FF: Keeping the moon... END PART- Pg 77 - Page 4

hehehehehe.....this fic is too good! i cant wait 4 another shiv/gauri confrontation.

that was amazing, u r superb, I loved the part him not to b able to find u, giggles all around, man u r great 😆

ur mindblowing & ur ff is really funny, interesting,...
now i am also ur big fan dont forget me lol.
cont. soon...

Hillarious..... 😃
I am having a blast reading the updates, really well done Chandni...
Luved it, pls. continue soon.

ur update was great 👏
i was laughing hard 😆 😆 😆 n what if my mother caught me surfing the net at 3:00am @ night
she'll really be 😡 @ me
just want to ask can u update daily?
continue soon 😃

omgg.. i am soo silly not to find such a funnii and gr8 ff before!

i just read ur 3 parts and its mindblowing!!

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please do continue hunnii!!

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chandni yet again u did it. i have a bad headache from college but still ur ff made me laugh. just a few comments and i will end.

at first at bus drivers is kind of boring. (first two para)
but then shiv entry, his first line 'oh its u' i just imagined shiv telling them and thts all i need to laugh and feel happy 😛 . loved the way their conversation went. girl thinking to herself, and tht part is very well written 👏 then ipshit part- i started laughing from her entry. never expected her entry so soon. 😆 also gauri's excitement after finding the dating issue is very funny. 😆 we have a totally different gauri and hun please keep her like a normal girl instead of a anytime rona girl.
one more thing, that drver coming first out of the car was also a good idea. not expected. 😃

sorry if i wrote too much. 😊

Hey ,Nice part ,I was just thinking that when they will have a long conversation 😉 between them ??????????????????????? 😆 😆

hey...that was the most humourous narrative ive read... very vivid description..totally fab...continue soon

great work!!!!!! very innovative.... 👏