x.pyar zindagi hai..x updated pg18 *NEW* 09 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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shiv is getting jealous 😳cute part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
Brilliant part darling....and Shiv burning with jealously... [:D/] [:D/] it is great that Gauri has already discovered the fact that her husband is jealous, ab aayega mazaa....keep up the great work.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
thx alot for da lovely comments 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
i cant wait till the party on saturday because then shiv will be able to see gauri in the black dress. i cant wait to read about his expressions 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
just read everythin together.... great fanfic.... the last part was damn funny....pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Gauri is walkin in da corridor when some someone tough pulls her to da closest room. Gauri looks up nd see it no one other den rudra.

Gauri: rudra yeh…tum

Rudra; gauri wot have u done

Gauri a bit surprised: wot did I do

Rudra: u have changed my bro completely, do u even no how much he loves u

Gauri becomes a bit sad nd a tear drops from her eyes rolling down her cheeks, rudra was a bit shocked.

Rudra: gauri tum..tum

Gauri can't control her emotions now nd hugs rudra nd says

Gauri: ur bro doesn't love me, he hates me… he thinks i ruined his life

Rudra: par.. but yy

Gauri tells da whole story nd rudra is shell shocked nd stands still den his eyes fall on gauri who is cryin a lot.

Rudra: but gauri shiv loves u

Gauri: my foot he is making my life like hell nd planin new plots every day to get me thrown out of dis house.

Rudra: gauri.. he does I saw it in his eyes da way I touched u in front of him, his body was boiling with anger nd when I kissed u he would of killed me dere if I wasn't his bhai.

Gauri thought for a moment nd remember wot shiv said nd da way he kissed her nd da way he was speaking was giving a message dat he did feel jealous.

Gauri: emmmm.. k maybe u r rite

Rudra: I no.. I am always nd now to get him to express his feeling for u, u have to make him jealous

Gauri: u mean flirt with someone nd let other boys flirt with me.. but who… thinking

Rudra coughs

Rudra: I am free

Gauri: emm not a bad idea which husband will like it if there wife flirts with his older bro

Nd dey both share a laugh nd get out da room holding hands. But dey didn't no shiv saw dem nd thought wot did dey do in da room??

At night

Everyone was having dinner, rudra sat in shiv seat nd got him annoyed.

Shiv in his mind: first bhai flirts with my wife nd den seats on my sit next to my gauri………………….. Shiv was shocked did he say MY gauri nd dese two words started ringing nd his head.

He seated himself opposite gauri, everyone started eating but stopped when dey show gauri jump

Nikila: beta u k

Gauri: yh……………………..looking at rudra who touched her leg with his feet to get shiv attention.

Rudra den grabbed gauri hand really tightly to get some expression on her face so shiv can find out wot is happening as rudra can c he is looking da dem both, shiv drops his spoon on purpose nd sees rudra holding gauri hands nd his eyes fill red with angry but he controls as he doesn't want da family to wonder wots rong with him. He gets back to eating but his giving killer evil looks to rudra who just smiles. The eye contact gets interrupted when shiv phone rings. It his friend who reminds him bout da party.

Friend: don't forget nd wot u been up 2

Shiv: nm rudra bhai is bk

Friend: wot nd u r telling me now, plz tell him to come.

Shiv it a bit irritated: fine

Friend: got to go dude c ya on sat

shiv in his mind: god can't i go to a party alone with my wife if bhai comes gauris gonna be with him nd not ME her HUSBAND can dis day get any worse

with a sad look says his friend has invited him next sat to da party but rudra says he can't come because his friend form new York is coming nd a big smile comes on shiv face but gauri is sad as she has to stay with shiv all night. Shiv gives a naughty smile to gauri who gets a bit worried nd thinks wot he will do.


Edited by pink_09 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
thx for such anice update pls continue today if it is possile ijust love it. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
he he he shiv getting jealous 😉 😉 😉 dhere pyaar ho raha hai shiv u love her accept dat 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
thx 4 da comments 😊 i will write longer 2moz as i got lods of h/w soz guys 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
lolz shiv sure is getting jealous 😉
cute part 👏 👏

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