x.pyar zindagi hai..x updated pg18 *NEW* 09

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dw in dis ff ippi nd shiv don't love each other, ippi is helpin gauri nd shiv fall for each other nd nikila ism't bad nd wants shiv nd gauri togther

x. Pyar Zindagi Hai.x

It's been 3 days from Shiv nd Gauri's marriage, everyday poor gauri has 2 see da hate da anger shiv has in his eyes 4 her. She remembers her suhag raat where shiv yells at her. Shiv was known for his anger, when he was angry no one dared to go up to him. In collage has da most popular boi, known for his charm, his looks, da magic, da graze in his black eyes and his cute smile which he just needs to make any girl be crazy for him but he was mostly known for his angry when shiv Kapoor was angry none in da collage dared to speak to him, or even come near him cause dey new if anyone did shiv will beat da living S*** out of dem.

Poor gauri was sitting on da bed crying on her suhag raat remembering da moments she spent with shashank, finking wot did she do rong da he left her on their wedding day. She was lonely sitting on da bed crying as loudly as she could, finking da her tears might wash off with her pain when all of a sudden she hears da door burst , nd shiv enters, gauri could see da angry in his eyes dey were red nd filled with so much hate as if shiv would murder someone.

Shiv comes close to gauri who is taking a step back every time shiv comes closer and when she realises she is leaning on da wall and shiv hits his hand on da wall as if he was bout to slap her.

Shiv: why did u come bk huh, WHY dam it why, u had a chance nd u blew it away nd came bk to ruin my life, now dat u are bk sweetie (he said while touching her soft cheeks) I will make ur life like hell nd u will leave da house then me throwing u out

He was bout to leave when he grabs her hand nd holds it really hard dat if he held it any longer he would stop her blood from travelling in her body. "Don't u dare cry in front of me like dat it not gonna change any fing (he catches a tear from her eyes before it drops nd says) ur tears aint import to me nd never will I hate u nd will never love u understand dat it will be sfe for u if u never come near me or show me ur borin face so just get out of my sight GET OUT.

Nd a crying gauri just runs in to da bath room nd cries even more nd gets shiv frustrated and he kicks da door open of da bathroom nd tell her to shut up nd make her bed cause he aint sharing his bed with her. Gauri gets up nd makes her bed nd falls a sleep.

Gauri snaps form da flashback when she hears nikila calling her.

Gauri wipes her tears nd gets up from da bed nd heads to go downstairs when she bumps into someone tough

x..hope u like it..x<33😊

pink-09😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part continue with more updates as soon as posible......hope u r not fooling us šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no i not i will i am glad u like it 😊
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PREVIEW: shiv sees gauri in a towelšŸ˜³šŸ˜†

recap: gauri bumps into sme one tough

gauri slowing opens her innocent eyes nd looks up nd see 2 pair of black eyes ,da gaze in those eyes would make any one faint , da power in dem can even melt a rock, just one look is needed to make any one fall for da person dat owns dese eyes nd gauri knew only one person owned dese commanding eyes was no one other den shiv kapoor her husband who hates her and everytime his eyes met hers dey would turn red due to hate for her.

Gauri had her arms round shiv neck nd he was holding her waist, dey stare in each other eyes when dey are interrupted by ippi nd anupam

Ippi: shiv I hope u r done checkin gauri out so can I take her with me

anupam: ha shiv(nd laughs)

shiv gets irritated by da silly comment nd gauri blushes he gets her up nd takes his hand away form her waist but somewhere down in his heart he didn't nd gauri takes her hands away from shiv neck.

Shiv goes with anupam to discuses some business stuff nd ippi takes gauri shopping but gauri stops nd says.

gauri: ippi mumjii called me

ippi: yh to go shoppin with me

they both leave,ippi nd gauri do alot of shoppin gauri buys lots of sari nd a beautiful pink nd blue one dat is see though nd has some stone work on it. ippi just passes a shop nd see a sexy black tight dress which is kneel lenght but would be a bit higher dat is also sleeveless. gauri on da other hand is lookin for ippi den she spots her lookin at da black dress ippi thinks dat gauri should try it , it will look really gd on her.

gauri: u like it

ippi: yh

gauri: den y don't u buy it

ippi: casue i want to to buy it nd wear it from da party nxt saturday

gauri: wot party

ippi: now don't tell me u forgot shiv m8 party his birthday remember i told u

gauri: oh yh but ippi u no i don't wear these type of clothes --

ippi: so wot plz for da sake of our friendship buy it (nd makes a cute puppy face)

gauri: fine but u no one fing u no how black mail ppl

ippi: indeed i no

nd they both share a laugh

soz if i have bored u


Edited by pink_09 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey awesome ff šŸ‘ continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey wad a awesome start šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘.........n looking forward to ur next update n yeh plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon...............
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice update ,so ippi bought black dress fo rgauri for shivs birthday 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wat will be his reaction to see gauri like dat šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

nice concept šŸ˜› cont............. soooooooooon😃

Edited by fida-cute - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow pinky really u r nice writer keep going šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very good! ur doing fantastic so far....

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