ShivGauri(Fanfic) End updated on Pg 51 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
😳 i cant stop laughing and blushing...........tht part was mindblowing.....mighty mr.shiv kapoor down on the floor 😆i can imagine the scene.............continue ASAP 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
thank you so much ruby_renne and preeti_saarrthi.

actually i am too depressed to continue this fanfic after i heardtht shivy is gonna kiss IPSHITHA🤢 instead of GAURI!!!!!😡😡😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
😉 😉 😉 gr88888888888 continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
omg...she kicked him out of the bed..hw did she manage to do that
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can u continue the next part soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
hey waiting for ur next part. 😉 😉 😉 plsssssssssssssss update soon 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
that was great cant wait for next part keep it going
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
hey just wanted to thank sagari55, fida-cute, ash9, racho8 and nikki786.
sorry ppl was so depressed with shiv and ippy affair, thts y i didn't continue. will update the next part soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1 on page 1
Part 2 on page 3
Part 3 on page 6
Part 4 on page 8
Part 5 on page 9

sorry ppl this is a little Daksh oriented part.
ShivGauri Part 6

Next day, after Shiv left for office, Daksh comes to ShivGauri's bedroom.
Daksh: Gauri beta.
Gauri : Haan chachu.
Daksh: Gauri i have decided to tell Shyla everythin. And I have decided to break off all contacts with Noyonika.
Gauri smiles: I am really happy tht u decided to tell her the truth.
Daksh: I know Shyla will leave me after she finds out the truth, but I can't keep her in the dark anymore. I will speak to her after I get back from office.
Gauri: But y do u have to wait till the evening?
Daksh: I want to break off everythin with Noyonika before I speak to Shyla.
Gauri😊: Don't worry chachu everythin will be fine in the end.
After Daksh goes out of the room, Gauri starts gettin tensed and decides to meet Shiv.

Shiv's office.

Gauri walks in.
Shiv😊: Hey love, whts up??
Gauri: Shiv, ek problem hai.

After sometime, Shiv walks into Daksh's cabin.
Shiv: Chachu kuch papers mein apki signatures chahiye.
Daksh takes the paper, and signs the paper. And gives the papers to Shiv.
Shiv: woh chachu....actually I just came to talk to u.
Daksh: Wht is it Shiv?
Shiv: Chachu, Gauri told me tht u r goin to tell chachi everythin.
Daksh: Yes, I have decided to tell her the truth.
Shiv: I am so happy chachu. If u need any help, u know I will always be there for u.
Daksh smiles: I know beta.

Meanwhile, Gauri comes out of Shiv's office and sees Noyonika.
Noyonika very arrogantly: Good morning Mrs Kapoor.
Gauri realizes from the way Noyonika was talkin tht Daksh chachu still haven't talked to her.
Gauri smiles: Good morning. But doesn't look like tht u will have a good day today.
Noyonika😡: Now wht did u do Mrs Kapoor?
Gauri: Nothin. Whtever it is, Daksh chachu will do.
Noyonika: Wht do u mean?
Gauri: Daksh chachu is gonna dump u. He decided to give his marriage another chance.
Noyonika looks shocked: WHAT?!?!?!
Gauri: Yeah, Daksh chachu told me.

Suddenly Shiv comes out of Daksh's room.
Shiv: Gauri, chale?
Gauri: Haan,(she looks at Noyonika) Sorry Noyonika, I have to go now, we have a puja at home, so gotta make preparations for it. (and smiles) Good day.
Gauri walks off leaving a fuming Noyonika.

Much later Noyonika walks into Daksh's office with a file.
Noyonika: Daksh, thumhara kuch signs chahiya.
Daksh: Noyonika, acha hua tum agayi, mein thumse kuch bath karna chahthi hoon.
Noyonika: Woh sab baath mein, pehale inn papers mein sign karo. Aaj hi humme yeh fax karna hai.
Daksh signs those papers and Noyonika looks on with an evil smile.
Noyonika: Good. Now tell me wht is it?
Daksh: Woh...woh....Noyonika...I have decided to tell Shyla all the truth.
Noyonika acts shocked: Wht??
Daksh: I am sorry Noyonika, but this is not right. And I just can't hurt Shyla anymore.
Noyonika starts crying.
Daksh: I am sorry Noyonika, but pls try to understand me.
Noyonika just walks off the cabin.

