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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww...shiv is choo chweeet 😳 .....gr8 part.....continue ASAP 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
hey ppl i just wanted to thank all those ppl who commented and liked my fanfic i.e heartbreakkid$, zoe89, rock_star, racho8, carzy_about_u, fida-cute, sweety567, simrin, iqbaladdict, huntor, crystalclear and preeti_saarrthi thank you so much guys!!! and will update it soon.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1 on page 1
Part 2 on page 3
Part 3 on page 6

ShivGauri Part 4

After Anupam leaves the room, Shiv goes to dadi's room.
Shiv: Dadi?
Dadi: Haan Shiv.
Shiv walks into the room.
Dadi: Kuch kaam tha Shiv?
Shiv: Haan dadi. Kal mein Guruji ko milne gaya tha.
Dadi: Sab teek hai na Shiv?
Shiv: Haan dadi, lekin Gurujine kaha ki humme Gaurike liya ek pooja karna padengi. Tho mein soch rahithi ki kya aap mere madath karengi?
Dadi: Haan Shiv, yeh koi poochneki baath hai kya?
Shiv: Thanx dadi!!!

Shiv goes back to the room, and Gauri is brushin her hair and sees Shiv thru the mirror and she smiles at him. Shiv comes and hugs her from behind.
Shiv: Mujhe chod kar jarahi ho?
Gauri smiles even more: Haan.
Shiv: Teekay lekin jaldi wapas aana.
Shiv starts kissin her neck. Suddenly dadi walks in.
Dadi: Shiv beta..
Dadi sees them romancin starts blushin and turns around. When ShivGauri hears dadi's voice, Shiv moves away from Gauri and Gauri jumps. ShivGauri are both blushing,
Shiv: Kya hua dadi??Kuch kaam tha?
Dadi(blushing and not lookin at them, lookin at the ceiling): Woh...Woh Shiv, thumne pooja kab rekna ha, yeh tho bathaya nahi.
Shiv: Kal raklai dadi??
Dadi: Teekay, mein sabki indzaar karthi hoon.
Shiv: Haan dadi, Gurujine kaha ki woh aaj ayengi.
Dadi: Teekay.(And she leaves and on her way closes the door😉)
Shiv turns and looks at Gauri. And both of them starts smilin. Shiv puts his hands forward. Gauri comes forward and hugs him.
Gauri: Shiv, dadi konsi poojakey baray mein baath kar rahi thi?
Shiv: Woh thumhari dosh jaane keliya Gurujine thumahareliye pooja reknekeliya kaha tha.
Gauri: Aap Gurujise mila?
Shiv: Haan, meine usse kal milatha.
Gauri: Aur kya kaha ussene?
Shiv: Yeh ki, meri kundalise thumahari kundali ka dosh midgayi, phirbhi ek pooja rekne keliya kaha tha.
Gauri smiles at him.
Gauri: Shiv meine apki kapade bahar rakhi hain. Aap kapade badhal dhijiye, mein chalo?
Shiv: Teekay, bye.
He kisses her. Gauri leaves.

Later Gauri and kaya comes back. Shiv was sittin with Ipshitha, and both looked really tired.
Kaya: Hi jeeju!!!
Shiv: Hi Kaya!!!
Gauri: Aap office nahi gaya?
Shiv: Kuch kaam tha.
Gauri: Kya kaam??
Shiv: Kuch kaam tha, phir Guruji bhi agayithi, tho useke saath, kal ki pooja ki baremein baath kar rahi thi.
Gauri: Teekay.
Kaya leaves, and tht time Anupam walks in.
Anupam: Hello every1(and suddenly sees Ipshtiha and runs and sits next to her and Shiv rolls his eyes.)Hi Ipshitha!!!
Ipshitha with no interest: Hi, (she looks at ShivGauri) mein chalthi hoon.
Ipshitha gets up and leaves, and Anupam also gets up to go.
Shiv: Dada, aapse kuch zarrori bath karnethi.
Anupam looks at Shiv helplessly: Now??
Shiv: Haan!!
Anupam sits down, and sadly watches Ipshitha leavin.
Anupam: Wht is it?
Shiv: U asked me to help u woo Ipshitha ri8?
Anupam: Yeah!!!
Shiv: Okay from now onwards, ignore her!!!
Anuapm gets shocked:WHAT?!?!She herself ignores me, and if i start ignorin her, then wht will happen??
Shiv: Just do wht I am tellin u. I know how to deal with women.
Gauri: Aapne kuch kaha, meine suna nahi.
Shiv: Woh Gauri......Woh....mein yuhi batha raha tha!!!
Gauri: Yuhi?????
Shiv: Haan...yuhi.
Gauri starts smiling.
Anupam: Kya Shiv thum Gaurise darr gayi??
Shiv blushes: Abhi abhi humari love story shuru huyi.
Shiv puts his hands around Gauri.She starts blushin.
Shiv looks at Anupam: Teekay dada, aap jayiye kuch kaam thana?
Anupam: Ab koi kaam nahi hai.Ipshitha tho chala gaya.
Shiv glares at him.

