain aap??Dad to aaye hain Office me..

Bani--Main bas itna hi kahungi...tumhara yeh khayaal hai na, k main sab kuchh chheenna chahti hoon tumse??Par tum is tarha haar kaise maan rahe ho?Tumko ladhna chahie... agar tumhe lagta hai k main tumhe neecha dikhane ki koshish karti rahti hoon..tumhari yehi koshish rehni chahie..k log tumko samjhe..specially Uncle..unko mauka hi mat do.. khud ko kyon geera rahe ho unki nazron me..kal raat ko jo harkat tumne kia hai..uske baare me main kah rahi hoon....

Jai--Achha hai...geerne k bare me kaun kah rahi hain??Bani Juneja..jo khud geeri hui hai..

Bani--Haan..main geeri hui hoon..mujhse muquabla karna hai tumko??Jo khud ko geera rahe ho??Is ladhai so kuchh haasil nahi hoga Jai..main baar baar keh rahi hoon..kyon kar rahe ho aisa??

Jai--Agar tum meri jagah hoti ..kyaa karti..agar dekhti k tumhari Maa pareshan hai..to kyaa karti?

Bani--Mujhse yeh sawal kyon Jai?Mujhe kyaa pata Maa ka dukh kyaa..aur Maa ka sukh kyaa..apni Maa ko maine dekha nahi..tum bhool gaye kya..k mujhe dustbin me feka gaya tha..ab tak har din har pal tum mujhe yeh baat yaad dilate aa rahe ho..aaj tum kaise bhool gaye?

Jai--Taana mar rahi ho?

Bani--Nahi..main kisiko tana kyon maroongi..mujhe pata hai..k jab koi taana maarta hai..to kaisa lagta hai..bas jo kehna tha maine kah dia..aage tumhara faisla jo hoga..tum dekh lena..achha chalti hoon.....

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Subha Uday ne jo baat kaha tha..raat ko dinner k waqt Krishna ne wahi baat fir se kahi..Jai ki shaadi..

Jai--Mujhe is baare me baat nahi karni..

Krishna--Tu 32 ka ho gaya hai Jai..

Jai--Koi aisa kanoon hai kya..k 32 saal k andar hi shaadi karni hai?

Krishna--Tu karna kyaa chaahta hai?

Jai--Filhaal mujhe sona hai..Good Night..

Jai uth kar chala gaya..

Krishna--Isko kyaa hua?

Uday--Premrog..

Krishna--Kisse?

Uday--Yeh tum ussise poochhna..meri baat par shaayad hi tumko yakeen ho..mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai..

Jab Jai apne bedroom me aaya..tab Bani ki aakhri baatein yaad aa rahi thi..k usko dustbin me feka tha kisine..ab tak Jai ne hi humesha Bani ko taanaa dia hai uski paidaish k bare me..uske pehchan ko lekar..par aaj Bani apni zindagi ka yeh sach uske saamne is tarha bol k gayi..kitni aasaani se..Jai k kaano me jaise pighalta hua loha daal gayi..sirf ek wahi sach jo Jai aur Krishna dahurate aaye hain baar baar..unke saath yeh duniya bhi..par Bani Juneja(?)..badi sakht cheez nikli..

Ek baar Jai k ek dost ne kaha tha.. "Dekhna Jai..aaj jitni nafrat tu usse kar raha hai ek din aisa ayega jab isse kai zyada mohabbat hogi usse tujhko.".. Jai ne kaha tha, "bakwas mat kar...".

Jai--Mujhe apne khoon k sath aise gande khoon ki milavat nahi karni...

Dost ne kaha tha.. "kya yehi baat tu usko bol payega?"

Jai--Mauka milta hai to usse uski aukat aur paidaish yaad dila deta hoon...

Dost--woh kuchh nahi kehti?

Jai--Sach hi kehta hoon..sar jhoonka k sun leti hai..

