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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#81

And this story...

U guys are taking it in a best flow...

Loved ur effort...

Keep it up sweeties...❤️

Great job cotton candy and lemon...👏

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Smita

@Smita_rawat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#82

@moni

I am fine dear..how r u?? Wo word for u..

Hum tumhe bhul nahi sakte..we r friends... freinds forever..

It's ok dear if u don't come to dis forum because of study..I understand...n all the best for ur exams👍🏼...After exams u may come again...I will waiting for u...

Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago

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Smita

@Smita_rawat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#83

@haya

Welcome back hayu...how r u??

I really missed u dear...n wo word for u appreciating us...

U fine na dear...kuch problem h kya??

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Gopika

@gopsss

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#84

Yuvi notices Rishi looking at Tanu... He turns back to see Tanu. N finds that she is angry...
Y(in teasing tone):Kya Rishi do you want to hear some song... Koi love song...
R:nhii... I was just looking her... Nothing like that...
Yuvi laughs louder n says
Y:I didn't ask u about it...
Just then rishi realised what he had said...
R(in his mind):what are you doing Rishi...
Rishi looks Tanu again through mirror... He notices that Tanu is anger... To calm her he says..
R:Shall we go to any ice cream parlour??
Not allowing others speak Ahana says in louder...
A:haan chale...
M:Khana ka naam sunne se hi moti ki energy increase ho gayi...
A:Sukde tu mat aana ice cream khane ko...
M:kyun?? Mn mera bhai k saath aaunga...
T:bas karo... Koi ice cream vice cream nhii chahiye... Straight go to house...
A:Dii...
R:lagta h madam bhot gusse me h...
A:haan... Yeh dii h naa...
T:nhii... Jaldi ghar chale..
But rishi drives towards ice cream parlour...
R:majority wants ice cream those who don't want pls stay inside d car. We all be back after having ice cream...
By seeing the board of ice cream parlour she badly wants ice cream... But her mind don't allows her...
All come out of the car... Tanu alone sits there...
All moves towards parlour... Tanu just sees them from there...
T:yeh konse log h... Mujhe akela chod kar ice cream khane gaye hen... Bas ek bar mujhe bula to mn aaungi na... Par kon bulate??
She looks outside with a hope but no one is noticing her...
Just then rishi stops there n turns backs... He comes towards the car... Tanu hopefully looks him...
He comes n opens the front door n takes his phone...
R(by hiding laughter):phone bhul gaya tha... Bye...
Tanu again disappointed...
Rishi goes inside...
Tanu simply looks him... After a while all comes out... Rishi is coming little front of them... Rishi reached near car he gets in... Rishi looks Tanu n says..
R:madam abhi bhi gusse me hi hai???
T:haa kisko farak padta??
R:mm... I think only ice cream can chill u...
T:to kyun nhii bulaya mujhe??
R:tum khud hi bola na... That u don't want ice cream...
T:hn par u can asked for one time... But u don't...
R:oh that's why u r angry...
T:haan... By saying this she looks other side...
Rishi gives her a packet that he had hide in his hand...
Tanu looks him surprisingly...
She touched it... It looked a little wet n cold..
R:open it...
Tanu opens it n sees its ice cream
T:mere liye???
R:haan tumhare liye...
Tanu thanks him n in sudden joy kisses him...
T:I was badly wanted this...
Rishi sits in sudden surprise...

PS:wo word lemon for late... As usual superb update dear... Loved it to the core... Jealous Tanu...

Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago

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Gopika

@gopsss

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#85

How r u guys??? Seeing Foxi n moni after long time... I'm fine guys... All d best Moni for ur exams... Hayu...when u join us??? I'm waiting for u... Thanks guys for ur comments... Love u...

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat
@haya
Welcome back hayu...how r u??
I really missed u dear...n wo word for u appreciating us...
U fine na dear...kuch problem h kya??

wo word lemon...

I m fine...

