Tera Ishq Mera Junoon [TanShi FF] [Part 20 Page 28] - Page 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
#51
wow haya ... drunken tanu 😃is so adorable I wish wo Nashe me hi rahti😆...all scenes r sooo cute n Rishi saves tanu from those idiot goon😳... N he is carried her in his. Arms 👏awww so tanshilicious ...amazing haya waiting for updates hope u will update 2 as u said😃😳 I m waiting

Guys remember that jungle scene when Shekhar the great villain😆 kidnapped rishi😆😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#52
Wow!!! "AWESOME UPDATE" Foxi!!!👏
Drunken Tanu...😆😛😳...
As Gilehri said I too remembered holi scene n kidnap scene...😳
Nashe se chadh gayi...kudi...😆😉
Tanu kissed Rishi n asked...ek aur doon?❤️😳...
Intoxicated Tanu is much harmful than Sulphuric acid!!!😆...
Excitiment on the peak for next update... eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#53
Beautiful update👏
story jitni aage bar rahi hai aur bhi interesting ho raha hai😳
jab read kaarti ho tab sab kuch apne aap imagine ho jata hhai,
aisa lagta hai ki every scene ankho ki ssamne hai
intezar khatam e nehi hota😉
eagerly waiting for next update😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: vinushi

wow haya ... drunken tanu 😃is so adorable I wish wo Nashe me hi rahti😆...all scenes r sooo cute n Rishi saves tanu from those idiot goon😳... N he is carried her in his. Arms 👏awww so tanshilicious ...amazing haya waiting for updates hope u will update 2 as u said😃😳 I m waiting

Guys remember that jungle scene when Shekhar the great villain😆 kidnapped rishi😆😳

wo word gilehri...😳
Hahahahhaa...just like in serial...😛
Seriously after those holi scenes i was wishing that Tanuja will remain drunk in whole serial...😆
Hehehee...i will give update in few hours...😳
Be ready to read babes...😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: gopsss

Wow!!! "AWESOME UPDATE" Foxi!!! 👏
Drunken Tanu...😆😛😳...
As Gilehri said I too remembered holi scene n kidnap scene...😳
Nashe se chadh gayi...kudi...😆😉
Tanu kissed Rishi n asked...ek aur doon?❤️😳...
Intoxicated Tanu is much harmful than Sulphuric acid!!!😆...
Excitiment on the peak for next update... eagerly waiting...

wo word gilehri...😳
Ya i also remember those scenes...❤️
Hahhahaha...kuri nashe si charh gai...😆
Yes she is much harmful...😛😉
Will update in few hours...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: TearDrop50

Beautiful update 👏

story jitni aage bar rahi hai aur bhi interesting ho raha hai😳
jab read kaarti ho tab sab kuch apne aap imagine ho jata hhai,
aisa lagta hai ki every scene ankho ki ssamne hai
intezar khatam e nehi hota😉
eagerly waiting for next update😳

awww...wo word moni...😃
Thats so sweet...😳
Wo word for such wait...😳
Will update in few hours...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#57
Wo word for late foxi.😊
N ur update is awesome yaar.👏
Hatts off to u.👍🏼
When I was read I was also imagine. I loved it n enjoyed every scene. Keep it up. N update soon. I am waiting ur next update.😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#58
Wo word for late foxi.😊
N ur update is awesome yaar.👏
Hatts off to u.👍🏼
When I was read I was also imagine. I loved it n enjoyed every scene. Keep it up. N update soon. I am waiting ur next update.😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#59
[Part 5]
[DANCE PARTNERS]

*morning*

Tanu wakes up...and realises that she was too much drunk last ni8...
Flashbacks of yesterni8 comes to her...

T: Oh my God!!!! What i did???

She holds her forehead with her hand...

T: means seriously...i kissed him...and on the dance floor...ufff Tanu ye kya kiya tune...

And then she remembers when she hugged him and says that he is so caring...and so on...

T: Ahhh!!!! mamma...see what ur stupid daughter did...ab mn usey face kese krongi??😭whatever yr...Tanu u r strong...get up and be ready...

She get ready and leaves for uni...
There when she enters the class...
She see Rishi...

T (whispering): Aaahhh!!!! Sub se pehle is ka chehra dikh gya...ab poora din manhoos jaega...

She gives a fake smile to him...
And goes to her seat...
Rishi is shocked on seeing Tanu's reaction...
But then he remembers last ni8...
And smiles a bit realising that why Tanu is behaving so awkward...

