Tanshi ff: Mile ho tum humko part-44updated pg 55 - Page 8

Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

oh aj Kal mein bhi thora free ho thanks to smog sub ki vaat lagaye hui hai😆 i am from Lahore and i join this forum this year from Feb i think i really like this forum now that's become my habits to visit this forum daily and made many friends here especially Aru my best friend my small sis .nice to meet you too pari and cv torture us and we then we kasamiams use ffs apni frustrations nikalty hai us mein poor we 😆

agreed this fourm is really good
Ya i too feel good to meet you.

We only watch naughty and funny manshi
Not properly watch tanuja(tanu) ahana in that avatar.What say if i introduce tanuja and ahana like manshi.

Originally posted by: pari454

Actually I am enjoying writing it.
I also read that ff that was awesome inspired by that

Originally posted by: pari454

We only watch naughty and funny manshi
Not properly watch tanuja(tanu) ahana in that avatar.What say if i introduce tanuja and ahana like manshi.

Originally posted by: arya1210

Happy to know that u read the ff.😊 Rano aur netra ki band bajane mai hamesa maja aata hai.

U are enjoying writing are we are enjoying reading

Badi solid band bajayi thi and if that was shown on tv then toh phir hansh hansh pta nhi kya haal hota.

Nice update Pari ...enjoyed reading it... Waiting for next update

Part-11
Next day
Shreya gives the details of Bediz to tanuja.
Ta:Thnx Shreya let I check this.
She goes through the details but something makes her angry and she leaves.
An auction is going on of a company.Rishi and his biggest rival are also present there.Both want to have that company so they are trying their best.In the process the price reaches much higher. Rishi is about to say his next bid but tanuja holds his hand and take him from that place.Mp also follows them.
Ri(a lil bit angry):Tanuja kya kar rahi Voh company mujhe har hal main...
Ta(shouts):Chup ek dum chup tum itni badi laparwahi kaise kar sakte ho tum se ye umeed nahi thi
Ri:Are janti ho us chopra ke bacche (his rival) ne mujhe challenge diya thi ki Voh ye auction mujhe hara ke rahega
Ta:Aur mr Rishi Singh Bedi challenge jeetne ke liye kuch bhi kr sakte hai
Ri:Haye main mar jawa gud khake kitne ache se janti ho mujhe
Ta(scolds him):Ha main hi nahi Voh chopra bhi ye baat janta hai isliye uksa rha tha tumhe.Rishi jo company tum khreedne jaa rahe the na Voh bhut loss main jaa rahi hai. Main is company ko free main bhi na loon.Par tum toh tum ho usne uksaya tumhe aur tum aa gaye yahan.
Ri:Kya par ta...
Ta:Bas karo meri bat suno.She continues scolding him like a wife and Rishi is enjoying that and he almost lost in her.(Main toh rang main rang chuka plays in background)
Tanuja sees him smiling so she leaves from there but Rishi is still standing there as it is.
Mp comes to him and bring him in senses by tapping his face.
Mp:Bhai chali gayi apki gharwali apni duniya se bahar aao 😉 Bhai vase aap se itni badi galti kaise ho gayi Voh acha hua tanuja ne bacha nhi varna hun toh barbaad ho jate
Ri:Ha us chopra ke bacche ne mujhe khub uksa diya toh maine is company ki detail nhi nikali.Tanuja hamesha se meri saviour rahi hai aur aaj phir se usne bacha liya.Chal aaja us chopra ki halat dekhte hai
They both go there and finds chopra in very terrible condition bcz he is in big loss.They enjoys his situation.
Here in bedi house biji is almost to eat something kept on dinning table but Ahana stops her.
Ah:Biji aap ye mat khao ye netra ke liye hai special
Biji:Aaj bada pyar aa rha hai tujhe us chipkali pe
Ah:Biji uski vajah se meri behn mujhse dur hai uspe pyar nahi gussa ata hai.
Bij:Toh phir ye khana tu netra ke liye ko leke jaa rahi hai
Ah:Biji maine isme bhar bhar ke julab milaya hai Voh ise khayegi aur phir pure din bas andar bahar
Ahana and biji do hifi.
Netra comes there
Ah:Are netra tum itni der se bhukhi ho na ye lo ye maine tumhare liye hi banaya hai. Netra smiles and thinks ahana bhi sayad mujhse dosti karna chahti hai.So she eats happily without thinking.
After some time she feels gudgud in her tummy and rushes to bathroom
Biji:Le ahana kar diya tere julab ne tera kaam ab ye chipkali toh gayi.
Netra comes out but again gudgud start and she again to washroom. And netra is andar bahar andar bahar.Beji and ahana enjoy and laughs.
Rishi decided to meet natz so he goes to school.But its still one hour left for school's full break.
She directly goes to her class but found natz standing outside.He asks kya hua aap bahar ko ho
Na: Punishment mili hai
Ri:Kyu
Na:Main andar bor ho rahi thi toh maine kisi ladke ko preshan kita aur teacher ne mujhe bahar nikal diya.
Rishi laughs.
Ri:Kya aap mere sath thodi der baat karoge
Na:Okk mr handsome chalo
they leave and go to garden.
Precap:Rishi's honest confession to tanuja in his drunken state.




PS:no more new misunderstandings cvs ne pehle hi bhut raita faila diya tha.

Nice update Pari...I want Rano also to go under such torture...Dont spare her...waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Divya333

Nice update Pari...I want Rano also to go under such torture...Dont spare her...waiting for next update

Thnx
For sure with Rano too.

Lovely update pari.Sub milke chipkali ka band baja rahe hai.She deserve it.Keep it up.