I m also missing u guys...😭

Ya some problems...u know na life problems...they shatter the person...🥱

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: gopsss
How r u guys??? Seeing Foxi n moni after long time... I'm fine guys... All d best Moni for ur exams... Hayu...when u join us??? I'm waiting for u... Thanks guys for ur comments... Love u...

i m fine dear...😳

Yar trying to join you guys soon...lets see...

Wo word for waiting...hope i wont let you wait for a long...

Love u unlimited...❤️

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Smita

@Smita_rawat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#88

Tanu enjoy her icecream...

Rishi sees her cuteness n smile...

Tanu sees him n asked..

Tanu- mujhe aise kyu dekh rhe ho?? Kabhi kisi ko icecream khate hue nahi dekha...

Rishi- dekha per aise khate hue nahi dekha..

Tanu- aise matlab??

Rishi- aise matlab itne cutely..

Tanu sees rishi surprisingly..

Rishi- woh mera matlab h..tum aise enjoy kr rhi ho na aise...

Everyone comes...

Yuvi- oh hello..hum wah per tumhara wait kr rh th or tum dono yah per akele me bethe ho..

Rishi- are nahi hum aa hi rh th..per tum to jante ho na is tanu ko ye to ane wali nahi th to me yahi icecream le aya..

Tanu sees rishi angerly..

Rishi- chalo chalte h..

Yuvi- are rhne de me tere liye icecream yahi le aya hu..ye le.. me drive kr lunga..

Manpreet- or bhai aap piche bethe rho..mujhe is moti k pass nahi bethna..

Ahana- mujhe bhi tere pass nahi bethna sukde..

They reached their home..

Yuvi- yah se tum dono chale jao..ok..hum plan k bare me kl discussion karenge..

Tanu- ok..

Rishi- ok tanu bye..

Tanu is angry..she is not reply to rishi..n when she closed the car door..rishi gets hurt..

Rishi- aahh..

Tanu sees rishi's hand...

Tanu- rishi I'm sorry...tum thik to ho na...kh chot lagi tumhe..

Tanu holds rishi's hand n crying...

Tanu- tumhe kya jarurt th mere piche ane ki...hath ander nahi rakh skte th..me to pagal hu..tum kyu aye mere piche...

Rishi is happy to see tanu concerned..

Tanu- kya hua tum kuch bol kyu nahi rh ho..kitna khun nikl rh h..yuvi bhayya chalo hospital chalte h...

Yuvi- ha chalte h...

Rishi- nahi me thik hu..ghar chalte h..

Tanu- nahi rishi hospital chalte h..dekho kitna khun nikla h..

Rishi- nahi ghar aa chuka h..ghar per hi dressing kr lenge..

Yuvi- r u sure rishi... tumhe ghar jana h..

Rishi- ha I am sure..

Tanu- I am sorry..meri wajah se tumhe..

Rishi puts fingers on tanu's lips..

Rishi- chup.. tumhari wajah se kuch nahi hua..meri galti th..

He wipes her tears...

Rishi- tum bahut badi pagal ho sach me..jb ladti ho to itna ki bahut gussa ata h..or pyaar krti ho to..

Rishi stops n thinking what he said...

Tanu is shocked..

Rishi- kh kho gayi..ab mera hath chodo..mujhe ghar jana h..

Tanu splits her scarf n ties rishi's hand..

Everyone sees n smile...

Ps: wo for late...n superb update cotton candy.. every part is mind blowing...

