Create Shiv/Gauri romantic bonding scenes - Page 28

Earlier:
"Tumhaari tabiyat theek nahin... tum itni weak thi.. main kitna pareshaan ...aur tum... " stopping mid sentence..looking at her... she looks at him... all affectionate and they share a moment , before she breaks it....

Continued:
A moment they shared, his concern, her acknowledgement, evident in the silence…when she says…breaking the stare looking at the container…
"Yeh.. Yeh…"
"Kya hai yeh ….? "
"Ji.. wo aapko peet pe chot lagi toh….."
Looking perplexed… totally lost …
"kya bol rahi ho… ye hai kya… "
"Dawai hai… "
"What ?!?, main nahin khaane waala… ye hari waali….No way…"
Immediately , reassuring him…
"Nahin… khaana nahin hai.. chot par lagalenge.. toh.."

"Dekho.. mujhe chot vot nahin lagi… please….so ye sab…".. looking guilty almost seeing her.. yet wanting to avoid the green paste in what ever way he can….

"dekhiye… laga lenge.. toh, chot jaldi theek hoga.. baba kehte hai… isse chot jaldi theek hoga…chot se khoon nikal raha tha subah.. please laga leegiye.."

Not able to hide the pain … of his wounds on the back…..and looking even more perplexed…
"Baba? Oh.. yeah vaid… yeah right…" almost sounding like he has given in… ready to get rid of the damn pain..

He puts his hand forth , asking for the container , when she says… lowering her eyes..
"aapko shirt utaarni padegi… peet par hai na…"
"Tum mujhe do… main laga loonga…".. "Kahaaan phasaa… main…."
"Par…"
"Do …."

She hands it over, turning around , her back facing him… and he removing his shirt , realizes , he cant do it…and slowly goes to her , her back facing him…

"Uh… yeh.. tumhi…" breaking mid sentence , when she turns around , hands over the container and turns around, his back facing him… when she says… "yeh bhi .. utaarni padegi…" almost suppressing a smile imagining his irritation…, and he raising his hands in irritation and removing his tee, and she immediately… gets to work putting the paste on his wounds.. like she is in a hurry to get it over and done with, while he seems to feel at lot more at ease with the pain reducing ….when she says…

"ji.. ho gaya…"

When he is about to wear his tee, she says…
"Aap ye na pehne.. chot ko khula rehna zaroori, jaldi bharta hai.. "
"Gauri…" irritated now… "main aise nahin ghoom sakta … I can't …"..
"Nahin wo.. sirf yeah.. aap shirt pehen lo…"….
Making a namaste , in irritation.. "Thanks…" , wears his shirt…. and turns around towards the pond… and towards her..
"Tum fresh ho jao… main abhi aata hoon…. Don't you dare go away from here… "
"Par .. aap.."
"Mujhe bhook lagi hai… and I know you are too… so please….", "Aur ye lo… khao…" removing the guava from this pocket trouser, thrusting it to her… Gauri looking surprised…."Eat .. it.. Ghooro mat…" and he storms off…..leaving Gauri standing watching him go.. a smile spreading over her face..…

Originally posted by: himali_kokate

ok trying my bit
i know i have assumed some things here but i hope u forgive me for that......
please ignore my mistakes.....


It was late in the night……shiv was railing over balcony and watching fullmoon shining brightly ……sleep was million miles away from him…….soft breeze ruffling his hair….

For a fraction of second he thought he saw gauri's face in unblemished moon…….smile that light up her face occasionally, floated across his eyes….he smiled unknowingly….

Suniye……her soothing voice filled his ears….he turned back in haste as if he was waiting for an eternity to hear her calling him…….

He gazed around….his bedroom looked exactly the way it was……bathed in moon light.
Curtains flying with soft breeze………
But there was no sign of gauri in room….slowly it dawned on him that gauri wasn't there…….it was just few hours of time before she left for kolkata with her father after the most unfortunate showdown in mukesh mills……
She hadn't uttered a single word since then……it was the silence and her composure that killed him……he wanted her to yell at him……slap him. That would have pacified fire of guilt that was burning in his chest…….a surge of guilt pervaded his being.

He went inside and saw her blanket rolled up to wall….he remembered her curling up in it when he refused to switch off AC……

He went near the bedside table where his wedding picture was kept…..he studied it for minute…….couldn't kept his eyes off gauri's face……..whats happening with me…he thought
I hate her……..i hate her………I hate her……she ruined my life……I am not missing her………he stopped chanting when his conscience told him point blank that he was lying……..not that he loved her but there was this unfathomable attraction developing between them that had him worried………

He opened gauri's cupboard and moved his hand over her saris….it was almost like touching her……..he smiled to himself as he recalled gauri trembling when he clasped her hand in party while dancing……..

