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Posted: 18 years ago
Nice part jaan!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue! šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey guys,
Thank you so much for your appreciation. I am really overwhelmed! I dont know what to say... kuch samajh nahin aa raha hai.... 😊 😳
I am gonna put up some more scenes soon.. I have infact tried to pen in 2 as soon as I got up at 11:30 AM as I was working too late.. last nite... šŸ˜•
Thank you so much for understanding...
More coming up .... hold on...........
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sareeta

Hey guys,
Thank you so much for your appreciation. I am really overwhelmed! I dont know what to say... kuch samajh nahin aa raha hai.... 😊 😳
I am gonna put up some more scenes soon.. I have infact tried to pen in 2 as soon as I got up at 11:30 AM as I was working too late.. last nite... šŸ˜•
Thank you so much for understanding...
More coming up .... hold on...........



tkss diišŸ‘

we'll wait😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~~RaZ~~



tkss diišŸ‘

we'll wait😃



nd itz not coz of us..

u got da real talentšŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
Earlier:
He gets up and almost brushes against the wall, when he lets in pain.. "Ouch… aaah…"

Continued:

Struggling to stand up herself…."Kya Hua….. haaan … Shiv…"
"Pata nahin…" almost in a low voice… clutching his shoulder , looking over his shoulder…
Gauri… moving towards him.. "Ek min.. dekhoon ton…"
"Aye.. kya kar rahi… ho… I am fine…" stopping her mid way..
and struggling… he moves towards the entrance to the ladder….when she notices and …
"Shiv… Ek min… aapki shirt…."

The back of his shirt, stained with blood.. she realizes he hut himself during their slip , downhill and bruises must have worsened during the night due the cold and getting drenched…
"Kya hai…"
"Aap ke peet par… shaayad… "
"Haan.. its ok.. main theek hoon.. "
"Chalo… hame nikalna.. hai…"

Feeling his pain… and unable to convince and talk to him… she looks on.. and then determined, she follows… shiv, carrying his bag…behind him…
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow

anoder gr8 1 šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great! You have a lot of talent and I'm happy that your writing us so many updates because we can never have too many! Please continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG.. THIS WAS THE BEST FAN FIC.. SOOOOO CUTEE.. PLEASE CONTINUE
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Posted: 18 years ago
Earlier:
Feeling his pain… and unable to convince and talk to him… she looks on.. and then determined, she follows… shiv, carrying his bag…behind him…

Continued:
Shiv descends the ladder first this time … and Gauri, a lil apprehensive , throws his bag down on his cue and follows him down .. while shiv watches her , as she climbs down and when she is almost done, turns arnd.. towards the pond.. and the waterfall.. and says..

"Jaldi karo…"
Nodding her head.. "Ji.."

Without looking back, he goes towards the pond… readying to take a dip ……
Splash…!!!

Meanwhile… Gauri, leaving his bag near his clothes and giving one glance towards him in the pond, heads off the other way to wander around near the pond.. not too far , looking at lil shrubs and trees , Shiv looking at her from the pond… totally bemused… "paagal hai… ", turning to take a dip yet again…
Then suddenly, loudly.. "Gauri….", startling her..
"Zyaada door mat jao… tumhein dhoondhe , nahin aane waala main…"
"Yahin rehna… sher aur cuckoos ke saath….", and laughing at his own joke… swims around to the other end…
Edited by sareeta - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
i am sorry i shouldn't ask this. but he is taking a swing with his clothes on. 😳

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