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Posted: 6 years ago
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[Part 3]
[BIRTHDAY PARTY]


*Night*

Tanu reaches home and goes to sleep...

*11:58*

Someone knocks at the window...
Tanu wakes up...and looks at the window...

T (slowly): oiii...who is knocking at the window...

The sound is continuously coming...

T (slowly): mommm...mjhe dar lg rha hai...Tanu u r a brave girl...chal dekh kon hai...

She stands up from the bed...picks up the vase and starts moving towards the window...

T: oyeee...u mental defective...u dont know Tanu shri...i will break ur face...

But the sound is continuously cmng...

T: listen u blockhead...mn tmhe jaan se mar dongi...mere pas vase hai...

Then she thinks a little and says to herself...

T (to herslef): Tanu tu pagal hogai...vase se kon mrta hai??? Khr jo bhi ho...

She is moving towards the window...but when she reached it...the sound stops...

T: hahaha...dr gya...phatoo kahin ka...Tanu Shri hai hi aisi chz...

She opens the window...but when she looks outside someone covers her face with veil and abducts her...

T: ayeee...leave me u idiotic moron...otherwise i will kill u...

He carries her in his arms...
And yup he is Rishi...

T: oyeee...leave me otherwise u will pay for it...
R: ssshhh!!!!
T: what ssshhh!!! U will pay for it idiot...u dont know Tanu Shri...

He makes her stand straight...
And removes her veil...
Tanu looks at the place...

T: wowww...

When she starts to turn towards him...
He stops her by back hugging her...

T: oyeee leave me...who are u???
R: its me babes...
T: heyyy...u...
R: wow i m impressed...kitna pehchanti ho mjhe...
T: oye listen who ever u r...i dont love u...u love me its ur problem...and u know its a one sided love...and u cant force me to love u...
R: i know i love u...and u dont...but i also know that i effect u...my touch effect u...and i will make u love me...one day u will say to me that u love me...
T: U..u..u r wrong...mjhe tm mn koi interest nhi hai...

*12:00*

R: ssshhh!!!! Happy Birthday my love...
T: tm...tmhe kese pta...
R: u r my love...and i know each and everything about u...
T: but...
R: no but lets move...

He moves towards the cake with her...in same back hugging position...
He makes her cut the cake...
He picks up a piece of cake...and puts in her mouth...
She is struggling to free herself from his grip...
But all goes in vain...
Bcz he is stronger than her...
He picks the cake from her hand...and puts in his mouth...

R: Happy Birthday once again...I Love You...
T: but i hate u...now leave me...
R: not now...

He picks up a gift from the table...
And gives it to her...

T: whats this???
R: are u blind babes?? Its a gift...
T: hehehe...not so funny...i know its a gift...but what is inside it??
R: open it...
T: tumne mjhe aise pkra hua hai jaise kisi rope se bandha ho...
R: hahaha...pkrna prta hai...wrna tm mera face dekhne ki nakaam koshish krogi...
T: nhi krongi pakka...
R: baby i know u better from urself...
T: hhhuuuhhh!!!! Idiot...
R: thanks for the compliment...
T: my pleasure moron...

He laughs a little...

T: hey are u crack???
R: yes in ur love...bye...

He leaves a peck on her cheek and hand...

T: what???

But he is gone...

T: ajeeb insan hai...God save me from him...

She goes to her home...
She comes to her room...
And opens the gift...
It is a beautiful pendant...

T: wowww...

With the letters "T" and "R" interwined in eachother...

T: R for Rishi??? No yr...he is a dumbo...lrta rhta hai mjhse hr waqt...wo kese hoskta hai...Khr soja Tanu...

She goes to sleep...

*morning*

*Tanu's birthday party*

Her mom invited her all friends...including Rishi...
Bcz she is unaware that TanShi are rivals...😉
Tanu had never wore any kurti or frok type dress...
She always wears pant shirt...
But when her mom insists her she wears a beautiful maxy...
Pink coloured furry maxy...
She is looking sooo gorgeous...

When she comes down...
Everyone is like...😲❤️

P: wowww...is this Tanu???
D: wohhh dude!!!! Hang on...i cant believe on my eyes...
V: me too dude...
A: yr tell me i m dreaming...
D: no u r not Ahana...

On the other hand...

Ab: yr Rishi...Tanu hai ye???
Mp: may be hm ghalat address pe agaye hn...
R: gadhon hm sahi address pe aye hn..pr ye sach mn meri Tanu hai???
Ab: ye lrki kb se ban gai???

Both Abhay and Manpreet laugh out loud sharing a high five...

R: oye stupids...chup kro...wo lrki hi hai...
Ab: han han wo to hme pta hai...

