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jiya imdad

@jiya imdad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#51

awsome update as usual 👏 .........very well narated
poor gauri she thought shiv is mad at her 😆 😆
the way he called her in the room.........i thought he is upto sumthing wicked 😉
continue soon

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kaira11

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Posted: 18 years ago

#52

😆 it was realllyy good !!!gauri's really funny 😆 😆 amazing part 👏

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prab_rockinn

@prab_rockinn

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Posted: 18 years ago

#53

i just love ur ff..... its very humourous............... keep up the excellent work!!!! 👏

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angad4life

@angad4life

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Posted: 18 years ago

#54

😆 chandni jiiii.... i could not stop laughing!! gauri is sooo cute!! and i luv the way u sneak in ridicule of the K-soaps 😆 is this gonna follow the original story of shiv marrying gauri so he can kill her? 😭 😭 😭 anyhow, awesome update as usual-- continue soon!!! 😃

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Jenna Dutt

@Jenna Dutt

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Posted: 18 years ago

#55

Chandni, Brilliant update once again...... 👏
It is hillarious and really exciting to see this chulbuli side of gauri..... 😉
keep up the great work.....

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salt

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Posted: 18 years ago

#56

Awesome Part!! 👏

I love Gauri's character! 😆

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tinkertoesreads

@tinkertoesreads

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Posted: 18 years ago

#57

This has got to be one of the most humourous fanfic I've ever read. I love the story and the first person treatment your giving it is awesome... Its different and thats one of the reasons I keep waiting for the next installment (hint! hint!) 😆

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$imr@n

@heartbreakkid§

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Posted: 18 years ago

#58

😆 awesome part cont soon plz...

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zainab

@fida-cute

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Posted: 18 years ago

#59

really it is funny 😆 😆 😆 gauri thinks shiv is gonna kill her 😛 and gauri looks at shiv something like this 😉 😉 kep it up and cont. sooon 👏 👏 👏

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Spandana

@*Spandana*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#60

chanduuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu, this is the best part in all the parts till now. this is hilarious from the begining.
the bus driver part didnot bother me today. it was infact hilarious.
gauri's eagerness to spread the word was man so funny.
i ikindof expected whyshiv called her. but the way u wrote was fabulous.
ipshit confrontation is so lovely.
people dashing gauri everytime is funny.
and the funniest gauri not attending the classes and going back home.
everything is nice and funny and .....(cant fiind any word 😆 )
sorry for the randomness in the post.
btw ur MOTW had an effect and thts why this part is lovelly 😆
ur reference to k-soaps also made me laugh. 😆 😆

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