Tanshi ff: Mile ho tum humko part-44updated pg 55 - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: arya1210

Wow🤣.Pari mara pait dard karne laga haste haste.Kya haal kiya natz ne chipkali ka aur rishi kali si chipkali🤣.It was super funny.Galidi update do na yaar.Can't wait anymore


Ps:it remind me something.Manazza kuch yaad aaya😆

really pari you nailed it pait dukh rha hai haste haste good going or Karo torture us chipkali ko come on we are with you 👏 🤣 🤣
Ps:Aru kuch yaad Aya mere ko bhi aya I can't control my lafter how can we forget that picnic ff😉 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62
Back with another one
Part-10
Netra cries. Natasha gives her hand to netra and netra holds it she is mostly gets up but natu leaves her hand netra loses balance and again falls.
Na:Are aunty mera hath fisal gaya tha and winks on tanya.This make tanya smile.
Netra still in mud and natasha throws a toy chipkali(chipkali chipkali se dar gayi🤣 )on her and she shouts and runs from there.Tanya and natasha does hifi and laughs on her situation. Tanya hugs natu and says Thnx.
Na:Thnx mat bol tanya ye sab toh mere liye kuch bhi nhi tha agar ye tumhe phir preshan kare toh mujhe bata dena Okk.Tanya nods in yes.
Here gauri came with icecream and gives to both girls. Tanya happily leaves from there
In bedi house biji rajji and Ahana are sitting in hall just then manshi arrive and ask about tanya. Tanya comes with netra and said m yahan hun papa.
Everyone looks at them seeing netra's condition they start laughing.Netra leaves from there rano also follows her.
Rishi looks at tanya who is smiling.
Ri:Aap kahan gaye the aur netra ki ye halat kaise hui.
Tanya tells everything about natasha.All Bediz laughs badly on this.
Tan:M jati hun fresh hone
Raj:Ye natasha kitni pyari bachi h aur naughty bhi.
Bij:Hogi kyu nahi meri tanuja ki beti jo h
Raj:Kya biji tanuja ki beti par aap ko kaise pta
Bij:Are m mili thi usse school main h na ahana
Mp:Bhai naughty h bhut aur smart bhi
Ri:Hmm hogi kyu nahi aakhir Rishi Singh Bedi ki beti hai
All are shocked hearing this
Bij:Teri beti tujhe kaise pta
Ri:Tanuja ne khud bataya
They feels happy and wants to meet her.
Ri: Don't worry Bediz natasha aur tanuja bhut jaldi is ghar main honge aur ye mera vadha h aapse
Mp hugs him and said bhai m chachu ban gaya m bhut khush hun main aapki help karunga
Raji and bijii:hmara Aashirwad tumhare sath h.
In Tanuja's house
Natasha tells everything to tanuja and sandy(but she forgets netra's name). Tanuja laughs a lot and said Tum ek din mera naam zaroor roshan karogi.Tanuja asks about the name of lady she then said chipkali jaise aunty thi aur chipak bhi bhit rahi thi isliye chipkali. (maa beti dono ek jaisi)
Sa:Tum hass rahi ho ise danto bhut bhigad liya tumne ise tanu
Na:Nanu m bhigadne walo main se nhi bhigadne walo main se hun
Na&Ta(together):So take a chill pill nanu
Sandy hits his head with hand ye dono nahi sudharne wali
Na:Agar hum sudhar gaye toh aap bor ho jaego nanu kyunki phir aapko humain daantne ka mauka nahi milega.Tanuja and natz does hifi
In netra's room
Netra gets out from washroom and rano asked her what happened
Netra tells everything
Ra:Kya par ye sab kisne kiya
Ne:Mujhe nahi pta kisne kiya par tanya ne aaj pehli bar mujhse ache se baat ki Voh sayad like karne lagi h mujhe
Ra:Wow agar aisi bat h toh bhut acha hai(how stupid is netra baccho ne bhi pagal bna diya)
Next day
In Tanuja's office.
Ta:Shreya mujhe Bediz ki har details chahiye unhone pichle dino main kahan paisa invest kiya h aage kahan karne vaale h sab information
Sh:Par kyu di
Ta:Hum unke sath collaborate kar rahe h toh saari info honi chahiye hamare pass.Kab tak ho jayega.
Sh:Di kal m aapko saari info de dungi
Ta:Thnx Shreya.Vaise Shreya tum yahan akeli rehti ho na
Sh:Haa di
Ta:Tum agar aaj free ho toh ghar aa jao dinner ke liye natasha ko bhi acha lagega
Sh:Okk di I'll be there
In school tanya tells natasha that everyone is impressed by her
Na:Vaise ab us chipkali jaise aunty ne tumhe preshan toh nhi kiya
Ta:Abhi tak toh nahi
Na:Agar kare toh bata dena m phir kuch kar dungi.
Both laughs

Precap:Tanuja scolds Rishi for being careless for work



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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Achelvi

Nice emotional and hilarious update...thanks for PM...really appreciate..