He reprimanded himself not to miss gauri which was proving so difficult……..

He closed the cupboard and picked up a book from the shelf and stretched on bed reading it with his glasses on…it was his usual ordeal that he followed every night.

He pretended reading it for some time……that opened page was slipping through his brain without leaving slightest trace of meaning behind…..
The more he attempted to focus on the print on the page before him, the more clearly he could see Gauri's sweet and innocent face………


Nikhila's eyes opened widely……it took her some time to gather what made that ringing noice….as she realized that it was her cell…..her hurried hand got hold of the clock whose luminous dial showed time as 2.10 am.

She picked it up when Gauri's concerned voice had her panicked………she heaved a sigh as Gauri said that everyone was fine in kolkata…….

Gauri was hesitating a bit to say for what she had called at 2 in the morning….

Wo ma……..aap jara hamare I mean shiv ke kamre me jakar dekhengi…..

It was nikhila's time to startled…….what on the earth was wrong with this girl???

Wo ma….wo hai na…shiv…..wo har raat book padhate hai sone se pehle….aur phir padhate padhate so jate hai……..mai wo book nikal ti hun aur wo chashma nikalkar mere hath me dete hai……..

Nikhila was still clueless about what gauri was saying…….but she decided to listen to her…..

Aaj bhi shayad…..neend me shiv vahi kare…….i mean aadat hai na……shayad wo chashma nikalkar soche ke mai wahi hun aur phir wo chashma tut jayega na neeche girke….

Nikhila laughed……..to itni fikr hai tumhe shiv ke chashme ki………..

Gauri replied almost biting her tongue…..nahi wo chashme ki kaanch kahi unke pairo me na lag jaye subah…..bed se utarte waqt………wo aadhe neend me hi hote hai jab subah uthate hai……she said her voice controlled but nikhila could sense gauri's suppressed laughter……

She was dumbfounded…..to see gauri's love and concern for shiv who always treated her like a drag…..
Ok don't worry beta….i will see that……..good night……her eyes welled up with tears….

She tried sleeping again……wishing that it was all true and shiv was missing gauri too but her brains told her that it wasn't possible……..

She couldn't sleep and decided to check herself……….

As she opened shiv's bedroom……..she saw to her biggest astonishment…….shiv was sleeping with a book on his chest….his wedding pictureframe lying beside him where she assumed Gauri must be sleeping usually….

And there was his glasses……on carpet……..completely shattered………

awesome yaar totally awesome.i have never read sumthing as different,real and sweet as this.very well done👏

Originally posted by: kavya_luvseizy

ok here goes my story:
finally shiv manages to throw gauri out of the house, dat nite is supposed to be the happiest nite in his life, so he goes out and parties with his frnds but somewhere down his heart he feels smthng missing as if he is incomplete, he doesnt knw wats wrong but wat the heck,he has accomplished his mission, so he has to celebrate and he does!! next morning he wakes up and is very happy dat he doesnt have to see gauri's face anymore! he freshens up and after having bath comes out and is waiting for gauri to get thngs ready for him wen he realises dat she is nt with him anymore, then at the breakfast table, where he was accustomed to her serving him, then in the afternoons wen she called him to find out if he had lunch, her soft voice, her shy eyes dat never dared to look into his, played with his thots, damn her!! she was nt present yet she made hr presence felt, he nvr knew y he thot so much abt her, he hates her , his ears were dying to hear the soft voice saying "shiv....", that silence wich spoke volumes w/o saying a word..wat was it abt her dat he cant stop thnkng abt her, 'i hate her iam done with her now iam happy, i dnt ahve to see her face again', he repeated to himself but cudnt take the picture of her inncoent face from his mind..... and the worst part now he cudnt sleep in the nite he was still thnkng abt her in the day wich was 24hrs hours long there wasnt a single second wen he did not thnk abt her, it was as if she had conquered his mind and took the control of his thots , he turned to look at the window, iamgined her standing at the window, for a moment he felt happy dat she is there but then she wasnt........
to be continued...
hey jus tell me how is it?? dis is my first time, jus pardon me if i bored u guys, i do want to continue but only if u guys like it and grant me the permission to go ahead....

Hey its so nice, please continue... waiting for the next part.....😊

Originally posted by: sareeta

Earlier:
"Tumhaari tabiyat theek nahin... tum itni weak thi.. main kitna pareshaan ...aur tum... " stopping mid sentence..looking at her... she looks at him... all affectionate and they share a moment , before she breaks it....

