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Posted: 18 years ago
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Staring out through the window into the darkness…, lost in thought, shiv eventually drifts into a peaceful sleep…Gauri asleep against his chest… wrapped in his arms… his head propped against hers in sleep…

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With the downpour having reduced to a tiny drizzle and the morning rays breaking through the window of the lil enclosure, the enclosure is better lit and Shiv shifts uncomfortably in his sleep, with the morning rays hitting eyes and face and the sudden warmth seeming alien in a otherwise cold , freezing shack…

Shifting a lil , shiv jerks his eyes open , still registering the place he is in… and still not moving , he tries to recollect, the scene of the previous night…Gauri all cold and shivering and he helping to the corner .. and she was running a temperature possibly… and his thoughts…

He slowly looks down to see Gauri still asleep on his chest, holding on to his shirt , all huddled up in his arms….her face covered with a few strands of her hair.. and he almost , unconsciously removes them gently and watches her face and then slowly…with one hand still wrapped around her… pulls his bag towards with the other and rummages through , to see if he can find something…and he does … one guava..and smiles.. he remembers not having eaten both that she handed him…in that pit…she had needed them more…

He slowly…looks back at her and …pats on her arm…. "Gauri…."
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sareeta

Earlier:
Staring out through the window into the darkness…, lost in thought, shiv eventually drifts into a peaceful sleep…Gauri asleep against his chest… wrapped in his arms… his head propped against hers in sleep…

Continued:
With the downpour having reduced to a tiny drizzle and the morning rays breaking through the window of the lil enclosure, the enclosure is better lit and Shiv shifts uncomfortably in his sleep, with the morning rays hitting eyes and face and the sudden warmth seeming alien in a otherwise cold , freezing shack…

Shifting a lil , shiv jerks his eyes open , still registering the place he is in… and still not moving , he tries to recollect, the scene of the previous night…Gauri all cold and shivering and he helping to the corner .. and she was running a temperature possibly… and his thoughts…

He slowly looks down to see Gauri still asleep on his chest, holding on to his shirt , all huddled up in his arms….her face covered with a few strands of her hair.. and he almost , unconsciously removes them gently and watches her face and then slowly…with one hand still wrapped around her… pulls his bag towards with the other and rummages through , to see if he can find something…and he does … one guava..and smiles.. he remembers not having eaten both that she handed him…in that pit…she had needed them more…

He slowly…looks back at her and …pats on her arm…. "Gauri…."



OMG..........


awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee👏


u make scenes lik in real😉

u got gr8 telent👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awww, how cute u r great yaar! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Earlier:
He slowly…looks back at her and …pats on her arm…. "Gauri…."

Continued:
"Gauri…"… still patting her arm…and finally .. "Gauri… utho…", patting on her cheek…
and Gauri slowly opens her eyes, without moving , seeing his face, and is still registering what happened, when ….
"Ab , uthogi… mera haath dard kar raha hai…"
Totally stumped and still half asleep… she tries to shift , when Shiv, then removes his hand and she actually takes in the situation and looks at her dupatta.. and at the corner where she was and then finally at him… who is busy stretching his hands.. not looking at her..
"Shiv…"
He turns to her… even before she completes calling his name and …
"Tum thand se kaamp rahi thi…isiliye tumhein.. is kone.. mein bithana pada.. tum neend mein thi…" in a gentle voice…and almost immediately.. in a his usual mocking voice…
"Aur waise bhi tumhe , us entrance waale kone ke alava, aur koi kona nahin mila sone ko?, baarish mein bheeg rahi thi tum…jahaan sabse zyaada bheeg sakti ho… wahi jaake bait gayi…aaaaaah", raising his hands in exasperation…"Gawd…"

"Ji… wo.. aap is taraf the… tho main…"
"Main itna mota nahin ki saari jagah mujhe chahiye thi….Ufff…jagah thi is taraf…", pointing to the space, next to him….
Suddenly holding her arm and then touching her forehead… "Thank god.. bukhaar nahin hai.. warna, ab mujhe compunder bhi banna padta…"

"ab please utho… aur freshen up ho… hame nikalna hai.. jaldi…"

He gets up and almost brushes against the wall, when he lets in pain.. "Ouch… aaah…"
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Posted: 18 years ago
yeyyyyy u're bakkkkk 😊

coolll 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
dat waz funny 😆 😆

but awesomeeeee again 👏 👏 👏

u r gr8 yaar 😛 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
it is great. please continue. i know it is selfish and you have things to do. but can't help it the story is so good we want to know what happens next. great job. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow, its great, u r awesome yaar! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
YAY!!! Your on! I'm gonna go read them now!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
I'm done and they were sooo good! I hope we aren't bothering you to death by keep asking for more but they are soo good! Please continue soon!

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