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Posted: 6 years ago
#91
U guys r doing great👏...love each update❤️...keep updating guys ...love to read
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Posted: 6 years ago
#92
Wo word for u vinushi..why r u not join us again...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#93
M:hn mn aapse naraz hu...
R:kyun chote... It's true...
M:nhi bhai aap mujhse kuch nhi bataega...
R:mn sach keh raha hu chote...
M:Aapko Tanu se pyaar nhi??
R:nhi...
M:to woh sab kadki ki tarah h??
R:nhi bilkul nhii... Woh baaki ladkiyon ki tarah nhi... Wo thodi alag hi h...
M:matlab???
R:matlab ye h ki baaki ladkiyon mujhse shaadi karne k liye mera peecha pagalon ki tarah aati h... Par Tanu...
M:par Tanu...?
R:par Tanu hamesha mujhse ladti thi...
M:ladti thi matlab abhi nhii???
Rishi says unknowingly with a smile
R:abhi bhi ladti h...par I am not that discomfort that I felt earlier...
M:matlab aapko kuch kuch ho gaya???
Just then Rishi realises what he had said...
R:nhii...
M:bhai yeh discomfort se comfort hona pyaar ki nishani hai... U r in love with Tanu...
Saying this manpreet goes from d room...
Rishi stands there by thinking about Tanu n their moments..
R:kya sach me I'm in love with Tanu...kya yeh pyaar h???
Thinking so Rishi goes to bed...
In Khurana house...
Ahana is still thinking about Tanu...
A:how will I find d truth... Dii aur Rishi k beech mein kuch h... Pyaar h... How can I find it???
By thinking so ahana goes to bed...
Ahana looks at Tanu n realises that she is in deep sleep...
Ahana drops a glass by mistake..
By hearing glass's voice... Tanu stands up n asks...
T: Rishi???
A:Rishi???
T:hn... Uski awaaz
A:mn??? Uski awaaz??? Woh ek glass tha dii... Rishi nahi... Whenever we dream about someone we feels that they r around us...
Tanu unknowingly says.
T:it's my mistake by hearing a glass sound I felt that Rishi came to meet me...
A:tujhe milne???
Just then Tanu realises what she said...
T:nhii... Aise kuch nhii...
A:Dii... U can't hide anything from me... Tera chehra se achhi tarah dikhta h ki... U r in love with Rishi...
T:par ahana...
A:koi par var nhii... U r in love with him...
By saying this ahana goes to sleep...
Tanu stands there...by thinking Rishi...
T:kya sach me I'm in love with Rishi...
Ahana says with a smile:haan dii... Hope u get it...
Tanu smiles n hides her face...
T:Ahana...

PS:wo word lemon... Loved d update to the core dear... U rocked it... Fabulous... Love u too...
Gilehri dear u too join us naa...
Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#94
Tanu sees ahana is in deep sleep..she goes near to window n talking to moon..
Here rishi is also talking with moon..
Tanu- aap to sb jante h na..ahana jo kh rhi h..kahi wo sach to nahi h..kahi mujhe pyaar to nahi h rishii..n she stop..
Rishi turned..when he turn he here tanu's voice..Rishi shocked n turn..
Rishi- tanu ki awaaz..
Rishi search everywhere..n looks at chand..
Rishi- ye awaaz mujhe kaise sunai di..kahi mujhe pyaar hogaya h tanu..se..
When he said her name tanu here rishi's voice..
Tanu shocked n search everywhere..
Tanu- tu pagal to nahi ho gayi h..ye sb ahana k karan hua h..isne hi mere dimaag me ye sb bhara h..chal chupachap soja tanu.. kahi rishi ki awaaz ke sath wo dikhne bhi na lage..
Rishi- ye sb kya ho rh h..tanu ko call kru kya usne sach me bhi mujhe yaad kiya ho..
He calls to tanu n cuts the call..
Rishi- pagal ho kya rishi..raat ke 2 baje usko call kr rh h..wo so rhi hogi..abhi me use utha deta to wo mujhe chodti nahi..soja rishi beta..
Next day..
Neha is happy n sings a song..
Bani- aj tujhe kya hua h..kyu besura gaa rhi h..mera matlab h ga ga ke hamare kaan ke parde faad rhi h..
Neha- mamma me itna bura gati hu kya?? Chalo hato mujhe apse baat nahi krni..
Bani- ohh..meri lata mangeshkar..acha sorry kya baat h bta..
Neha- mumma mene rishi ko pta liya h..me use pawan ka plan bata dungi..or wo meri side ho jayega..
Bani slaps on her shoulder..
Bani- tera dimaag to kharab nahi ho gaya..tu janti h na wo pawan kitna khatarnak h..use pta chala na ki tune uski pol kholi h to wo tujhe chodega nahi..
Neha- kya jb dekho tb mujhe marte rhte ho..phle puri baat to sun lo..me rishi ko pawan k plan nahi batane wali..me to use koi bhi kahani suna dungi..taki wo mujh pe biswas kre or us tanu se dur rhe..
Bani- sach me aj to tune mujhe rula hi diya.. bilkul mujh pe gayi h...hai ki nahi..
N both laughs

