Shiv & Gauri FF-IshqVishq Part11Pg23

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys!I know we all just love Shiv-Gauri's jodi.So Ive decided to write a fanfic on them.I also have a fanfic based on Prem-Mukti.So I guess this is my 2nd fanfic eva!
Here's a brief introduction of the characters:

Characters(brackets indicate negative or possitive role)
Gauri(Possitive)
Shiv(Possitive)
Mehen(Possitive)
Nikhila(Possitve)
Shashank(Posstive + Negative)
Ipshita(Possitive + Negative)
Anupam(Possitive)
Palak(Negative)
Maya(Negative)
Dadi(Possitive)

Gauri & Shiv-Married
Mehen and Nikhila-Married
Shashank,Ipshita,palak,Anupam-Single
Maya-Divorced

They are basically the same in character except shashank..

Part 1

Shiv was standing in front of the mirror getting ready for work.Just then,Guari enters the room holding a bowl of 'Kheer' in her hand.Shiv looks at her frustratingly and just ignores her.Gauri walks over to shiv who was about to go out.
G:Kheer..
S:Mujhe nahin chahiye
G:Lakin Badi ma ne diya hai.Aapki deal kamiyab ho isilye maine ye kheer banaya.
S:Toh?Main kya karu?
G:Badi ma ne kaha hai..Kha lijiye na..
S(to himself):Kya musibat hai..Aur badi ma bhi na bas..
S:Thik hai..Do mujhe..
He takes the bowl from her and drinks it.When he finished it he gave the bowl back to Gauri.He was about to leave when Gauri called him.
G:Suniye..
Shiv stops at turns to look at her.Gauri turns to face Shiv.
G:Woh..
She points at Shiv's mouth than her's.There wa Kheer around Shiv lips.
Shiv still did not understand.
S:What?
G:Ek minute..
She uses the pallu of her sari to wipe away the Kheer.
G:Woh aapke muh par Kheer laga hua tha.
Shiv looks at her surprisingly at touches his lips.
S:Umm..(coughs)thx..
Gauri looks at him surprisingly.
S:Lakin aage se mujhe pehle hi bata dena..
Gauri looks down again and Shiv leaves.Shiv goes down and sees that there was no one on the breakfast table.He was walking pass it when he sees the Kheer which Gauri made on the table.He looked around to see if there was anyone around.There was no one.He walks to the tabl where the Kheer was kept.He had really liked it so he drinks more.Gauri comes there and sees him drinking.Gauri coughs.Shiv is shocked to see her.
S:Woh..main..woh..
G:Agar aapko Kheer pasand hai toh main aapke liye pack kardu?
S:Nahin..uski koi zarurat nahin hai..Waise bhi mujhe utna khaas nahin laga Kheer.Bas yuhi test kar raha tha.Warna mujhe koi shonk nahin hai tumhar haaton ka Kheer khana ka.
Gauri knew he was lying.Shiv leaves.Gauri smiles and goes to the kitchen.

A scene is shown of the meeting taking place.Mehen is also there.The meeting is abou the deal.After the meeting Shiv goes to his cabin.
He sees a tiffin on the table.He sits donw and opens it.There was Kheer in it.The one which Gauri had made.He was surprised.There was a note together with it.He unfolded it.It read:

Dear Shiv,
Main jaanti hoon ki aapko Kheer bahut pasandh aaya.Aap is baat par inkaar nahin kar sakte.Isiliye maine aapke liye ye Kheer beja.Umeed karti ho aapki deal fix ho gayi hogi.
-Gauri

Shiv takes the spoon and drinks it.
S(thinks to himself):Chahe kitna bhi nafarat karu use.Lakin manaa parega,Kheer bahut aacha banati hai.Lakin iska matlab ye bhi nahin ki main use pasand karne laga hoon.Yaan phir kya sach mein..
He shakes his head left to right.

To be contd...Hope you liked it!Do post your comments!

Edited by anu93 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats wonderful ,plzzzzzz continue ] 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thax it is really nice of u
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hey thats nice i really liked it........
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Thx 4 all the wonderful comments!I'll be updating tml!
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yess...pls continue!!
thats so sweet!!!!!!!
kheer...thats my favourite to!!
he he 😆
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That was really good! 👏 ...do continue plz! 😃
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tht was excellent, 👏 pls do continue
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wow, its really gud!continue sn!
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rocking beginning anu.
it was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
plz do cont it soon.

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