Dost--Iske do matlab hote hai..yaa to tujhse pyaar karti hai bahut zada..isliye bahut gehra asar hota hai uske dil me..uske dil ka haal tujhe uske aankhon me naa dikh jaye ,isiliye sar jhoonka leti hai..yaa to fir teri baaton ka koi asar uspar nahi hota..tu jo bolta hai shaayad wahi sach hai..k tere Dad property pe nazar hai uski..isiliye yeh sab bardasht kar leti hai..

Jai-- Tera doosra wala option hi sahi hai..usko daulat chahie..tabhi to besharmo ki tarha chipki hui hai...

Jai ko aaj fir woh baat yaad ai..par apni Maa k aansoon..woh bhool nahi sakta..waise Jai aaj subha jo hua woh bhi nahi bhool paa raha hai..Jai ne jo kia Bani k saath.

Bani jaa rahi thi..Jai ne kaha.. "Rooko.."

Bani--Kyaa..?

Jai uth kar Bani k paas aaya..Bani k kamar ko gher lia..apne baayen haath se..aur Bani k gale par apni unglian firaane laga..

Bani ne apna sar jhoonka lia..

Jai--Kyaa hua..meri shakal tumko achhi nahi lagti?

Bani--Woh..main..

Jai--Yaa fir..London me..koi aur mil gaya ..?

Bani--Nahi..woh mujhe jaana hai..

Jai--Chali jaana..jaldi kyaa hai..??

Yeh keh kar..Jai ne Bani k honthon ko chuma..itne zor se k..Bani ka dum ghootne laga.Jai ka right hand gaya..Bani k shirt k andar..Bani se koi reaction nahi mila..Jai ne poochha.. "Tumhe kuchh nahi hota..jab main tumko chhoota hoon..?"

Bani--Main jaaoon?

Jai ne Bani ko chhod dia..kaha, "Jaao.."

Bani chali gayi..

Jai k aankhon se aansoon nikal aaye..Jai ko lag raha hai..Bani ka dil patthar ka bana hai.. Bani se shaadi karega bhi..toh kya Jai ko shaanti milegi?Uske jism par hak jataayega..ab tak jaise jatata aaya hai..par Bani ka dil..usme Jai k lia koi jagah hai bhi yaa nahi..?

Udhar ..Bani bhi soch rahi hai..k Jai aage kyon nahi badhta..har baar chhod kyon deta hai?Bani rone lagi, "Main tumko khud de nahi sakti..tum kyon nahi chheen lete..?Tumhe pura hak hai..mera tan mann..sab kuchh..tumhara hai..tum kyon nahi samajhte..?"

ananya.. great part yaar.. continue sooon.. im lik mad and blushing.. mad at jai.. but then y doesnt bani do something.. tell him yes she wants him.. but atleast jai wants to marry her.. krishna should understand that bani is NOT her step-daughter... so she has noo worries..

ananya that was great part.

Just caught up with this new fanfic of yours. What is wrong with this Jai. He seems to be too self centered. Why cannot for once and for all clear up the matter with his father. So that at least he can have a peace of mind Rahter than trying to make everyones life miserable and create a hear ache for the woman he loves. And this Bani why doesn't she react to Jai. At least she should have slapped him and brought to his senses . But then things seems to be rahter a miss her And the fore most thing is what is all the mystery around her birth. waiting for you to update and see what is Jai planning on doing. Considering the fact that he wants to kill her and also cannot do without her.

ohh ananya that was a gr88 part

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

I think there is something emotionally wrong wiht bani too. I mean hearing that you are worth nothing and have been thrown away in the dustbin must have an effect on her. I dont like Jai. Too selfcentered and scared to ask for the truth. Jaise aankhein band kar lene se sacchai mit jaayegi.

I also dont like the way he is treating Bani. Just for his pleasure he can kiss her and touch her whenever he wants but never says that he loves her or that she is special. Pehle insult karta hai, phir choomta hai. Phir soochta hai ki usko bani ka dil bhi chaahiye, Gadha!!
Usko aakaashwaani huwi hai jo samajh legi???

Great part, got me all mad at Jai, but that only complimenst your writing!!

byebey
Ranjana