Tanshi ff: Mile ho tum humko part-44updated pg 55

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This is a remake of postleap track but in different way(with no ak pk)Hope u enjoy
Part-1
Tanuja denies to go with Rishi to his home.
Rishi is shattered but with no hope left he leave the station. Tanuja reaches amritsar,she meets with sandy and tell everything (also about being tanu). Here sandy helps her.
After seven years
Rishi becomes khadoos.Boxing,business and tanya become his life.He does not talk too much with his mom and netra. Netra is in bedi house bcz of Rano (as usual)
Rishi is shown in boxing ring.His oppenent is beating him badly.Suddenly Rishi remembers the day when tanuja left and this increased his anxiety and he beats his opponent even more badly.He leaves the ring and go directly to his office.He asks to mp
Ri:Chote maine tujhe khurana industries k bare m pta karne ko kaha tha
Mp:Ha bhai maine kiya azeeb pagal ladki h bhai
Ri:Kaun si ladki
Mp:vahi Khurana industries ki boss
Ri:Kyu kya kr diya
Mp:Ek toh ladko se itni nafrat karti h ki apne office m kisi ladke ko nhi rakha aur dusra jab maine naam pocha toh Voh nhi bataya.
Ri:Tujhse itna sa kaam nhi hua tu kisi layak nhi h
Mp:Nhi bhai aisa nhi h maine kuch aisa kiya h ki na chahte hue bhi ab us mangoose ko mumbai ana hi padega.
Here in Amritsar a lady is shown who is tensed as she comes to know a problem in mumbai branch.So she immediately tell her family to leave for Mumbai.
Two days passed there is a award ceremony of top businessmans.Rishi is also nominated for best businessman of the year.So he arrived with mp.
Mp:Bhai aaj voh mangoose Yahan zaroor aaegi
Ri:kaun mangoose
Mp:Are vahi Khurana industries ki boss wo bhi nominated h bhai apke sath
Ri:Rishi Singh Bedi ko koi nhi hara sakta.
A lady enters in hall and Rishi feels Tanuja's presence and he search for her but do not found her.
Here the anchor announces the name of winner
An:Vase toh har saal ye award buisness king Rishi Singh Bedi ko jata h lekin is bar ye award business world ki nayi Queen khurana industries ki ceo and founder miss tanuja sikand ko jata h
(Right guys tanuja is the owner of KI)
Rishi is. shocked and happy as well.
Here tanuja is shown in new avatar and she receives the award.Tanuja is about to leave but anchor stops her for few words
Ta:Well i do not talk too much i believe in work. Ha par koi h jisne mujhe jeene ka maksad diya meri beti and i love her a lot and this award is only for her.
Rishi is shattered to know she has daughter so he leave without saying something.
In Tanuja's house a girl is shown(she is natasha) and she talking to sandy
G:Nanu mumma kab aaegi mujhe unka award dekhna h
Sa:Par beta ye zaroori toh nahi ki tanu(sandy call her tanu)ko award mile(Tanuja comes back home)
G:No my mom is best unhen hi award milega
Ta:Bilkul natz mom is best and she show the award to her.Natz is happy hugs her and she takes the award.
N:Mom m ise apne room m rakh ke aati hun.
S:Congrats beta
T:Thnx chachaji.She seems to be upset
S:Kya hua tanu tum itni udas kyu ho
T:Chachaji maine Rishi ko dekha aaj itne saalo baad
S:Nhi beta tu kamjor nhi padegi
T:Nhi chachaji ab meri zindagi sirf natasha ki h aur uski hi rahegi.Acha m fresh ho ke aati hun
In Bedi house
Mp arrives holding Rishi who is drunken
Rishi is in pain and see netra and rano in front of him
Ri:Congrats mom aapki aur aapki is chapkali ki wajah se meri tanuja ne dusri shadi kr li (He laughs)Chote durai shadi aur beti bhi h.
Mp takes Rishi to his room and made him sleep and comes to hall
Raj:Manpreet ye Rishi ko kya ho gya aur ye kya kah rha tha tanuja ne
Mp:Papaji tanuja KI ki owner h aur aaj use hi award bhi mila par jitna maine KI ki owner k bare m jana h Voh ladko se nafrat karti h toh tanuja kisi se shadi kaise kr sakti h
Ahana biji and rajji are happy ki tanuja khush h
Ahana thinks tanuja ne khurana industries hi kyu rakha.
Next morning in tanuja's house
Tanuja and natz are ready to leave when sandy asks them to join for breakfast
Na:Nhi nanu bhukh nhi h mujhe
T:Ha nanu bhukh nhi h hme hum school main admission ke liye bhi late ho rahe h toh chalte h nanu(Tanuja is still fun loving and she enjoy her life fully with natz)
T&N :Bye nanu
San:Par khana toh khake jati ye tanu bhi na natasha ke sath bachi ban jati h
Precap:Tanuja meets ahana and biji



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Every ff in this forum is much better than real story. But this is very unexpected and loved it. Pls upload next part soon.. The CVS testing our patience. Pls u never do it.
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Originally posted by: anjalybabu

Every ff in this forum is much better than real story. But this is very unexpected and loved it. Pls upload next part soon.. The CVS testing our patience. Pls u never do it.

