x.pyar zindagi hai..x updated pg18 *NEW* 09 - Page 3

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It was a bright sunny day; da sun shines bright on shiv face due to gauri opening da curtains. Shiv gets up irritated.

Shiv: ka problem hai tumhari…(he goes to her, who has her back facing him. He holds her waist nd turns her round to face him) yeh mara kamra hai, so tum kyon hoti hu to decide dat u should open dese (holding a curtain) curtains

Gauri: soz par mumji ne—

Shiv: mumji ne kya

Gauri: mumji

Shiv: mumji ne kya (now shouting)

Gauri: (crying) u don't let me finish nd now u have started screaming at me

Shiv felt a bit guilty but didn't show it rather den saying soz he orders her to say wot his mum said. Gauri says she has asked everyone to come down nd told me to wake u up cause u r da only one who sleeps late nd I said like.. (She stops)-

Shiv: like wot (getting angry nd want to know wot she thought)

Gauri: like ji.. u will get angry

Shiv: (calming him self nd says it sweetly) but gauri if u don't tell me I will now be a gd gal nd tell me.

Gauri: ji woh raven ka bhahi kumk—(before she could finish nikila was calling dem nd gauri runs when she sees shiv face has turned all red)

Shiv: meh aur wos raven ka bhahi ke tha ra.. wait nooooooooooooooooooooo ways SHIV KAPPOR doesn't nd y should I care but gauri said it… wait yy all of a suddenly y have I stared to care bout wot gauri says.

He shakes his head left nd right nd goes in da bathroom. After a while joins everyone downstairs

Shiv: mom baat kya hai, gauri ne tho—

Nikila: beta ask ur dad , he told me to call everyone.

Mahen: hai shiv( he askes everyone to sit down) I have decided to get palak married to ram.

All r shocked but happy even Maya but palak for her it like her life has turned up side down she is seriously very shocked because she doesn't love ram but hates nd now who she hates da most she has to get married to him I can't belive dis she asks herself. Tears rolled down her eyes nd she runs in her room crying.

Everyone run to see but mahen stop dem saying her will talk to her. He knocks on her door nd asks if he can come in nd she allows him.

Palak: papa I hate dat man.. meh aur aus si.. marriage no ways dad(she hugs her dad really tight while saying dis)

Mahen explains dat ram is a very gd person nd he will keep u happy—

Palak: par papa—

Mahen: (crying) ur dad has never asked u for anyfink kabhi ne par today plz beta for my sake.

Palak: (she hugs her dad) papa I will marry him only for ur sake just urs

Both of them come down nd mahen tells everyone one dat palak has said yes to dis marriage nd dey should start to do da preparations.

Nikila: now palak has agreed, we should start tell everyone nd giving da invitations mahen nd I can't wait to tell my son rudra his lil sis who he last saw who was just a baby has grown up before leaving for studies to go to America. I just wish if he can come for palak wedding has he couldn't for shiv nd gauris.

Mahen: nd I fink I should give him dis news, as he is my older son nd I am his dad.

Nikila laughs nd gives mahen da phone. He calls rudra nd talks to him for a while nd den puts da phone down nd has a sad face.

Everyone gets da messaged he isn't coming. But soon have a smile nd get ready to do da preparations.

NEW ENTRY OF SOME ONE

ANY GUUESS???

nd soz for my crap hindi

so raudhra.....shiv elder bro,who will fall for gauri .....so shiv will knock some sense in his brain.....

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next update i am gonna post 2day!!-x-x-


The nxt day everyone is having breakfast when dey hear someone say "SURPRISE" everyone looks up nd r shocked but happy
We see some sexy black eyes, smiling lips, strong shoulders den we see dey take da camera from his shoes nd going up to his face nd we see da whole face nd it no one other den amit tandon playing da part of shiv's brother (nd just to interest u he nd gauri no each others as dey r best friends cause dey met in amit m8 wedding nd became m8z when gauri came to U.S.A for her friends wedding) nikila gets up nd hugs her son very tightly.