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Gopika

@gopsss

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#89

Rishi feels aww... While tied Rishi gets hurt...
R:Ouch!!!
Tanu gets teary hearing his pain... She blows his hand... It makes Rishi much happy...
T:Zor se laga???
R:nhii...
All stares TanShi n their love...
Just then Rishi's phone rings... Rishi takes phone... It was Neha's call...
R:Phir se...
All:kaun h??
R:wohi Neha...
All:take the call...
R:haan... I'm taking...
By saying this Rishi takes phone..
R:Hello...
N:hello jaan mn hu... Neha...
R:haan Neha bolo...
N:Rishi I got some glimpses of Pawan's plan...
Rishi with happy: Really???
While Rishi surprisingly says every one look at him with questioning expression...
Rishi says by holding phone.
R:Neha got some signs of Pawan's plan...
Everyone become happy...
All:what is it???
Rishi says that he will ask...
R:Neha bolo kya h uska plan??
N:Ab nhii bataungi... I will say it later...
R:kyun bad me?? Ab hi bolo...
N:phone se nhii bata paungi...
R:ok... Then where we should meet??
N:I will text u... Take care jaan...
R:ok...
Saying this Rishi hungs phone... He says to all
R:she said that she will tell me later directly...
All:oh ok...
T:u should inform me before u go... Otherwise she will irritate u...
Rishi says in his mind..
R:Correct it... Irritate u...not me...
All looks at Tanu n smiles...

PS:superb update lemon... Hats off u... U r really talented... How smartly u r writing...

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Smita

@Smita_rawat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#90

Yuvi- ab ghar chale..

Rishi- ha chalte h...ok bye tanu..

Tanu- bye..

Everyone go...

Khurana house ..

Tanu looks at moon.. thinking about rishi..n smile..she doesn't realise ahana come into the room..

Ahana sees tanu..

Ahana in her mind ye chand to roz dekti h per aj itni muskura kyu rhi h..

Ahana- rishi ke bare me soch rhi h..chand me kahi rishi to nahi dikh rh..

Tanu is lost so much.. that's why she said yes ..

Tanu- ha..

Ahana- ( surprising) kya sach me??

Tanu- mene kh nahi..tune galat suna h..

Ahana- dii..tu palat mat..tune abhi abhi ha kh th..

Tanu- nahi ahana..tu galat samaz rhi h..dekh ab bahut raat ho gayi h chal goodnight..

Ahana holds her hand..

Ahana- dii..tu kb tk sach se dur bhagegi..

Tanu- tu kya kh rhi h mujhe kuch samaz nahi aya..

Ahana- tu kyu nahi man leti ki tu rishi se pyaar krti h..

Tanu- aisa kuch nahi h ahana..tu bhi pta nahi kya kya soch leti h..

Ahana- dii..me kuch galat nahi soch rhi hu..tu hi bta use chot lagti h to dard tujhe kyu hota h..or tujhe chot lagti h to use..tere liye wo adhiraat me tujhe dekhne aa jata h..or jb koi ladki uske kareeb jane ki koshish krti h to tu uska muh todne ke liye tayaar ho jati h..dii ye pyaar nahi to kya h..

Tanu- (confused) nahi ahana aisa kuch nahi h..dekh ab bahut raat ho gayi h..soja good night..

Ahana- dii..tu so mt mujhe tujhse baat krni h..dii sun

Tanu acts sleep..

Bedi house...

Rishi also looks at moon..n thinks about tanu..n her antics...

That time manpreet enter into the room..n sees rishi..

Manpreet- bhai..aap is chand me kya dekh rhe ho??

Rishi lost in so much.. Rishi said unknowingly..

Rishi- tanu ko..

Manpreet- kya bhai sach me..tanu dikh rhi h chand me..

Rishi- mene aisa kb kh...

Manpreet- bhai juth mat bolo..abhi mene apne kan se suna..apne tanu kh..

Rishi- nahi chote..mene to ye kh th..ki tanu se baat krni h kl ke baare me..

Manpreet- nahi bhai ap juth bol rh ho..me chota hu na isliye ap mujhe hamesha pagal banate ho..

Rishi- are mere pyaare chote..mene aisa kb kiya..

Manpreet- acha ap tanu se pyaar krte ho..per mujhe kabhi nahi batate..per me hamesha apne man ki baat batata hu.. chalo mujhe apse baat hi nahi krni..bye..

Rishi- are chote sun..sun to..naraz ho gaya..

Ps: wo word for u cotton candy..wo for appreciating me..n nice update dear.. every time u fabulous..plz update soon..n love u