Outside, Noyonika smiles evily, and looks at the property papers Daksh had signed.
Noyonika: Thanx Daksh, meine tumhare saath pyar ka joota natak is property keliya hi kiya tha.(starts laughin) Gauri agar tum mujhe Daksh ke bare mein mujhe pehle nahi batayatho meri saari plan fail ho jatha. Isliye mein thank you kehne keliya tumhara ghar ara hahoon.

Kapoor Mansion.

ShivGauri r gettin ready for the pooja. Gauri is wearing a pretty blue sari, and Shiv his usual party wear, tbe green jacket. Gauri is brushing her hear. Suddenly Shiv comes from behind and puts his hands aorund Gauri's waist.
Gauri: Yeh kya kar rahi ho?
Shiv kisses her cheek: Apne biwi se pyar.
Gauri: Iss waqt??
Shiv: Kyun apne biwi-se pyaar karne keliye, time table rakna padtha hai?
Gauri: Aap bhi na. Chodo na
Shiv: Nahi...kabhi nahi chodungi.
Shiv starts kissing her ears, and suddenly they hear and sound.
Gauri: Wht was tht sound?
Shiv: Don't know, lets go see.

They go, and realize tht sound was comin from Daksh's room. They go to the room and sees Shyla cryin and hittin Daksh. After sometime Shyla sits on the floor and starts crying. Daksh goes next to her and kneels down next to her, and touches her.
Shyla pulls her hand away: Don't touch me.
Tears starts rolling down Daksh's eyes: I know, u will never be able to forgive, and I know I don't deserve u.But pls give me one last chance? give our marriage one last chance pls?
Shyla pushes him away and gets up: Kabhi nahi.

And Shyla sees ShivGauri standin at the door. Shyla looks at Gauri.
Shyla: I am sorry Gauri. U kept telling me the truth, and I never believed u.
Gauri walks in, followed by Shiv. Shyla hugs Gauri and starts crying.
Gauri looks at Shiv and with her head points at Daksh. Shiv understand and takes Daksh outside.

Gauri: Mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha.
Shyla: Kya?
Gauri: Before Shiiv and I wanted Daksh chachu to tell u the truth, but he never wanted to tell u. This time, Daksh chachu himself wanted to tell u the truth. I know chachi, it is really difficult for u to forgive him. Before even I wanted u to leave chachu, but not anymore, 'coz now he realized his mistakes and wants to correct it. But give him one last chance chachi, pls.
Shyla: No Gauri I can't.
Gauri: It's ur decision chachi.
Gauri gets up to go, and turns back and looks Shyla: Chachi, wht if after leavin Chachu, at one point in ur life, u think tht I shud have given Daksh another chance, and maybe tht time it won't be easy to come back. I want u to be happy in life. Whtever decision u make I don't want u to regret it.

Much later ShivGauri performs the puja and after the puja is over, Shyla comes to ShivGauri who was standin with Daksh.
Shyla: Gauri, meine faisla kiya hai ki, mein Dakshko ek aur chance doonki.
ShivGauri smiles.
ShivGauri: We r so happy for u.
Gauri hugs Shyla.
Shiv:U both talk, we will go.
After ShivGauri goes, Daksh smiles:Thanx, Shyla. I promise Shyla I will never hurt u again.

Suddenly Noyonika enters.


Pls comment guys, I know this part was a little borin and a little long. Next time I will try to make it more interestin.


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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
very nice 👏
but i guess the producers hav forgotten the issue 😆
continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool. 😉 ur ff is just cool yaar. 😉 shiv is such a romantic husband. 😳 😳

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