And they again laugh...

R: yr bs kro...
Mp: hmm...hmmm...ok...

Tanu comes down...

A: Tanu tu hmri hi dost hai na???
T: just shut up yr...mom ne zbrdsti pehna diya...
D: khr u r looking amazing...
T: ya ya whatever...ab mera mzk mt urao...
V: nope seriously u r looking gorgeous...
P: agreed...
T: bs kro guys...chalo champain kholte hn...😉
A: good idea...😛

They goes and Tanu opens the champain...and she became totally drunk...

D: Ufff Tanu tmne kitni zyada pee li hai...
T: areyyy nhi yr...mn thk hon...chal na party krte hn...

They all start dancing...Tanu comes and takes Rishi with her on the dance floor...and makes him to dance with her...

T: tmhe mere pas ana acha nhi lgta na...pr mjhe tmhe tang krna bht acha lgta hai...

She starts laughing...

R: just shut up and leave me...u r totally drunk...
T: no no never...ab hi to maza ayega...

She comes closer to him and he steps back...

T: kahan jarhe ho??? Dr gye...
R: Tanu leave me u r drunk...koi aisi hrkt mt krna k baad mn pachtana pre...
T: nhi pachtaongi...

She makes him dance with her...
She kisses his cheeks...which makes him shiver...
Rishi forcefully removes her hands and leaves the dance floor saying...

R: stupid girl...
T: dr gye mr. Rishi Singh Bedi...

But he doesnt gives her a damn...
Tanu in a drunken state leaves the hall...
Rishi sees her leaving and goes behind her...

Precap: Rishi saves Tanu once again in jungle...

thats it for now...hope u guys like it...
Do comment and hit the like...😉

PS: i will try to give updates daily on some requests...
Specialy my butterfly...
And thank u sooo much butterfly for promoting my story on insta...Love You...❤️
And also a big thanks to those who are on insta and loved this story...thanks for loving this story guys...😳
Keep reading..😳
Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Hayu well done yaar👍🏼. Wonderful story it is. Rishi n tanu dance wow😳 n tanu's birthday celebrated by rishi😳. Really very romantic😳. Plz update soon.
N r u on Instagram also. If yes so share ur instagram name id I will also want to follow u.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Hayu well done yaar 👍🏼. Wonderful story it is. Rishi n tanu dance wow😳 n tanu's birthday celebrated by rishi😳. Really very romantic😳. Plz update soon.

N r u on Instagram also. If yes so share ur instagram name id I will also want to follow u.

wo word lemon...😳
I will try to give update tomorrow...😳
Nope yr i m not on insta...
Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Tanshi i am clearly imagine all the seens.Tanu is in love too but accept nhi karti but rsb never leave any chance to show his love for her.Rsb ki sarafat 😆.Drunk tanu ke phich rsb kuch tu hoga hi 🤪 .
Waiting for next update foxi
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ab tu tujhe regular update dena hi hoga danger word jo use kiya jo ki Kasam fourms par band hai completely wo word use kiya.
teri story hai ki kamal all will obviously love it . Totally different concept.👏 i have no word to say how much i am loving it
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya1210

Tanshi i am clearly imagine all the seens.Tanu is in love too but accept nhi karti but rsb never leave any chance to show his love for her.Rsb ki sarafat 😆.Drunk tanu ke phich rsb kuch tu hoga hi 🤪 .

Waiting for next update foxi

wo word Aru...😳
Yup she is in love...and not accepting...but our RSB is RSB...😉
So true babes...😃
I will try to give tomorrow...but cant promise...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya1210

Ab tu tujhe regular update dena hi hoga danger word jo use kiya jo ki Kasam fourms par band hai completely wo word use kiya.

teri story hai ki kamal all will obviously love it . Totally different concept. 👏 i have no word to say how much i am loving it

hahahahha...smart girl...😉
Wo word babes for loving the story at this level...😳
Love u...❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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@Aru...
I will try to give update daily...
But cant promise due to busy schedule...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
Loved it 😳 I m in love. With this tanshi n ur writing hayu😳
I m really short of words👏⭐️...tanu's birthday celebrated by rishi without showing his face😳 it's tooo romantic n then their dance...Tanu kisses rishis cheek😲😳...hatts of to u Jaana...pls update sooon I m not able to wait for updates but have to wait I know😕...I m highly missing tanshi in these days but some of u n Insta members use to write story on tanshi it's such a big healer 😭😭.. .love love love❤️❤️👍🏼



PS : n give update "story time " also 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

hahahahha...smart girl...😉

Wo word babes for loving the story at this level...😳
Love u...❤️



Hahaha wo word use Kiya hayu 😆...ab to daily updates yipeee😳

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