Create Shiv/Gauri romantic bonding scenes - Page 24

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!!! u've got me hooked to this thread!!! di...u are a really awesome writer!! i wish ekta copies this!!! why doesn;t she hire her creative team from here...lolz we can make the serials so much better! plz plz plz...continue...i wanna see the reaction when they wake up!
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok here goes my story:
finally shiv manages to throw gauri out of the house, dat nite is supposed to be the happiest nite in his life, so he goes out and parties with his frnds but somewhere down his heart he feels smthng missing as if he is incomplete, he doesnt knw wats wrong but wat the heck,he has accomplished his mission, so he has to celebrate and he does!! next morning he wakes up and is very happy dat he doesnt have to see gauri's face anymore! he freshens up and after having bath comes out and is waiting for gauri to get thngs ready for him wen he realises dat she is nt with him anymore, then at the breakfast table, where he was accustomed to her serving him, then in the afternoons wen she called him to find out if he had lunch, her soft voice, her shy eyes dat never dared to look into his, played with his thots, damn her!! she was nt present yet she made hr presence felt, he nvr knew y he thot so much abt her, he hates her , his ears were dying to hear the soft voice saying "shiv....", that silence wich spoke volumes w/o saying a word..wat was it abt her dat he cant stop thnkng abt her, 'i hate her iam done with her now iam happy, i dnt ahve to see her face again', he repeated to himself but cudnt take the picture of her inncoent face from his mind..... and the worst part now he cudnt sleep in the nite he was still thnkng abt her in the day wich was 24hrs hours long there wasnt a single second wen he did not thnk abt her, it was as if she had conquered his mind and took the control of his thots , he turned to look at the window, iamgined her standing at the window, for a moment he felt happy dat she is there but then she wasnt........
to be continued...
hey jus tell me how is it?? dis is my first time, jus pardon me if i bored u guys, i do want to continue but only if u guys like it and grant me the permission to go ahead....
Edited by kavya_luvseizy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Its awesome, do continue my dear! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
yeah! its great please continue.
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Posted: 18 years ago
its gr888888........plz cont 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
It's great! you should continue!

And sareeta your stories made my morning!!! It's around 4 in the afternoon here but I just changed the batteries in my keyboard! I ahve a cordless one so the batteries died but me and my awesome instructions managed to get it working 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
ohhhhhhhhhhhh i have read them all i have no words to explain how much i like it.keep it up continue guys mindblowing work 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wake up soon Sareeta! I'm waiting to read the next part so eagerly! Everyone else should continue there's also!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pm4eva

Wake up soon Sareeta! I'm waiting to read the next part so eagerly! Everyone else should continue there's also!!



even im waiting
i cat wait to read the next part

😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9



even im waiting
i cat wait to read the next part

😊

me 3..

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