x.pyar zindagi hai..x updated pg18 *NEW* 09 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
wow!! shiv is getting trapped in their plan, in no time he's gonna confess his feelings to gauri 😳

this jealousy funda always works 😆
great update though!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
😆 😆 😆 Shiv is so cute!!!pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
and also when u update can pls update the title also, so tht we will know u have updated the part pls 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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read all ur part u were awsome 👏 looking forward4 ur next update 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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NEXT PART

It been 2 days form when rudra came nd shiv is really annoyed by rudra flirting with his wife in front of him. Nikila asks gauri to go shopping for palak's wedding nd pick her wedding dress, as she cannot go nd takes some one with her to help her do da shopping.

Shiv hears his mum talking to gauri has a big smile on his face, shopping means a whole day with gauri. He walks towards but she goes to rudra leaving a shocked shiv behind.

Gauri: rudra can u do me a favour.

Rudra: any fink for u my darling………nd lightly punches her cheek

Gauri smiles: go shopping

Rudra: ha………..his phones rings

Rudra: excuse me gauri I will be bk

Gauri: sure

Rudra comes bk nd tells gauri he can't come as he got some unguent work to go nd do nd is very soz. Gauri wonders who to takes nd turns round nd she shiv pops put of no where nd says he will take her. Gauri thinks nd says in her mind, as she does need strong pair of hands to hold all da shopping nd shiv emmm yh I can stay with dis devil

Gauri: ha chalo

Shiv nd gauri get in da car nd go to da Indian jewels shopping centre. As soon as gauri enters da shopping centre she runs into different type of shops nd starts buying lods of stuff but first gets palak's wedding dress nd asks shiv if he wouldn't mind holding da bags. Shiv agrees but didn't no he would end up like Amanupan when he carried da gal's shopping bags. Gauri went in da saris shop nd brought bout 10 or 20 saris nd asks shiv to pay he gets his credit card out nd pays nd shocked to c da wot da bill was

Shiv: 80,000 gauri wot type of saris did u buy
Gauri: kyon retune karo

Shiv: na chalo

Gauri runs into a jeweller shop after giving 30 bags to shiv who is caring 30 bags on his left hand, bout 50 on right, 10 on his right hand figures nd 20 on his left. Gauri buys a really expensive diamond set, a expensive diamond ring, lods of expensive earring nd again asks shiv to pay. Shiv goes to pay with da same credit card he used to pay with da saris bills, but da lady on da counter says der isn't any money left, shiv is shell shocked nd looks at gauri who just smiles. He gets another credit card out nd pays, nd yells da bill

Shiv: 300,00, gauri..

Gauri: wot shiv

Shiv: u done

Gauri: no just one more

But just saying one more one more she took him round all da shops nd made him pay

At a shop

A lady at da counter: sir ur credit card don't have many money left plz can u give another one.

Shiv: wot ……. Shiv wasted all his 3 credit cards paying for his wife shopping nd only had a little left on da 4 nd last one

Shiv; here u go………..nd looks at gauri who is just humming.

Gauri: chalo, I want to go home nd here r da bags… I will wait for in da car.

Shiv just stands still nd goes to da car nd puts da shopping nd drives off. They reach home nd gauri comes in has hugs nikila.

Nikila: beta u took tried

Gauri: ji mumji

Shiv comes in with all da bags like Amanupan did nd makes nikila laugh nd Amanupan comes der nd can't stop laughing.
Amanupan: wot did u tell me…emmm don't go shopping with da ladies.

Shiv: dada

Amanupan stops nd shiv drops da shopping nd sits on da sofa. Gauri gives palak's wedding dress to nikila nd nikila loves it.

Nikila: beta gauri did u do nay shopping for urself 2

Shiv: any shoppin mom, isna tum, ur bahu made ur son a beggar all my credit cards don't have a single money in dem due to all her shopping.

Nikila: nd, she is ur wife has da rights to spend ur money.

All laugh nd rudra joins in but takes gauri away as he wants to talk to her in private which shiv didn't like.

Rudra: u no I can't come to da party nd to make shiv jealous flirt with his m8 nd I no he would ask u for a dance nd dance really close with him

Gauri: par rudra I wouldn't mind dancing with shiv but his m8

Rudra: gauri

Gauri: maybe ur right…… nd den hug

Shiv on da other hand was thinking wot could dey be talking bout or doin was it to do with him or dey planin to run way…NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO gauri can't leave me I have to check. He goes up to rudra's room where rudra took gauri nd see dem hugging nd his eyes turn red seeing rudra hands on gauri back nd her hands wrapped around rudra's neck. He bangs da door to separate dem nd goes, gauri nd rudra un hug nd share a laugh as dey see shiv leave


Preview: shiv confess his love for gauri in front of everyone in his m8 party


cutest couple😊



i miss u iqbal( nd we no u r da true shiv for us, just a wish i hope u can come bk but da new shiv isn't bad to but ur still da best i love u)



his killer look







i love ur smile😊

Edited by pink_09 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
wow wonderful icant wait for next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
superb part !!waiting for the party !!plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
bechara shiv carried all da shopping bag 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
yaar i think rudra is doing it purposely to make shiv jealous.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
hai bechara Shiv, itne saari shopping bags..... 😆 aur bank-balance bhi khali, can't wait for the party.

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