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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
👏 very nice update.

at last shiv opened up to gauri ,he needs her support hope he will realise gauri is his life.

hey what happened to ippi ,what is the cause of her death please clear this dought.

a bit selfish of me but please try to update as soon as possible 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
wow!! such a touching update 😭 the way gauri consoled shiv was soo cute 😳 😳 😳
waiting 4 the next update do continue soon 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
Brilliant, i love this Shiv, he is nothing like he is usually portrayed.

ps. can u number the pages as well u've updated, its easier that way.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
u r awsome u literally made me cry 😭 😭 .i just read ur whole ff. plz continue.last part was toooooooooooooooooo good 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
Here is little teaser for you guys....enjoy!!!

Chapter 9

"Mr. Kapoor, it's a miracle. I have never known a case, where a child has such a nasty fall on her head and recovers from it without any repercussions." The smiling doctor turned to Aaliya, who they wanted to keep a day longer for observation, "No more climbing tress for you young lady. You gave your parents and all of us quite a scare," the doctor said giving Gauri a knowing look.
"Thank you so much doctor for everything," Shiv said as he stepped out of his daughter's room along with the doctor.
"Please, in this case, putting my ego aside I must say that it truly was a miracle. Mr. Kapoor your daughter must have a guardian angel watching her like a hawk because her recovery is nothing short of a miracle."
Shiv smiled at the doctor's parting words and mouthing a silent thank you to his daughter's guardian angel, Shiv stepped into his daughter's room, which was now crowded by the numerous members of both Gauri and his family.


Ever since Aaliya's accident, Gauri watched the children like a hawk. She even took a few days off from work so that she could spend more time with them. They were her reason for living and she could not afford another accident like the last one.
Shiv, too, worked normal hours now. He made sure that he was there to see his children off to school in the mornings and he was there to tuck his children in at night.
The children were more than ecstatic with all the attention they were receiving, especially from their parents but they noticed that the strain in their parents' relationship still remained. The children were not the only ones who noticed. The rest of the family was happy to have Shiv around but things were even more awkward than before because now they were further exposed to the tension between the couple.
One day, while she was helping her grandmother pull out peas from their pods, Aaliya turned to her grandmother and asked, "Badi Dadi aren't husbands and wives supposed to like each other?"
Her grandmother replied distractedly, "Of course they are beta."
"And if you like each other than you talk to each other right?"
"Of course"
"Then how come Choti ma and papa never talk? They are husband and wife too, so they are supposed to like each other right?"
At that moment Vivan, who was listening to their conversation from a distance, came and sat down beside his grandmother. He pulled his niece into his lap and said, "Of course they like each other. They are just to scared to admit it."
"Huh???" replied a confused Aaliya.
Vivan pulled his niece closer and patiently replied, "They really like each other but they are too shy to tell each other that."
Aaliya was silent for a while and suddenly jumping off her uncle's lap she said, "Then I guess we'll just have to tell it for them."
Dadi shook her head and said, "Its not that easy sweetheart. Adults are complicated."
But Aaliya already began heading towards her parents' room saying, "Don't worry Badi Dadi I have a plan." Both Dadi and Vivan gave the beaming little girl curious looks and Vivan ran after her demanding, "Aaliya what's the plan? Maybe I can help."

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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
nice update 👏
why is shiv behaving like that even aliya also noticed the strange behaviour for her prents.

by the by what was aliya plan will she be succeessfull,shiv is so stuburn hope her plan will be a success.

thanks for the quick updates desi chikita 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
man this fic is good......i just luv how u always show ippi as an angel watchin over them....its so emotional....cant wait 4 mor
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
lol vivaan cant even conjure up a plan and aaliya can!! lol cuteeeee! continue soon i wonder what their plan is lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
can't wait what little aliya do cont soo plz plz plz plz 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
great part 👏 👏 👏 pls continue soon!!

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