Rishi is sleeping..n in his dream he sees tanu..n babbles..
Rishi-tanu tanu...
Tanu calls to rishi..
Rishi awakes with fear..
Rishi- kon h kon h..ohh phone h.. tanu?? Tanu mujhe kyu call kr rhi h..
Rishi picks the call..
Rishi- hello..
Tanu- rishi..tum kabhi nahi sudhroge na..
Rishi- (in his mind) isko pta chal gaya kya ki me ise dekh rh th sapne me..per kaise?
Rishi- dekho meri galati nahi h..koi kisi ko kabhi bhi dekh sakta h..aisa waisa kuch nahi h..
Tanu- tum kya bol rhe ho.. tumhara dimag to thikane pe h na..mene tumhe call kiya th taki tum neha se pawan k plan pta karo..per tum ho ki pta nahi kya kya bol rhe ho..
Rishi takes deep breathing..
Rishi- (in his mind) mujhe laga meri pol khul gayi..
Tanu- hello r u there??
Rishi- ha ha..me sun rh hu..me usse baat krke plan k pta kr lunga ok..no worry..
Tanu- ok..waise tum kya kh rhe th ki tum kisi ko kabhi bhi dekh sakte ho..kisko dekh rhe ho tum..
Rishi-(said rapidly) tumhe.. oh no ye mene kya kh diya..

PS: wo word for u cotton candy..n ur part was awesome..Rishi n manpreet and tanu n ahana part is superb..plz update soon...n wo word for late.. because of my illness I was late..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#95
T:mujhe???
Rishi becomes tensed... N he says...
R:woh...woh...woh...mn plan bana rha tha...you are in that plan...
T:konsa plan???
R:plan against Pawan...
T:oh ok... Don't be late... Today is d day Neha tells u about Pawan...
R:hn... I'm ready... Tum bhi mere saath ayegi na???
T:kahan??
R:Neha k pass...
Tanu answers promptly...
T:zaroor...i will come... Otherwise that Neha...
Tanu said it with a little anger...
R:are u jealous???
Just then Tanu realises what she had said..
T:jealous... Mn?? Kyun??
R:then why u said in anger...
T:I'm not anger...
R:par...
Tanu( says in mind):Tanu tune yeh kya keh diya??? Yeh Rishi abhi nhii chodta... Uper se tu bhi usse tease kiya... Ab kya karoon...
T:Rishi someone is coming... I will call u back... Get ready soon... I will come...
R:arey... Answer batao pehle...
Tanu cuts d call... Rishi stands there doubtfully...
R:abhi usko kya hua??? Why she is talking in weird...
Saying this Rishi goes to fresh...
T:anyhow u bach gayi... Aage aise karna mat Tanu...
Tanu goes to Ahana n says that she is going to meet Rishi... Ahana gives some instructions to Tanu...then Tanu leaves...
In restaurant
T:Ab tak Rishi nhi aaya???
R:main aa gaya...
T:why r u late??
R:yeh kya h Tanu... U r asking me questions like a teacher... Main time pe hi hu...
T(with a smile):hnn... I will be there... Neha will come soon...
By saying this Tanu moves from there Neha comes..
N:hii jaan...
R:aa gayi...
N:kya hua gusse me ho??
R:nhi bilkul nhii... Ok say about Pawan's plan..
N:itni jaldi???
R:actually today I have a meeting that's why I am in hurry...
N:ok... I will say...
R:jaldi batao...
Neha tells him something n Rishi's phone was connected to tanu's ... So that Tanu can hear all those...
Tanu gets shocked hearing all these from Neha... As Neha completed telling...she says Rishi that she wants to go for shopping... Neha leaves... Rishi is still shocked by hearing Neha... Rishi instructs Tanu to come to him...Tanu does so...
R:Tanu... Their plan...
T:maine sab kuch suna hai... Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai... Pawan doing all these for only marry me???
R:don't believe this Neha fully...
T:matlab kisi aur kaam k liye woh mujhe aur mera parivar use kar raha hai??
R:hn... Uska plan aur hi hoga... Par I will act that I believed Neha fully... Then she will share all this to me...
T:I don't want to marry him...
Rishi answers promptly...
R:I will not allow u to get married to him...
T:kya...
R:woh.. Woh... Actually he is not a good guy... I will make him marry to Neha... Uske liye Neha se behtar koi bhi nahi hai...
Both TanShi laughs...
R:aur haan... Be serious...
T:aur u should try to get informations from Neha n should share me too...
R:ok...chale...
T:kahan???
R:office or kahan...
T:I forgot it... Haan chale..
Both TanShi leaves restaurant n sits in car...

