Shiv & Gauri FF-IshqVishq Part11Pg23 - Page 2

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Thx 4 all the wonderful comments!You guys are so sweet!Sorry to keep you'll waiting..Here comes the next part!
And btw..i forgot to tell you about one more character..Ramu Kaka..He's the servant actually.😆

Recap:Gauri brings Kheer for Shiv.There is Kheer on Shiv's lips so she wipes it away with the pallu of her sari.Shiv really likes the Kheer so Gauri send it to his office.

Part 2

Shiv comes home in the evening.He goes to his room and sees that Gauri was lying down on the bed where he was suppose to sleep with her eyes closed.He gets angry.
S:Gauri!Gauri!
Gauri opens her eyes.She looked very restless and scared.
S:Tum meri jagah par kyun so rahi thi?
G:Woh..main..
She touches her head.She starts feeling giddy.Everything was going round and round to her.She faints on the bed.
S:Gauri?!
Shiv lifts Gauri's head.
S:Gauri..Udho!God..
He makes her lie down on the bed.
S:Papa!Mom!
Shiv calls the doctor on his cell.Mehen,Nikhila,Palak,Maya and Ipshita arrive there.They see Gauri unconcious.
Meh:Oh my god..Gauri ko kya hua?
N:Kya hua Gauri ko Shiv?
S:Maine Doctor ko bula liya hai..Woh aatein hi honge.
Doctor arrives shortly after.
Doc:Aap mein sirf ek yahan mere saath rehiye.Baki sab bahar jaiye pls..
S:Main yahan rehta hoon.
Everyone else goes out and doctor does Gauri's check-up.
S:Kya baat hai Doctor?Anything serious?
Doc:Mr.Kapoor,inhe toh bahut high fever hai aur bahut kamzori bhi.Main kuch dawaiyaan likh deta hoon.Aap pls inhe le aaiyega.Din mein 3 baar aapko inhe ye diwaiyaan pilani hain.Aur haan..plz inka khayaal rekhiyega.Is waqt inhe dawayi se zyaada pyar ki zaroorat hai.Ab main chalta hoon.
The doctor goes out.Shiv follows.

Meh:Kya hua Doctor?
Doc:Main Mr.Shiv Kapoor ko sab bata diya hai.Ab main chalta hoon.Chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.
Doctor leaves.
N:Shiv beta..tum Gauri ke paas jao.Uska khayaal rakhna.
Shiv nods and goes into the room.Gauri was lying unconcious on the bed.

Shiv goes to sit beside her and was about to toch her forhead but stops half-way there.He stands up and was about to put to have his dinner but stops at the door and looks at Gauri.Her innocent face made him more atracted to her.He felt guilty of what he had been doing to her.(toturing her etc.)
Maya:Shiv beta..Arre...Dharwaze pe kyun gade ho?Khan nahin khana hai kya?
She looks at Gauri.
Maya:Are haan..Gauri ko aisi haalat mein chodke tum thori na jaoge..Main tumhara khana upar bej deti hoon.Ok?Tata!
Maya leaves.
Shiv goes to sit on a chair next to Gauri.There's a knock on the door.Ipshita comes in.(she likes Shiv but shiv doesn't like her)
I:Hi Shiv!
She was holding a plate of food.
I:Ye loh..Khana kha loh..
S:Tum rakh do main kha loonga.
Ipshita's face saddens.She puts the plate on the table and leaves frustrated.

Shiv looks at Gauri then at the food on the table beside him.He saw there was Kheer in it which Gauri had made.He remembers the incident in the morning when Gauri wiped the Kheer on his lips and when she sent the Kheer to the office.Just then Gauri starts gettin up.He gest out of his thoughts.Shiv looks at her worriedly.He helps her sit up on the bed.Their eyes meet and they stare at each other for a while when Gauri looks away.Shiv takes teh food from the table.
S:Ye loh..Khana kha loh..
G(weakly):Mera mann nahin hai.
S:Dekho Gauri..Tumhari tabhiyat thik nahin hai.Tumhara khana bahut zaroori hai.Ab khana khao.
Shiv feed Gauri.He sees that there was some 'dhaal' around Gauri's lips.He takes a tissue from the tablea dn wipes it away.Gauri looks at Shiv and remembers the same incident in the morning.After finshing the food which both of them shared,Shiv asked Gauri to sleep.
S:Ab tum so jao.Maine Ramu Kaka ko keh diya hai..kal tak tumhari dawaiyaan aajayegi.
Gauri starts getting up.
S:Kahan ja rahi ho?
G:Sone..
S:Tum bed par sogi.
G:Lakin aap?
S:Main..niche so lunga.
G:Lakin..
S:Main kaha na..Ab so jao.
Shiv helps Gauri lie down.He maked his bed on the floor and switches off the light.He goes to lie down.Hauri has her eyes closed and Shiv is just looking at her.The song 'Tumhi dekho na' from KANK plays in the background.When Shiv closes his eyes,Gauri opens hers and looks at Shiv.
G(thinks):Pata nahin kya likha hai mere nasib mein.Jab main theek ho jaaungi toh Shiv phir se apne aap badal jayenge aur phir se sab kuch pehle ki tarah ho jayega.
The title song plays.(slow version but not sad one)

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