FF:GauriShiv-Saathi re..Updtd Pg:20 10thOct09 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Tht ws a rlly gud upd8. atleast this drv man is out da way but wot nxt.??????? upd8 ASAP, i want 2 find out wot will happen nxt!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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part 3................
nxt scene kapoor house MAHEN:Shiv!! dhruv ko fyr kr k acha kiya beta humien aise employees ki bilkul zaroorat nhi hai SHIV: ji dad......aur uss ki wajah se humari company... ENTER SAMAR SAMAR:bhayya woh ...miene raj se uss silsilay mien baat ki thi....par woh tho keh raha tha k... both the bros go frm dere wyl talkin mahen's fone rings MAHEN: haan, bol yaar shashank is on the lyn SHANX: sunn..tu kal hi ghar aaja
MAHEN: pata hai aaj ka yeh sab sunne k baad mein bht sharminda hoon...aur aaj hi aana chahta tha apne bete k liye teri beti ka haath maangne par...
SHANX: par..??
MAHEN: par miene abhi tak shiv se baat bhi nhi ki hai. Aur tumhien tho aaj kal k generation k baare mien pata hi hai. frst luv nd den shaadi!
SHANX: haan,haan. Tho hum in dono ko waqt denge na....Jaanne ka..pehchanne ka, phir ja ke koi faisla lenge
MAHEN: lkin mien chahta hoon k woh laxmi jald se jald ghar aajaye
SHANX: aggar bhagwaan ne chaha tho woh tumhare hi ghar ayegi!
MAHEN: theek hai, nikhila se final kar k mien tmhien bta tha hoon
he trnz 2 leave nd talk 2 nikhila nd sees shiv nd samar standin dere. samar smylz nd leaves. Shiv is still dere
on the other hand....wen shashank keeps the fone...he sees gauri
GAURI: baba..ap kisse baat karrahe they?
kapoor house:
SHIV: dad...whom were u talkin 2??
MEHTA HOUSE:
SHNX: beta...woh
GAURI: baba..mien janti hoon aap meri shaadi ki baat krrahe they . BABA aap jante hain na k mien shaadi nhi krna chahti, aapko mien aur kaya chor k kyun jayenge?,,,,ma bhi nhi hai
shnx lux up at her
GAURI: baba........plz meri shaadi ki baatein krna chor dijiye na
SHNX: beta par woh bht ache log hain aur unhen mien ache se jaanta hoon ...aur tum bhi
GAURI: mjhe nhi pata.MIen aap ko aur kaya ko chor k khin nhi jaaoongi!!!!!
SHNX: achaa...tho kaunsa mein teri shaadi kal hi karraha hoon??
he holds her frm her shoulders nd makes her sit bsyd him
SHNX: beta dekh....tere liye bht se rishtey aye par miene khud hi mana krdiya na? kyun woh log paise dekhte hain....aur soorat dekhte hain mien aisa nhin chahta, mien chahta hiin k koi tjhe teri maa k diye hue khoobsoorat sanskaar k bina par tjhe pasand kare aur teri andar baahar dono ki khoobsoorti ki daat de
GAURI: par baba...
SHNX: sshhhh,....
GAURI: acha baba....jaise app kahenge waise hi karoongi
shnx kisses her on her head.dey smyl
KAPOOR HOUSE:
mahen nd shiv nd nikhila r sittin on da sofa
NIKHILA: Beta woh bht achi larki hai
SHIV: mom mjhe yeh nhi janna k woh kaisi larki hai...ya kaun hai. Im nt anti-shaadi, mien shaadi karoonga woh bhi aap logon k pasand ki par...par laxmi se nhi!
MAHEN ND NIKHILA:😕😕
MAHEN: laxmi kaun?
SHIV: arey laxmi...gopal uncle ki beti jis k baare mien aap fone pe baat karrahe they!
MAHEN: kiya?? fone pe?? mien tho gauri ki baat karraha tha paagal!..woh humare ghar ki laxmi ban kar aaye aisa mien chahta hoon
NIKHILA:😆
MAHEN: tumhien gauri nhi pasand??😕
SHIV: nhi...miene aisa tho nhi kaha..
MAHEN: arey waah! tho phir theek hai baat pakki ho gayee shiv se!
😃
SHIV: wait a minute...1 baat sahise btaaiye..woh larki hai kaun??😕
nikhila nd mahen hve a wyd smyl on deir faces which dey cant cntrl
both say 2getha: GAURI!!!!!😃
scene shifts...*(i need 2 add gyz..shiv has a sis also...shreya...(shilpa anand))
shiv...samar...nd shreya r in deir backyard
SHIV; gauri!!??
SAMAR:gauri!?!
SHREYA:gauri!!!!!😃😊
SHIV: haan yaar...gauri....jisse miene aaj tak informal baatien hi nhi ki
SHREYA: arey no prob bhayya kaaya nd gauri r amongst my bssttt frnz. she'll really b perfct 4 u!
SHIV(takes a sigh): i dont kno wat mom nd dad r upto.....
end of part 3!hope u lyk it
plz cmnt!waitin........!
Edited by Reeno!!! - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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read both the parts together... love the way ur fanfic is going... pls continue soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: shivgauri

read both the parts together... love the way ur fanfic is going... pls continue soon😃

thnk u kuku!.......i suppose i lrnt it all frm u! ure a wndrful writer nd im nuthin in frnt of u yaar....u roq!
thnx fr da complimnt darlin!
luv
reeno
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

thnk u kuku!.......i suppose i lrnt it all frm u! ure a wndrful writer nd im nuthin in frnt of u yaar....u roq!
thnx fr da complimnt darlin!
luv
reeno


ohmigod! don't talk like tht yaar.. i get scared!
i am not all tht great writer, compared to other ppl in this forum.... specially u, love the way u take the story forward in a normal way😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivgauri


ohmigod! don't talk like tht yaar.. i get scared!
i am not all tht great writer, compared to other ppl in this forum.... specially u, love the way u take the story forward in a normal way😃

muaahh!!!!😛
luv u fr dis yaara!😳😳
reeno
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

muaahh!!!!😛
luv u fr dis yaara!😳😳
reeno


hehehe☺️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Reena jus read all the three parts.. they r jus amazing.... PLzz continue soon... n plzz do PM me when u update......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey Reena jus read all the three parts.. they r jus amazing.... PLzz continue soon... n plzz do PM me when u update......