PS:superb part Lemon... Rishi n Tanu phone convo n moon part...😳... Loved it to d core... Sometimes I too was late... That's not a problem... N how u feel now??? R u ok??? Get well soon dear!!!...
Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#96
@gopika
I am ok now...thanks for concerned dear..lov u
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Posted: 6 years ago
#97
iss story to day by day aur bhi interesting ho raha hai,
kya likhte ho aaplog 👏 👏
every part is awesome ❤️
bas is neha ko mujhe bilkul
pasand nehi😡
keep continue... 😊

@smita kya hua appko?app thik hai ab?
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Both sits into the car...tanu thinks about pawan n tensed...
Rishi sees that and click in front of her eyes...
Rishi- kya hua?? Kh khoyi ho?? Tension me lag rhi ho..
Tanu- actually..me soch rhi hu agar neha ne jo kh wo sach h to pawan mujhse shaadi kyu krna chahta h?? Aisa kya dikha usko mujh me??
Rishi- kya dikha matlab..koi andha hi hoga jise tum achi nahi lagogi..samazi..
Tanu- mera matlab h ki me to itni simple hu to use aisa kya dikha..
Rishi- what do u mean simple?? Tum khoobsurat ho..jawan ho..or sabse badi baat intelligent ho..aisi ladki milti h kahi... tumhari ankhain.. tumhare gal.. tumhare hoth..tumhare bal..jb tum hasti ho to aisa lagta h ki tumhe dekhta rhu..tumhari kali ankhain inme kho jane k man krta h.. jb tum apne silky silky bal kaano ke piche krti ho na tb or bhi khubsurat lagti ho..or tum khti ho kon pasand karega tumhe..
Rishi is lost in so much he doesn't realise what is he say..
Tanu stares to rishi..n raise her eyebrows..
Rishi-(in his mind rishi beta aj to tu bura fasa tere man ki feelings apne man me nahi rakh sakta th.. sb bta diya) kya hua aise kyu dekh rhi ho??
Tanu- tum kya kh rh th??
Rishi- me kuch bhi to nahi kh rh th..me to bta rh th ki pawan ko tum me kya acha laga..
Tanu- oh..per mujhe to kuch or laga..
Rishi- kuch or kya..tum bhi na her time meri baat k galat matlab nikalti ho..
Tanu- acha to tum itne shy kyu ho rh ho..or tumhari sansh kyu phool rhi h..
Rishi- kha kuch bhi to nahi h..tum bhi na dekho ab mujhse or koi sawaal mat puchna me drive kr rh hu mujhe wah dyan dene do..
Tanu gives smile n her mind per jo bhi ho jb tumne meri itni tareef ki...mujhe bahut acha laga..jaise me tumse tareef sunna chahti th..