Palak and Maya who was watchin this gets irritated.
Maya: We shud put an end to this love story.
Palak: Yes u r right.

guys i gotta go. will continue soon and pls do comment.






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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
omg that palak and maya better not do anything 😡
great part 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
woooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
👏 MINDBLOWING PART 👏
PLZZZZZ CONT SOON
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
wowwwwww....awsomeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cuteeeeeeeeeeeee 😳 😳 😳

continue soon... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey just wanted to say thank you so much ruby_renne, rock_star, sweety567, angel_tia, zoe89, iqbaladdict, fida-cute, simrin, chiku18 and racho8.
will update soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
hehe......yeah shiv u r 1 womanizer 😉 .....i hope maya and palak r not upto somethin stupid this time 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
Part 1 on Page 1
Part 2 on Page 3
Part 3 on Part 6
Part 4 on Page 8

ShivGauri Part 5

ShivGauri and Anupam r sittin. Shiv wanted to romance with Gauri, but since Anupam was sittin there, he cudn't.
Shiv: Dada aapko koi kaam nahi kya??nayi book nahi likna??
Anupam understands wht Shiv is indirectly sayin: Nahin. koi kaam nahi. Socha tum logoke saath baath karo.
Gauri: Anupamji, I want to read ur book. Can u give me some?
Anupam: Okay, but on one condition.
Gauri looks confused: Wht condition?
Anupam: Gauri tum mujhe Anupam-ji math bulavo, Anupam bhulao.
Gauri: Lekin jab Shiv aapko dada bulatheho, mein aapko aapke naam se kaise pukar sakthi ho?
Anupam: Teekay, tho tum mujhe dada hi bulana.
Gauri smiles:Teekay.
Shiv hugs Gauri from behind. She struggles and free herself, and blushes😳 and Shiv gets irritated😡.
Shiv: Dada, Dad was lookin for u.
Anupam: I just met him now.
Shiv😡. Anupam😉, Gauri😊 Maya and Palak🤢.
Shiv to Gauri: Tumhari naanine kya kaha?
Gauri: She is very nice. She really regrets for wht she did to ma. u shud have also come.
Shiv: Next time u go, I will come.
Gauri: I will go change and come.
Shiv: Okay.
Gauri gets up and goes. After she walks off, Shiv slowly gets up and follows her.
Gauri opens the room and is shocked. On the wall, her pictures and her pictures with Shiv were put up. There weddin pic, their first dance, one pic of her sleepin and lots of picuters where she is smilin.
Gauri turns and sees Shiv standin behind.
Gauri: Shiv yeh sab???
Shiv: Meine kiya, aur Ipshitha ne madath ki. Pasant aya?
Gauri: Bohut.
Gauri puts her hands around Shiv and puts her head on his chest and looks at all the pics.
Then she sees a picture where she is sleepin.
Gauri: yeh aapne kab liya?
Shiv: Aj subey.
Gauri hugs Shiv.
Gauri: I love u Shiv.
Shiv: I love u too Gauri.

Later all of them are having dinner, Shiv is sitting next to Gauri, and Anupam is sitting opposite to Shiv.Suddenly Ipshitha walks in.
Ipshitha: Hello everyone.
When Anupam sees ipshitha, he starts to get up in excitement, and suddenly Shiv coughs and when Anupam looks at him Shiv glares at him.Poor Anupam sits down. Ipshitha joins them, and starts talkin to them and Gauri thanks her for helpin Shiv with the picture, and Ipshitha says how Shiv had planned all and how they fought over the arrangements and all, and starts tease Gauris ayin how Shiv has become her deewana, whenever Anupam tries to add somethin to the conversation, Shiv glares at him and Anupam shuts up.A little later,
Ipshitha: Anupam?
Anupam looks at Ipshitha: Yes?
Ipshtiha: U alrite??
Anupam confused: Yeah I am fine. Wht happend?
Ipshitha was abt to say somethin, then changes her mind: Nothin.
Shiv starts smilin.

