Tanshi ff: Mile ho tum humko part-44updated pg 55 - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Omg pari i wish cv k dimagh bhi aisa chalta hota and you rocked with your updates mood ake dum cool kr diya please update sooner buht buht maza a rha hai and thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Super update pari.Love both parts.So emotional and heart touching.Kash show mai bhi kuch asia hota.Love it thanks for pm.
Waiting for more updates.Thanks for pm
Edited by arya1210 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: arya1210

Super update pari.Love both parts.So emotional and heart touching.Kash show mai bhi kuch asia hota.Love it thanks for pm.

Waiting for more updates.Thanks for pm

Welcome Okk tell how many more u want for today
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

Omg pari i wish cv k dimagh bhi aisa chalta hota and you rocked with your updates mood ake dum cool kr diya please update sooner buht buht maza a rha hai and thanks for pm

😊 two more on the way
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari454

😊 two more on the way

really yipeee 🥳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
Part-9
In bedi house
All are on dinning table and ahana is serving. She is happy and made special dinner.
Bij:Kya bat h Ahana aaj tu kuch jyada hi khush hai
Ah:Ha biji jo mujhe aaj pta chla h na agar aapko pta chalega na toh aap bhi khush ho...
Ahana in mind(oppss ye maine kya bol diya kahi inhe saq ho gya toh)So she tries to divert the topic
Ah:Are Manpreet Rishi kahan hai Voh kyu nhi aya abh tak
Ri:Pta nhi kahan chale gaye h bhai phone bhi receive nhi kar rahe
Bij: Or tu yahan khane ka Mazza le rha h pta nhi kahan hoga Rishi.
They hear a voice i am here Bediz
Rishi appeared with a bottle on his hand(he was upset so he drunk too much and is full talli)
Everyone get up in shock
Raj:Rishi tune phir pee
Ah:John tanya ko room mein leke jao
Tanya goes to her room
Rano goes to Rishi and show her concern
Ri:Dekhi gaon walo dhyan se dekho iss aurat ko ye meri maa h(Rishi laughs) Meri maa Jo meri khushi nhi chahti barbaad kar diya inhone mujhe.Mere pyar se dur kar diya kiske liye Voh bhi is kaali si gandi si chipkali k liye. Aur chipkali ke bhi kya kahne 7 saal se is se har koi nafrat hi karta phir bhi ye yahi chipki hui h jane ka naam hi nahi leti.
Raj:Rishi puttar sambhal apne aap ko
Ri(in pain):Papaji aap bhut ache ho ek aap hi the is ghar main jo meri tanuja ka dhyan rakhte the aur kisi ne nahi rakha maine bhi nahi.Bhut dard diya maine usse bhut dard. Rishi loses his balance but mp holds him and take him to room.
Raj worried for Rishi.
Here tanuja is also upset
Na:Mom aapko papa ki yaad aa rahi hai.
Ta:Nahi aise koi bat nhi natasha
Na:Nahi mom aap jab papa ko yad karte ho toh aise hi sad hote ho.
Ta:Tumhe kaise pta
Na:Uss raat maine aapko dekha tha
(Tanuja tries her best to control herself so that natz can't see her pain.So after sleeping natz tanuja usually cries by remembering.But one night natasha wakes in middle of night and watches her crying badly but doesn't say anything)
Tanuja hugs her tightly and let the emotions come out.That night natz takes care of tanuja and make tanuja sleep in her lap(how innocent natu is just like tanu at that moment)
Next morning tanuja wakes up early and found herself sleeping in natz lap.(just imagine the hotel scene of tanshi but with natja)
Tanuja smiles kitni pyari aur smjhdar h natasha.She makes her sleep comfortably.
Here TANYA comes with lemon juice for Rishi
Rishi is sitting holding his head bcz of hangover. Tanya gives lemon juice to him.
Rishi smiles and hugs him.
(Must say these lil girls are taking care of their parents really well lucky parents)
Scenc shifts to school
Tanya is very upset and natz sees her and asked the reason.Tanya tells about netra.
fb(Netra is touturing tanya for accepting her as mother)
Na(bijlii hai):Thik hai tanya tu aaj us netra aunty ko park main leke aa m unhen sabak sikha deti hun.
SCENCE DIRECTLY SHIFTS TO PARK IN EVENING
Tanya comes to park with netra and natasha is already in park with gaury.She send gaury to bring icecream.(she is so smart)
Natasha greets netra and gives a gift to her.
Netra smiles and open the gift.As soon as she open the gift netra gets a punch on her nose. 🤣
Netra cries in pain.
Na:Ohh sorry aunty galat gift aa gya ye sab same packing ki wajah se hua.
Ne:Koi baat nahi beta.
Na:Aunty aap us bench pe kyun nahi baith jati aapko acha legaga.
Netra goes and sits on the bench.
Na:Tanya chal mere sath aaj teri is netra aunty ko bhut preshan karte hai
Natasha came with full preparation.She takes some crackers and put them in between netra's feets and light them. NETRA jumps in shock and shouts bomb bomb 🤣 .And runs from there natasha throws kele ka chillka and netra slips and muh ke bal giri that too in mud. 🤣
Precap:Tanya tells everyone about natasha


Hope u guys enjoy it

its dinner time be back in some time with another update.
Edited by pari454 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Nice update... Both Rano n Netra deserves that... Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Divya333

Nice update... Both Rano n Netra deserves that... Waiting for next update

ye toh bas trailer tha jab Rishi aur tanuja ko pata chlega tab Mazza aega
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
Wow 🤣 .Pari mara pait dard karne laga haste haste.Kya haal kiya natz ne chipkali ka aur rishi kali si chipkali🤣.It was super funny.Galidi update do na yaar.Can't wait anymore

Ps:it remind me something.Manazza kuch yaad aaya😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#60
Nice emotional and hilarious update...thanks for PM...really appreciate..

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