Here neha comes their house bani asking about rishi n her meeting..
Bani- kya hua..tune rishi ko apni bato me phasaya ki nahi..
Neha- ha mamma mene use bta diya ki pawan tanu se shaadi krna chahta h..or ab rishi mujhpe biswas krta h.
Bani hits to neha.
Neha- kya mamma..kyu mara..
Bani- pagal ho gayi h kya..tune pawan ka tanu se shaadi k plan bta diya..ab rishi ye plan pe pani pher dega..duffer kahi ki..phir kr lena rishi se shaadi..
Neha- are mamma..har bar puri baat sune bina mar dete ho..agar me pawan ka adha plan nahi batati to rishi ko sak ho jata..to wo mujh se waise hi dur ho jata..per pawan apne plan ko jb execute krega..tb rishi mujh pe biswas karega..
Bani- ohh ye to mene socha hi nahi..tu to ek number ki lomdi nikli..yah pawan k sath wah rishi k sath..per agar rishi ne shadi nahi hone di to..
Neha- are mamma hum h na..aap pawan or swati or me..

Ps: wo word for u cotton candy and moni..I am fine moni.. migraine problem th but now I am feeling better..thanks for concerned me..n all the best for ur exams..
N well update cotton candy..Rishi n tanu convo..tanu jealousy is superb... every time u rocked dear..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#99
Keep it up guys...😳
U guys took this story to the skies...❤️
Very well done...👏
Sorry for not cooperating...but i m busy...
And u know i dont even get time to update my stories...
But...u guys did an awesome job...
Whenever i get time i read this story...😳
I started this story...but lemon and cotton candy this story is urs...😳
Bcz story us hi ki hoti hai jiska effort hota hai...and all effort is urs...😳
If my effort in this story was 2% then ur effort was 98%...
Keep it up...👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
Bani:haan hum h na!!!
Saying this they gives high five n laughs...
TanShi reached their office...
Tanu was looking outside when Rishi said
R:pahunch gaye...
T:kahan?
R:office aur kahan...
Both TanShi comes out from car...
Just then they see Pawan standing there...
Tanu gets tensed n says...
T:oh god Pawan...
Rishi's eyes becomes red in anger...
R:how dare he is to come here...
Pawan comes near them...
P:Tanu...i want to talk to u personally...
T:Pawan...woh...
Rishi gets more angry n says
R:Tanu will not come with u...
P(with anger):Tanu I'm talking to u... Not anyone else...
T:I cant come with u Pawan... It's my office time... I should do my works...
Pawan gets angry hearing Tanu...but he controls himself...
P:par Tanu... It's important...
T(in her mind):oh god... Main ab kya karun...kya kahun... Pls mujhe madad karo...
T:Pawan...
Rishi cuts her n says...
R:already she had said u na...now leave her...
P:Tanu...
Just then Rishi holds her had n takes her to the office... Pawan stands there in anger... He stares Rishi... Suddenly Pawan starts laughing...
P:my plan is working out successfully... Bechara Rishi... Us ko pata hi nahi ki mera prime intension usko barbad karna h...
TanShi reached Rishi's cabin...
Still Rishi is holding her hand...
T:Rishi...
R:mm... Tumhe lagta h kya mn galat kar raha hun???
T:nhii... Tum mere liye yeh sab kar rahe ho...
R:haan main yeh sab tumhare liye kar raha hu... Kyunki mn tumse...pya...
Just then Rishi realised what he was saying...
Tanu looks him shockingly...
T:tum mujhse kya???
R:mn...mn...woh tumhara talent se pyaar karta hun... Tum bahut talented ho na... Isiliye...
R(in him mind):Rishi ye tu kya kiya...
T(in her mind):I felt...oh Tanu tu yeh kya soch rhi ho??
R:Tanu ab tum apne kam karo... Do that presentation for next project... N in evening we should discuss about our plan...
T:ok Rishi...
Tanu turns to go just then she realises Rishi is still holding her hand...
R:jao...
T:Rishi...
R:ab kya?
T:mera hath...
Only then he notices that n he leaves in sudden jerk...
R:oh I'm sorry...
T:mm...
Tanu leaves...
PS:wo word for late lemon... I was suffering from terrible head ache... That's why I became late... U rocked it dear... Neha n her master mind... Aww cute TanShi❤️...
Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago

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