R: now it would be a fun...be ready babes...

When class gets over...
Tanu feels that someone is following her...
When she turns back...
She sees a face of her only guilt...
Yup Rishi Singh Bedi...😉
Rishi comes to her...but she moves away...
But Rishi is more faster than her...
He comes and holds her hand...

R (teasing her): arey Tanu tm mjhse bhaag rhi ho???😉
T: ji nhi tmhari khush fehmi...
R: acha...ok...ek baat btao...
T: jldi bakoo...
R: ahaaa!!! U r being rude...
T: he...he...he...abey bol na jldi...

He says winking at her...

R: do u remember last ni8???

Tanu looks at his face stunned...
She gulps and says...

T: ky...kya..kya bol rhe..rhe ho...mjhe kuch yd nhi hai...mne boht zyada pee rkhi thi...
R: acha...nhi yad???
T: han...han nhi yad..
R: acha mn btaon..
T: koi zaroorat nhi hai...
R: aise kese zaroorat nhi hai...zaroorat hai...

He points at his cheek...

R: wo tmne mjhe...yhn pe...
T: mjhe kuch nhi sunna...

And she runs from there...
Rishi laughs out loud...

R: my cutie...its fun to tease u...

Everybody is called in the auditorium...
All reaches there...
There maam announces a competition...dance competition...

M: everyone gather up...there is a dance competition soon to be held in our uni...go and check the notice board ur partner's name will be there...go hurry up...

Everyone runs to the notice board...
TanShi reaches together...
And shocked to see their partners...
They are TanShi...😉
TanShi looks at each other...

TanShi: nooo...
T: aye loser...dont u dare to touch me...
R: just like i m desperate to touch u...loser number 2...
T (in a taunting way): hahahhahaha...bs kro Rishi mn hs hs kr mr jaongi...
R: ya ya...
TanShi: huhhh!!!!

They turns and goes in opposite direction...

M: listen up guys...ur dance rehersals will be in auditorium...
T: maam i want to change my partner...
M: no one is allowed to change their partners...sorry...
T: but maam...
M: no but...ur marks will be included in semester...best of luck everyone...

They goes to the rehersals...
TanShi comes infront of each other...

T: see i m not interested in dancing with u...its just a competition...got it???
R: no...i m interested in dancing with u... (he winks)...after yesterni8...

Tanu becomes awkward...
Rishi with a sudden holds her by her waist and pulls her to himself...
She collided with him...

T: Rishiii...
R: what???
T: leave me...otherwise i will kill u...
R: u killed me...last ni8...
T: Arrrggghhh!!! Stop discussing that faltu ni8...i m not interested...
R: but i m...
T: heyyy...leave me...i dont like to come closer to u...
R: ohhh...i see...last ni8 to mjhse chipak rhi thi...tb yd nhi aya that u dont like to come closer to me...han???
T: just shut up...

He moves his hand upward and places a strand of hairs behind her ear...
She pushes his hand...

M: no fi8ng Rishi and Tanu...
R: maam she is saying dont dance with me...
M: Tanu behave well...
T: maam but...
M: be quite...

Rishi gives her a victorious smile...

T: hehehee...very funny...i think u dont know me...mr. Rishi Singh Bedi...u will pay for it...
R: really???

He pulls her more closer...
Tanu irked with his behaviour...

T: i think u want to mix me with u...thats why pulling me so close...

Rishi laughs out loud...

R: may be...😆
T: hehehe...jerk...

He puts his hand in her hairs...
And joins his head from her...moving in a sync..with a wink...
Tanu tries to move away but Rishi says that he will call maam...

T: boht maza arha hai na...tmhe to mn baad mn dkhngi...
R: dekh lena...jb dil chahe tb dekh lena...

Then he seperates himself from her...

R: see now i have to use sanitizer...to remove germs...
T: same here jerk...

And they leaves the auditorium...

Precap: Rishi saves Tanu from falling from roof...

Thats it for now...i gave the update as promised...😉
Hope u guys liked it...
Do comment and hit the like...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Wo word for late foxi. 😊

N ur update is awesome yaar.👏
Hatts off to u.👍🏼
When I was read I was also imagine. I loved it n enjoyed every scene. Keep it up. N update soon. I am waiting ur next update.😳

its ok dear...😳
wo word lemon..😳
Wo word for loving it dear...😳
Its updated...😃
Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago

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