Later Ipshitha and Gauri go to ShivGauri's room. And Anupam and Shiv are talkin.
Anupam: Y did u stop me from talkin to her? I asked u to help me woo her, not create more distance with her.
Shiv looks Anupam and asks in Shiv Kapoor arrogance: How many times has she asked u, whether u r alright?or tried to have any conversation with u, without any reason???
Anupam starts thinking and then starts smilin.
Shiv smiles at him.
Anupam: Aaj tum meri guru bangayi.
Shiv: Ladkiyonki mamlaimay Shiv is God!!!
Anupam: Shhhh Gauri.
Shiv gets scared and turns and looks: Kaha????
Anupam starts laughin.
Shiv gets irritated.
Anupam: Bohut pyar karthe hona thum usse?
Shiv smiles: Bohut. Aaisa lagtha hai ki Gauri meri zindagi mein annese pehle meri zindagi ka koi mathlab nahi tha.

After sometime Ipshitha comes and says good night to all, and looks confused at Anupam and then leaves.
Shiv:I am goin to bed dada. Good night.
He says good night to every1.
Suddenly Nikhila: Shiv, just wait for sometime, have ur desert and go.
Shiv: Time lagega?
Nikhila: Bus 5 mints.
Shiv:Gauri kaha hai mom??
Nikhila:She said she didn't want,so she went up.
Shiv: I will sent her down, sent it thru her.
Nikhila confused: But u r here now. Have it and go.
Shiv: I can't wait.
Shiv walks off leavin a shocked Nikhila and Anupam😲 behind.

Shiv walks in and Gauri was makin their bed. She smiles at him.
Shiv very arrogantly: Gauri, go down and get my desert.
Gauri looks at him confused: But u just came from there ri8?
Shiv: Yeah.
Gauri: So y didn't u have it and come???
Shiv: I didn't want to wait.
Gauri: So u want me to go down and get it for u???
Shiv: Yes
Gauri: No.
Shiv:WHAT???
Gauri: I said no. If u want go get it urself.
Shiv: Wht happend to u???y r u behavin like this?
Gauri: Kyunki mein Shiv Kapoor ki patni hoon. And no1 can order me.
Shiv kinda worried: Gauri, go and get my desert.
Gauri: No.
Shiv: Gauri if u don't go, then Dada and mom will make fun of me later.
Gauri: I don't care.
Shiv: Kya tum yahi chahathe ho ki sab thumari pati ka mazak udathey?
Gauri looks at Shiv in a irritated way.
Shiv: Please????😳
Gauri: Okay😡!!!!

After Mr Kapoor had his desert, and ShivGauri r lyin in bed and talkin. Gauri: I love u Shiv.
Shiv:I love u too Gauri.
Gauri: Acha ek baath batho Shiv.
Shiv:Kya?
Gauri: Aap iss duniya mein sabse zyada pyar kisse karthi ho.
Shiv thinks for sometime:Momse.
All it took was one kick on his butt from Mrs Shiv Kapoor, to throw The Mighty Mr Shiv Kapoor out of his bed. Poor Shiv one minute he was lyin on his bed with his wife and the next on the floor.
Gauri😡: Jaake apni Mom ke saath sojao.
Shiv😆😆😆: U r jealous Gauri.
Gauri😡.
Shiv sits on the bed, and pulls Gauri into his arms: Mein meri Momse is duniyamein sabse zyada pyar karthi hoon.
Gauri😡
Shiv: Lekin meri duniya tho thum ho Gauri.
Gauri😳.
Shiv: I love u Gauri.
Then he kisses her(and u know wht happens next😳).

Another part of the house.
Daksh is thinking: Gauri and Shiv r right. I shud break off all my relations with Noyonika. I shud tell Shyla the truth.

Pls do comment guys.



Edited by shivgauri - 18 years ago

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