Continued:
A moment they shared, his concern, her acknowledgement, evident in the silence…when she says…breaking the stare looking at the container…
"Yeh.. Yeh…"
"Kya hai yeh ….? "
"Ji.. wo aapko peet pe chot lagi toh….."
Looking perplexed… totally lost …
"kya bol rahi ho… ye hai kya… "
"Dawai hai… "
"What ?!?, main nahin khaane waala… ye hari waali….No way…"
Immediately , reassuring him…
"Nahin… khaana nahin hai.. chot par lagalenge.. toh.."

"Dekho.. mujhe chot vot nahin lagi… please….so ye sab…".. looking guilty almost seeing her.. yet wanting to avoid the green paste in what ever way he can….

"dekhiye… laga lenge.. toh, chot jaldi theek hoga.. baba kehte hai… isse chot jaldi theek hoga…chot se khoon nikal raha tha subah.. please laga leegiye.."

Not able to hide the pain … of his wounds on the back…..and looking even more perplexed…
"Baba? Oh.. yeah vaid… yeah right…" almost sounding like he has given in… ready to get rid of the damn pain..

He puts his hand forth , asking for the container , when she says… lowering her eyes..
"aapko shirt utaarni padegi… peet par hai na…"
"Tum mujhe do… main laga loonga…".. "Kahaaan phasaa… main…."
"Par…"
"Do …."

She hands it over, turning around , her back facing him… and he removing his shirt , realizes , he cant do it…and slowly goes to her , her back facing him…

"Uh… yeh.. tumhi…" breaking mid sentence , when she turns around , hands over the container and turns around, his back facing him… when she says… "yeh bhi .. utaarni padegi…" almost suppressing a smile imagining his irritation…, and he raising his hands in irritation and removing his tee, and she immediately… gets to work putting the paste on his wounds.. like she is in a hurry to get it over and done with, while he seems to feel at lot more at ease with the pain reducing ….when she says…

"ji.. ho gaya…"

When he is about to wear his tee, she says…
"Aap ye na pehne.. chot ko khula rehna zaroori, jaldi bharta hai.. "
"Gauri…" irritated now… "main aise nahin ghoom sakta … I can't …"..
"Nahin wo.. sirf yeah.. aap shirt pehen lo…"….
Making a namaste , in irritation.. "Thanks…" , wears his shirt…. and turns around towards the pond… and towards her..
"Tum fresh ho jao… main abhi aata hoon…. Don't you dare go away from here… "
"Par .. aap.."
"Mujhe bhook lagi hai… and I know you are too… so please….", "Aur ye lo… khao…" removing the guava from this pocket trouser, thrusting it to her… Gauri looking surprised…."Eat .. it.. Ghooro mat…" and he storms off…..leaving Gauri standing watching him go.. a smile spreading over her face..…

marvellous👏👏👏

Originally posted by: sareeta

Hey its so nice, please continue... waiting for the next part.....😊

yeah v r waiting for the next update from both of u soooon
by the way sareeta thanx for updating a lot today
thanx

Originally posted by: ash9

yeah v r waiting for the next update from both of u soooon
by the way sareeta thanx for updating a lot today
thanx

THank you and I am waiting for updates from a lot of others who write on this thread.. such amazing imagination , such lovely scenes.... Its a treat to read the scenes they pen down...

And thank you so much Ash, for such nice compliments... Its a sunday today and I tried to do as much as I could to update it... Will deffo try to end this one.. soon by tonite... Kal serial bhi tho dekhna hai na? 😆

tks all for updatin diz daily 👏 👏 👏

will wait for more 😛

sareetaaaaaaaaaa good morning!!!!!!!!!!

damn another gr88 morning...jus cuz of u...perfect!!

thank u thank u thank u sooooooooooo muchhhh!!!!!!!!!

keep up the good work.. 👏

hi di.........sorry for late comments but i had my exams today..........as soon as i came home i switched on my pc..........and what a treat....so many updates...........ur r marvellous di 👏 ......................ur brain is so fast at these things.................S-G r coming closer and closer 😳 ................continue soon di and the others like kavya too r doing a gr8 job........continue soon guys 😊

Originally posted by: sareeta

THank you and I am waiting for updates from a lot of others who write on this thread.. such amazing imagination , such lovely scenes.... Its a treat to read the scenes they pen down...

And thank you so much Ash, for such nice compliments... Its a sunday today and I tried to do as much as I could to update it... Will deffo try to end this one.. soon by tonite... Kal serial bhi tho dekhna hai na? 😆

thanx to u this weekend i didnt feel bored.....than u soo much for that
i will def wait for your next part😊