FF: Keeping the moon... END PART- Pg 77 - Page 61

u finidhed the ff? ur ffs r so short but real gud! luved the last 2 parts! so cute man! plz continue let me love you also ok...gotta run! bye!

😆 navs....ur toooo quick 😳
and chandu, ur ff is alive😉

amu~

Originally posted by: *Spandana*

😆 navs....ur toooo quick 😳
and chandu, ur ff is alive😉

amu~

aye hello.. don't laugh.. ok.. at least i made it 😆

i finished reading this fan ficiton in mone day
it was really intresting
i loved it
i hope you'll be writing anoth one

@navs: i know u will make it..cant miss this one.😳

@lovefaz: hey she started another one. here it is.
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/karam-apnaa-apnaa/591852/ff-diamonds-and-daisies-end-pg-36
took the liberty to give the link...hope this is ok with u and her. (chandu)😆

amu~

OMG-- Hilarious !!--
i love her 1st person thoughts-- dude- she's craZZy -- wish the real gauri was like her-- then KAA wd be - lol- thinking bout it makes me laugh--
oh and i like her references to K- serials-- altho if ekta reads this she's gonna kill u provided she duznt die of laughter first --
plus i liked the part bout the 'raaz behind the door' i had to take a moment to calm down coz that was like on the bull's eye-- i mean really, its amazing how there's a 'raaz behind the door' in every show-- and now in fact we've upgraded to entire floors of raaz-- a la raaz of teesri manzil :P
and Gauri's mindloss / zeher scene at ipshitaa's-- jeez-- i cdnt stop myself from laughin out loud !!
and all the rest too-- there were too many to mention each !!--
it was really good !! esp the last part (her journal entry / thoughts) was really nice !!-- altho i kinda would have liked to see a little fast-forwarded part after that-- bt still i enjoyed this ending too!
in all- an AwSuMM story !!-- =)