FF: Keeping the moon... END PART- Pg 77

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azooba

@sun2005

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Posted: 18 years ago

#71

little confusing,shiv accept to marry gauri 😳
dalme kuchkala hai!
gauri's humor is nice ,please update the next episode soon

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Roop

@Rock_Star

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Posted: 18 years ago

#72

awwww poor gauri...she must be felling like jumping from a cliff 😆 😆 ....hailaa!! that was was quick...already date is been fixed for the wedding
awesome part 👏 👏

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

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Posted: 18 years ago

#73

omg! cant wait 2 read wat happens next......man this is GOOD!

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

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Posted: 18 years ago

#74

awesome part cont soon plz!!!! 👏

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nerdynerd

@nerdynerd

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Posted: 18 years ago

#75

omg wot is happenin??poor gauri...shivy is being a jerkooo....gahh!!!anywayzzz continue soon 😃

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Spandana

@*Spandana*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#76

hey chandu what did u do. u just turned the whole story. poor gauri. its so hilarious. i am so excited. u have a very good tact of explaining the scenes. its like i am watching a movie or k-soap. i liked it when u said 'rewind' actually i think tht a lot. i wish there was sth like rewind. 😆

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salt

@salt

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+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#77

Excellent Part!! 👏

The marriage bit was completely unexpected, but it was a wonderful twist to it. 👏👏👏 I loved it! 😃

Poor Gauri! 😆 😆

I hope you are not going as per the original story line. I will be eagerly waiting for the next part!

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago

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Priya_128

@Priya_128

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#78

that had me in splits...see this is what is called class writing. poor gauri...she does get herself into a fix really frequently...hehehe...pls do continue...i dont rem when i hv laughed so much while reading something...
awesome...

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Nazrin

@Nazrin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#79

OMG chandi u r a darling.....ohhhhh it was such a nice part 👏 👏 .....serious n humorous both at the same time 😆 the marriage thing was a little quick though but i really enjoyed reading it.... 👏 👏 👏
i luv ur gauri....shez sooo funny 😆 😆 😆 n sweeeeet 😳 now u got me completely hooked to ur ff........plz hunny dont keep me waiting till monday..... 😳 im dying to know wht happenz next 😳