Thnx. ya I never do it.
I m free only for 2-3 days so hopefully complete it in that time.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Waah yar it's really amazing we always wish to see strong tanuja but kya kry cv ko weak leads pasand hai altime rona dhona 🤬
It's amazing i love love love love love it no pk tanuja as strong boss and rishi hating chipkali or mom rano superb. Please update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Another excellent stuff Pari! Your creaticreativity is really impressive.
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Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

Waah yar it's really amazing we always wish to see strong tanuja but kya kry cv ko weak leads pasand hai altime rona dhona 🤬
It's amazing i love love love love love it no pk tanuja as strong boss and rishi hating chipkali or mom rano superb. Please update soon.

Even I want strong tanuja and no ak pk in her life so i write this and update in few minutes only
Edited by pari454 - 7 years ago
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Part-2
In Bedi House
Ahana:Tanya jaldi chalo hum school k liye late ho rahe h(Ahana too hates netra and ahana herself take responsibility of tanya.Netra is only a unwanted guest for bediz except rano.)
Bij:Ahana aaj m bhi chalti hun tere sath tanya ko school chorne ke baad mujhe mandir leke chalna kali maa ko thanks bolna h tanuja ko khush rakhne k liye.
Tanya comes there and trio leave for school
In rano's room
Ra:Dekh netra ab toh tanuja ne shadi kr li h ab tujhe tu tanya ko impress kr
Ne:Par kyu rano aunty
Ra:Agr tanya tujhe apni mom man legi to hi rishi tujhse shadi karega.
Ne:M aisa hi karungi aunty.
Rano is happy.
Tanuja takes natz to tanya's school.
Tanuja goes to princi's room with natz
Pr:Welcome mam
T:I m tanuja sikand and i talk to u about my daughter's admission
P:Ji ha inka admission ho gya.Bs aapko kuch form fill karne h.
T:Okk i will do the formalities
They leave. Here Ahana also drop tanya to her class and comes out.She watches tanuja talking with natz and comes to her.
Tanuja also see her and is about to hug her but Ahana slaps her.Tanuja is shocked
T:Ahana tum ye kya
Ah:Tum Rishi se naraz thi mujse nhi phir tumne mujse itne saalo se baat nhi ki.
Biji also comes there and she is emotional to see tanuja and immediately hugs her.
Ah:Are biji kya kr rahe ho aap ise hamari bilkul bhi fikr nhi h isliye toh aaj tak humse baat tak nhi ki
Natz who loves her mother so much that she can't bear anything against her.So she shouts on ahana
N:Ae moti aunty agar meri mom ko kuch bola na toh m apka muuh tod dungi
Ahana finds herself in natz and she happily hug her.
Natz jerks her away and said mumma ye moti aunty ko dekho na meri jaan lena chahti h
T:Nhi beta aisi bat nhi ye ahana h
N:Ohhh ahana Massi (Tanuja tell her about ahana biji and raji) aur ye biji h
Biji is delighted and too hug her and ahana finally hugs her soul sis.
T:Biji ahana ye meri beti natasha h
Suddenly tanuja gets call from office so she leaves.
Here ahana gets an fb
(Ah:Di tu Rishi se itna pyar karti h tune bhut sapne dekho honge na Rishi ke sath
Tanu:Ha ahana dekhe toh h par tu ye sab kyu phuch rhi h
Ah:Maine bhi ek sapna dekha h ki teri beti ka naam m hi rakhungi
Ta:Acha tum vahan tak phuch gayi
Ah:Ha aur naam hoga natasha
Ta:Bhut pyara naam h ab toh meri beti ka naam natasha hi hoga )Fb ends
Ahana thinks tanuja ye naam kaise rakh sakti h itna bada coincidence.
Precap:Natz first complaint from school.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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NICE. THIS IS WAY BETTER THAN CURRENT STORYLINE.
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Nice Ff Pari... Liking this independent n fearless Tanuja... Waiting for next update
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Part-3
