x.pyar zindagi hai..x updated pg18 *NEW* 09 - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago
pinky pinky pinky dear y u aint updatin yaar i just read ur ff amazinggg yaar i humbly request u 2 continue diz ff pleajjjjj........gr888 ff yaar plzzz doo continue it asap plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!this is such a sweet ff but u hvnt been ud8in since ages!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz yaar, con ASAP bcuz we r all waitin 4 a cute ,romantic upd8 4rm u so get busy.con soon!!!☺️
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Posted: 16 years ago

"Shiv , aap aagay? Its only 3 o'clock , tabaret toh teek ha" Gauri touched shiv's forehead concerned. 😲

" Main teek ho baby , woh kya ha hunni bunni , we are leaving today at 6 pm" he saw her totally surprised.
"today? isn't it a little early. I Swear the tickets were booked for next week" he placed his arms round her, seeing her tap her lip with her finger thinking. 🤔


"well yes but I cancelled the tickets and booked the earliest fight .. which is today Jaan , I think we wasted enough time, plus I have already packed " Shiv grins wide

"acha bachu" she laughed seeing him get the suitcases down from the cupboard. 😉😆

**

"Acha Shiv beta, Take care" Mahesh smiled as gauri and shiv took his blessings.


"Aur shiv brothers don't forgot the tips I gave you 😉 , they will come in handy" Rudra winked while gauri looked confused.😕

"Acha rudra apna aur saab kya dahaan rak na.. teek ha" rudra smiled as gauri spoke out her list. 😲😆

"Teek ha baba" He folded his hands making her stop. 😆😆

"Hahaha , ok bhai" shiv and gauri waved goodbye.😛

**

"Shiv! jaanu , Get up" he moaned feeling being nudged.😳😳

"Baby please let me sleep" he hugged her shoulder , as he pulled the blanket over him while the airhostess giggled. 😆😆😳

"Shiv , Order your food , look you didn't even eat lunch , baby please get up" she smiled as he opened his eyes.

he sat up straight , folded hands , he ordered his dinner with gauri.

"How long have we got left" 1 hrs.😲😲
"Oh Man" she smiled as the food came , 😳they feed each other and soon fell asleep in each others arms. 😳

**
"Gauri, baby your so beautiful. Kitni soft soft ho" Gauri giggled as shiv stoked the pillow in his sleep.


"Shiv! .. Shiv .. shiv im here" he opened his eyes. 😆😆

"Huh?" He got up. 😕


He looked down at the pillow in his hand. Smacking his head he laughed. Gauri came closer towards him, moving his body down , he rested his head on her lap. He looked up at her and smiled. Moving his hand towards her cheek's he creased them gently.

"I love you" he slowly closed his eyes. 😳

**

* mwah *

He smiled wide. I love it when she kisses me in the morning.
Opening his eyes he pulls her down on top on him. 😉

Her hair is so soft. Its like im in jannat. Mar jawa.
😛


" Shiv choro na" Nahi. Kyun choro. 😎 I got the licence to romance. 😎

She blushes as he softly passes a gentle kiss on her neck. Rolling on the bed he comes on top of her. Bring his face closer he captures her lips with his. ☺️

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"Shiv stop it , you dog" she moves faces the other way as he keeps her pinned down on the bed

he softly kisses her eyelids.
"Excuse me mr. kapoor but pleaseee -" pulling her back down , he pins her on his chest.

"Your so unromantic gauri" he complained.

"Aww to BAD" she elbows him in the stomach. 😲😲

She laughs as she gets out of bed.

"Gauriii"
. Shiv comes behind her 😛


grabbing her waist he turned her around , she closed her eyes feeling his warm breath. Moving towards her lips as he gently rubbing his thumb on her bottom lip. ☺️

feeling his warm breath on her lips, as he slowly blew at the end of her bottom lip, kissing it gently she found him pull her closer. Feeling the touch of his finger on her cheek, she brought her face close to his, having her head touch his.. wrapping her arms round his neck she spoke. 😳😳

"im warning you , don't come to close .. im dangerous" Shiv chuckled.

"Well I love dangerous girls" gauri laughed as she looked down.


he started to trill his hands down her back, and slowly he lifted her up from the floor.

Mein mangyasi mannata ve mannata,
Tu jo mile jindari jannata ve jannata


^^ Omgg i just love this trackk 😍

Her figures crept through his hair. He wrapped both his arms around her tiny waist tightly as the kiss got harder with her rushing her fingers in his hair pulling him more closer.

she started walking backwards feeling his body press against her's with his arms tightly wrapped around her waist'as she hit against her wall lightly they broke the kiss. 😍

Edited by pink_09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
P.s P.s

Excuse the Hindi. Its BAD! 😔😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
ahhh awesumm updateee how romanticcc yaar well tyhnxxxx a lotttttttttttttttt 4r updatinggggg i hope u won't left diz ff now plz do continue asap plzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
LICENCE 2 ROMANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11LOLOLOLOLOL🤣🤣!!!!!!!!! tht si sooooooooooooooo funny!!! 😆since wen did gauri start sayin 'dog, n baby'???she elbowd shiv.*ouch* well, atleast uve upd8d n im glad. plzzzzzzzzz con ASAP!!!!!!!!! dont make us wait 2 long.👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
will edit when i come back from college

*edited*

a cute update, full of Romance 😳 and Shiv like usual such a cutie pie 😳

the scene with the pillow .... lolz was hilarious 😆 😆

great to have you back

and this was a rocking update 👏

tc

Yazz
Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
yeah update soon yr its so cute and romantic....


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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey jus caught up with ur FF.. itz amazing.. Nice to c shiv-gauri so much in luv....plzz continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
i jst caught up wid dis FF of urz darlingg... nd its amazingg!!! dis part was soo cute nd romantic! muaah updt asap!

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