sure darling....m jst about 2 update!
luv u
reeno
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Posted: 16 years ago
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part4
nxt day
shnx calls kaaya nd gauri downstairs frm deir room
GAURI ND KAAYA: yes baba?!
SHNX: grlz... as u already kno...,2 day mahen uncle's cmin over 2 c gauri 4 shiv nd...
The momnt he says dis, both da grlz r shokd nd confuzd dey luk at each other. gauri openz wyd eyez nd lux at shashank
SHNX: kiya hua? miene tho baat khatam bhi nhi ki aur tum dono aisi shaklen banare ho jaise mjhe shaikaar k liye dhoondne aye ho
KAAYA:baba.....gauri didi k liye shiv bhayya ka rishta aya hai?
kaaya is about 2 laugh as gauri nd shiv dint actually kno each other bt she cntrols seeing gauri's pale face
GAURI: aap ne yeh mjhe pehle tho nhi btaya!?
SHNX: tum ne poocha nhi aur kaha k jaise mein chahta hoon....kyun? koi prob hai kiya?
kaaya shrugs nd den takes gauri asyd saying 2 shnx tht dere wz no prob at all
KAAYA 2 GAURI: did!?! aggar shiv bhayya ka rishta aya hai tho sahi hai na,,....atleast aap log thora bht tho jante ho 1 doosre ko...apko itna tho pata hai k unhen kiya baatien achi lagti hain aur kiya nhi etc etc...kisi bilkul anjaan shaqs se tho behtar hi hai!!.....didi.....😛aap logon k beech mien kuch..??😛😉
GAURI: kaayaaaa!!!!!😡😕😡
kaaya laughs
doorbell of the shashank mehta house rings
enter mahen, nikhila, shiv nd shreya
SHNX: arrey aiyye andar aaiyye (hugs mahen)..namastey bhabi
NIKHILA: namastey bhayya
SHIV (touches shnx' feet):namastey uncle
shnx hugs him
SHNX: namastey beta kaise ho?
SHIV: ji...mien bilkul theek
SHREYA: namastey uncle(tches feet of shnx)
SHNX: arey namastey guriya...arey samrat nhi aya?
SHIV: ji woh uncle...l8 hore they aur drive krne ka craze chara hua hai aaj kal ussko, tho ussne humien utaar diya...park kar k aara hai
SHREYA: lo, take da devil's name nd da devil appears!!>>
samrat entrs...all laugh😆😆
gauri is gttin ready in her room. Kaya is helpin her out wid da earings
shiv knoks on da door
SHIV: wohh...
gauri is stunnd 2 c him. she sees him in da mirror. She wz puttin her earrings
SHIV:(lukin at kaya as if nt noticing gauri!): uncle ne mjhe kaha k mien tmhien ooper se bula loon
KAYA(chukles): acha...ji mien aati hoon
shiv glances at gauri
she wz wearing a cute pink dress...chooridar pyjama wid a beautifully embroidered shirt...lukin as pretty as ever!
shiv wz dressd ina frmal/informal typ of suit...lukin as charmin as ever
KAYA 2 GAURI: di, jaldi se yeh pehno...mien jaari hoon
kaya leavz bt shiv is still standin dere itself
gauri is at him thru da mirror nd also shiv is lukin at her thru da mirror
suddenly...shiv coughs nd goes frm dere
gauri is still in da same position
gauri thinks 2 herslf: yeh kiya tha?!?😕
kaaya cmz up nd calls gauri
KAYA: chalo didi neechay ajao..sab intizaar karrahe hain..(whisprs):aur jeeju bhi!😉
GAURI: jeeju?!?😕
KAAYA: oho didi chalo yaar!
gauri cmz down. everybdy is lukin at her. SHe dznt feel 2 gud being in da spotlyt. Shez a lil' embarassd
GAURI: namastey uncle (tches feet)
mahen takes her up nd kisses her
GARI: namastey aunty
nikhila hugs her
NIKHILA: kaisi ho beti?...aur office mien koi prob tho nhi hui?/
gauri glances at shiv automatically wid an uncomfortable luk
SHIV: woh mom...
GAURI: nhi aunty, bilkul prob nhi hoti
NIKHILA:gud..yeh dono tumhara theek se khayal rakhte hain na? mien bhi kis tarah ka sawal poochri hoon yeh log apna khayal nhi rakh paate...😆....isi liye tho mien shiv k liye tumhein psand kiya hai...ab mien thak gayee hoon uss ka khayal rakhte rakhte..ab mien chahti hoon tum uss ka khayal rakho...aur woh tumhara
shiv lux at gauri
gauri lux at shv
shiv smylz slightly
gauri cdnt stop...she 2 smyld partially
MAHEN: beta ab hum ghoom phir kr baat nhi krna chahte...tum logon se directly pooch rahe hain...kiya tum dono ko ye rishta manzoor hai??
end!
plz cmnt yaar!
waitin!!!!

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