Welcome and Thnx for appreciating
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: arya1210

Wow🤣.Pari mara pait dard karne laga haste haste.Kya haal kiya natz ne chipkali ka aur rishi kali si chipkali🤣.It was super funny.Galidi update do na yaar.Can't wait anymore


Ps:it remind me something.Manazza kuch yaad aaya😆

Actually I am enjoying writing it.
I also read that ff that was awesome inspired by that
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Another superb fantastic update truely enjoyed it 🤣 👍🏼Kal or aj k silent forum ko updates sy happy krny ka shukriya keep it up 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

really pari you nailed it pait dukh rha hai haste haste good going or Karo torture us chipkali ko come on we are with you 👏 🤣 🤣
Ps:Aru kuch yaad Aya mere ko bhi aya I can't control my lafter how can we forget that picnic ff😉 🤣

U want more torture Okk i will do it ab ghar se bahar ja nhi sakti kuch din (i m from north india and it is highly polluted nowadays )so let do this
Aur maine ye picnic raat ko padhi thi and i can't control my laughter at that time par shukar h i was alone at that time.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

Another superb fantastic update truely enjoyed it 🤣 👍🏼Kal or aj k silent forum ko updates sy happy krny ka shukriya keep it up 👏

😉 I hope this will increase our forum rank atleast here we can get back that position
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: pari454

U want more torture Okk i will do it ab ghar se bahar ja nhi sakti kuch din (i m from north india and it is highly polluted nowadays )so let do this
Aur maine ye picnic raat ko padhi thi and i can't control my laughter at that time par shukar h i was alone at that time.

😆 yes we want more torture but is bar pyari chipkali k liye 😉 oh seriously you read that our first ff wo Aru or mera tha hum us mein cv ka torture chipkali pr nikalte thy but cv ny itna bore kr diya k humne likhna chor diya but you carry on Kal or torture krna hai chipkali ko 😃 (don't worry yaha bhi buht smog hai buht zayada raat or subha k time kuch nazar nai ata)keep rocking
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

😆 yes we want more torture but is bar pyari chipkali k liye 😉 oh seriously you read that our first ff wo Aru or mera tha hum us mein cv ka torture chipkali pr nikalte thy but cv ny itna bore kr diya k humne likhna chor diya but you carry on Kal or torture krna hai chipkali ko 😃 (don't worry yaha bhi buht smog hai buht zayada raat or subha k time kuch nazar nai ata)keep rocking

Okk u can suggest me i will add that chipkali ko hi karenge rakhi hi torture karne ke liye h varna kaam kya h uska.
Ya read that two weeks back.I was not known about the fourm at that time aur mera exam bhi tha June main so jan se uski hi prepration main busy thi.I am much active nowadays in forum.
M bhi apni frustration nikal rahi hun.(actually last year smog ki Vajah se halat kharab ho gayi thi so this time i am taking precautions. BTW from where u are)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari454

Okk u can suggest me i will add that chipkali ko hi karenge rakhi hi torture karne ke liye h varna kaam kya h uska.
Ya read that two weeks back.I was not known about the fourm at that time aur mera exam bhi tha June main so jan se uski hi prepration main busy thi.I am much active nowadays in forum.
M bhi apni frustration nikal rahi hun.(actually last year smog ki Vajah se halat kharab ho gayi thi so this time i am taking precautions. BTW from where u are)

oh aj Kal mein bhi thora free ho thanks to smog sub ki vaat lagaye hui hai😆 i am from Lahore and i join this forum this year from Feb i think i really like this forum now that's become my habits to visit this forum daily and made many friends here especially Aru my best friend my small sis .nice to meet you too pari and cv torture us and we then we kasamiams use ffs apni frustrations nikalty hai us mein poor we 😆

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