Ahana sits in car and remembers all moments of tanuja and thinks di aur tanuja m itni similarities kaise ho sakti h kahi tanuja hi toh mere tanu di nhi ye kaise ho sakta h mujhe tanuja se baat karni hogi
In Tanuja's office
Tanuja reaches her office with natz.Sherya her personal assistant or better to say a great support to tanuja (just like mp to Rishi)greets her
Sh:Hello di
Ta:Hi shreya
Sh:Di Voh Bediz hamare sath collaborate karna chahte h
T:I m not intersted in collaborating with Bediz. Aur jo shares unhone khreede h Voh toh m unse wapis leke hi rahungi
Sh:Par di ek bar aap mil to lete Bediz se unke manegar bar bar call kr rha h
T:Okk fix my meeting with them
S:Di aaj shyam 6 baje
T:Shreya tum janti ho na after 6 my all time is for natasha kisi aur din rakho between 3 to 5
(Since tanuja is a business woman but still she gives natasha as much as natu wants. Mother daughter share a great bond)
Sh:Okk di
In Evening(Bedi house)
Rishi arrives home and tanya runs to him(Tanya is a very sweet girl just like smiley who loves Rishi very much and takes her proper care despite being a kid or in simple words she understand her father's saddness)
Ta:Dad aaj aap boxing nahi karoge
Ri:Nhi beta aaj papa apni tanya k sath time spent karenge.They start playing mp also join them.Happy moments in Bh
Next day tanuja is working her office suddenly she gets call from school and she rushes to school and directly goes to princi
In princi's office natz is standing with a boy who us crying in pain
Ta:Natasha kya hua beta
Pr:Dekhiye miss sikand aapki beti ka pehla din tha school m aur aaj hi aapki beti ne apne se 2 class senior ladke ko punch mar diya
Tanuja looks at natz
Ta:I understand mam natasha naughty h but bina vajah ye kisi ko kuch nhi khti (Tanuja defends natz)
Na:Dekha aapne maine bola tha na meri mom hi mujhe ache se samjhti h
Pr:Dekha mam ye jabse yahi bol rahi h
Ta:M aapko bol rahi ho na meri natasha aise hi kisi ko nahi marti zaroor is ladke ne kuch Kia hoga
Na:Ha mom ye tanya ko rag kr rahe toh maine pehle inhe pyar se samjhaya par ye nhi mane toh box kar diyA
Ta:Dekha mam galti is ladke ki h aur meri bachi ko daant rhi ho
Pr(to boy): Tomorrow with Ur parents in my office.Ans boy leaves
Pr:Dekhiye phir bhi inhe aise punch nhi karna chahiye tha natz ki aisi harkat k liye inhe school se nikala bhi ja sakta h
N:Ha toh meri mom mera admission kisi aur school m karva dengi
Ta:Bilkul kisi aur school main karwa denge(both gives hifi) Okk ab aap apni class m jao
Natz leaves
Ta:I m sorry mam for her behalf but Voh kuch galat hote hue nhi dekh sakti
Pr:Its Okk but aap jaise use defend kr rhi h na kahin Voh aur na bigad jaye
Ta: Don't worry hum dono ko sudharne ke liye uske nanu bhi h ghar.Tanuja smiles and leaves from there.
Tanya and natasha become good friend after that incident.
In night
Na:Mom aapko yad h na kal kya h
Ta:Ha natasha mujhe yad h
Na:Toh aap ready ho mom kal k liye
Ta:Bilkul
Na:Mom m sone jaa rahi hun aap bhi aa jao
Ta:Tum chalo m aati hun
San:Tanu phir se tum Voh sab
Ta:Ha chachaji aap toh jante ho natasha ko udas nhi dekh sakti m isliye m Voh karungi jo Voh chahti h.
Sa:Par tanu
Ta:Nhi chachaji maine pehle bhi kiya h aage bhi karungi aur aap so jao please good night.
Sandy worries for tanuja.
Here in bedi house tanya tells about natasha to Rishi and how she save her.
Ri:Toh aapki is new friend se milna padega toh kal papa apko school drop karenge.
Tanya laughs
Ri:Kya hua has kyu rhi ho
Ta:papa kal sunday h
Ri:Ohh toh koi bat nhi hum Monday ko mil lenge.
Ta:Papa kal ek boxing match h Voh bhi girls ka hum chalenge na dekhne
Ri:Tanya chahti h toh zaroor chalenge (Rishi fulfills all wishes of tanya)
Ta:Ye thank u papa love u
Ri:Love u too
Precap:A big shock to Bediz.


Tanuja loves natasha so much so she can go to any extent for her happiness.
Edited by pari454 - 7 years ago

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