Nikila: beta u… u said u couldn't

Rudra: mom woh tu forgot it mom for shiv wedding I couldn't come cuz of work but when I haven't got any work I can come for my sisters.

Palak comes nd hugs her brothers nd rudra greets everyone. All are very indeed very happy to see Rudra.

Nikila: beta u would be so please to met shiv wife, she is just da best life partner for shiv

Rudra: ha mom par woh ha kaha

Nikila: apa room mein ho ge

Rudra goes to shiv nd gauri room. In da room gauri is standing on a table to busy finding a file, her back is facing rudra, she find da file but loses her balance nd is bout to drop on da floor really hard when we see to pair of muscularly hands hold nd save her from falling over.

Gauri slowing opens her eyes nd her eyes met to pair of black sexy eyes, nd finds her self in a strong nd handsome man arms.

Rudra: (smiling nd excited) GAURI

Gauri: haan main Gauri hoon per aap kaun hain

Rudra: gauri, OMG u forgot me, kya Gauri tum mujhey bhool gaye? Main…… he is interrupted when Gauri screams

Gauri: RUDRA (nd gives him a kiss on da cheek

Rudra spins round still holding gauri in his arms nd getting her scared nd she is screaming nd telling him to put her down

Gauri: RUDRAAAAAAAAAAA, RRRRRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRDDDDDDDDDRRRRRRRRAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, STOP PUT ME DOWN AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

Rudra puts gauri down put she is feeling so dizzy she falls in his arms again nd den recovers nd hugs him really tightly, all dis is watched from da distance by shiv who is some how don't know why is feeling jealous seeing his wife "HIS" wife hugging someone else nd kissing him on da cheek. Shiv couldn't take it any more nd to interrupt dem he says.

Shiv: bhai aap mujhe bhool…… gets interrupted by rudra.

Rudra: shiv no fair u took my gauri away from me, my only love…. He says dis while hugging gauri form da back.den hugs shiv but rather den standing alone hugs gauri from da bk again

Shiv gets annoyed and gauri blushes, she den faces rudra nd punches him lightly on his chest nd lays her head on it

Gauri: rudra tum be na

Shiv couldn't take dis anymore he was trying to control his anger

Shiv in his mind: y am I getting jealous nd angry seeing gauri nd rudra bhai

Rudra gives another kiss to gauri on her cheek nd says I have missed u so much.

Shiv in his mind: OMG bhai did just not kiss her again, how can he kiss my come on MY WIFE IN FRONT OF ME DATS IT DEY NEED TO BE SEPERTARED BEFORE DEY GO ANY FAR.

Shiv grabs gauri hands lightly nd takes her in his arms nd gives her a kiss which gauri didn't like at all nd was thinking wots rong with him.

Rudra leaves da couple nd goes. Gauri releases herself from shiv arms nd shouts.

Gauri: HOW DARE U TOUCH ME ND GIVE ME A KISS ND ALSO IN FORNT OF UR OLDER BROTHER.

Shiv: excuse me how dare I wot bout u getting kisses form my brother nd hugging him in front of me? Nd to remind u I am Ur husband so I can kiss u if I like…. Nd gives her a kiss on da lips

Gauri pushes him off nd says: if we don't have da relationships of a husband nd wife u don't have rights

Shiv: oh ya nd my bhai does

Gauri: do I smell something burning nd someone feeling jealous… oh it my own so called husband

Shiv: me nd jealous my FOOT

Gauri: den u wouldn't have a problem if I kiss or hug UR brother… saying dis she hits his cheek lightly nd leaves da room. Shiv touches da spot where she hit him nd stands der in shock.

waiting for next update......shiv burning with jaelousy......

hmm..shiv definately gettin jealous !!soo cute 😳 😳 awesome part continue soon

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