FF:GauriShiv-Saathi re..Updtd Pg:20 10thOct09 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!! Thts wot dey shud say!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a wundrful upd8. keep it upp n con soon!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: starfan.shrk

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!! Thts wot dey shud say!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a wundrful upd8. keep it upp n con soon!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

hi star....nd thk u very much fr ur cmnts.....hehe
hopefully dey will say da same!
i will surely try n updt it asap theek hai?!!
luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
hahaha loved the ending! don't know why.. but loved it😳
nice update hun... liked the part Kaya calls Shiv jeeju and while Nikky is talking Shiv and Gauri smiling at each other☺️
continue soooon


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivgauri

hahaha loved the ending! don't know why.. but loved it😳
nice update hun... liked the part Kaya calls Shiv jeeju and while Nikky is talking Shiv and Gauri smiling at each other☺️
continue soooon


sure hun!!!
nd thnx fr da complimnt darlin!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm sure Shiv uld say YES......but dont knw abt gauri... Well Reeno Thanx a lot for the PM... Itz a wonderful Update... Liked Kaaya.. She is very sweet n bubbly... Will b waiting for the next part.. Plzz continue.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
arey yaar reeno ki bachi kitne galat tym per u hav ended huhhhhhhhh well yaar luved it plzzzzzzzzzz continue asap plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

uuhh

thnx fr da repliez....im alwayz waitin fr dese!
il b baq wid da story in a momnt!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
part 5
mahen: gauri...beta tum btao...tmhien iss rishtey se koi aitraaz tho nhi hai naa??
gauri is lukin at shiv as 2 y iznt he sayin sumfin....thinkin "arey shiv kuch boliye plz..warna yeh log tho mjhse haan karvaake hi choren ge!"
SHIV: ji...woh...dad..actually
gauri takes a slight sigh of releif bt da tension is nt over yet...wat if he sayz YES??
SHIV:dad...hum...i mean mien aur gauri ek doosre ko jaante nhi hain ...tho..
he is about 2 say an xcuze wen mahen interrupts which 2 gauri nd shiv seems very irritating
MAHEN: ohh...tho yeh baat hai...arey bacchon moo khol k saaf saaf kyun nhi kehte k tum dono ko kuch waqt akele guzaarna hai!?.....chalo chalo...tum dono yahan baatien karo...lawn mien bhi chale jana hum log ooper chale jaate hain...kuch baatien discuss karlenge!
SHIV ND GAURI:😕😕😲
SHIV: arey suniye tho...mera matlab..arey
everybdy leaves
seeing all dis gauri ko hansi aajati hai nd she laughs a bit
shiv lux at gauri...as 2 noone wz listenin 2 him...she lux up at him nd cntrols her laughter
SHIV: lo...tum bhi hanslo...
gauri laughs again
GAURI: ab..??
kaaya cmz....
KAAYA: arey jeeju..didi...aise kiya itni door se kiya baatein karo ge...door betho ge tho zor se bolna pare ga...zor se bolna para tho hm sab ko saari baaton ki aawaz aa jaye gi na?? paas betho
she grabs hold of gauri nd makes her sit bsyd shiv
KAAYA: aggar walk shalk krte hue baat krni ho tho lawn mien chale jaana haan??!?😉😛
gauri feelz a bit awkward sittin lyk dis bsyd him...
GAURI: lawn mien chalen?
shiv nods his head as 2 say yes
dey go in2 da bakyard lawn nd noone is talkin...dere is a strange silence b/w da 2
shiv feelz a bit uncomfrtable nd breaks the ice
SHV: gauri..?...kiya tum kisi aur se pyaar krti ho...i mean...
GAURI: arrey nhi...bilkul nhi...miene kbhi iss baare mien socha hi nhi baba hi sochte rehte hain
SHIV: tmhein apni psand se shaadi krni hai ya....
GAURI: umm...baba ki hi psand ki kyun k he knows wats best fr me...par mjhe humesha lagta hai k itz tooo early
shiv is quitely listenin 2 watever she is sayin nd is noting things in his mynd
dey r walkin along da lawn...nd cool breezes r blowin...it wz a perfct whether...brds chrpin...leaves nd flowers dancin...all felt soo gud.
dey were walkin syd by syd wen gauri nd shiv's hand collided...immediately gauri drew her hand 2wards herself nd both lukd in2 each other's eyez fr da 1st tym
shiv dint kno wat dis wz bt it felt gud
gauri dint think of it...she wz more in favor of goin back in2 da house as soon as possible....
as soon as she got an opportunity...she said..
GAURI: shiv...umm..woh andar chalen...nhi tho sab kahenge...
SHIV: haan haan chalo
dey dint notice dat dey were 2gether fr an hour or so in the lawn
dey cm insyd
MAHEN: haan beta aagaye tum dono
SHIV: ji dad
he had a sort of smyl on his face which wasnt hidden
SHASHANK: tho beta..hum iss rishtey ko pakka samjhe naa?
GAURI: ji..??
SHASHANK: arey waah gauri beta! tum ne haan krdi...mubaarak ho
gauri..thinkin..."arey miene kab haan ki?? mera matlab tho...arey..."
SHASHANK: beta jab gauri ne haan krdi hai tho tum bhi kr hi do!
SHIV: ji....
he is goin 2 complete da sent. as 2 gauri dint giv her full consent...bt as soon as he said.."ji"...every1 startd celebrating
MAHEN: arey shnx...moon meetha kar!
NIKHILA: Beta shiv, gauri...chalo sab baron ke pair chuuo
GAURI: ji acha
shiv nd gauri 2gether tch mahen's,nikhila;s nd shashank's feet
shiv smylz at gauri...gauri smylz baq
dat nyt itself:
gauri is in her room sittin below a dim lyt...thinkin:
"aaj jo hua...woh na tho shiv ki marzi thi nameri...phir bhi aisa mehsoos nhi horaha k kuch humari marzi k khilaaf hora ha hai...mjhe aisa kyun lagra ha hai k jo bhi hora hai...theek hora hai??"
KAYA: heyy...congratz di...aaj se tho tumhara VIP treatmnt shuroo haan!?
GAURI: chal...paagal!
KAYA: waise didi....ek baat kahoon..seriously..??
GAURI: haan bol
KAYA: aap ki aur jeeju ki jodi sach mien BHT achi lagti hai....par mjhe ab darr lagta hai!
GAURI: darr??.....kis baat ka?
KAAYA: didi aap mjhe aur baba ko chor k chale jao ge?😭
GAURI: chal chup kar...mien tujhe aur baba ko chor k kahin nhi jaaoongi
shnx entrs
SHNX: aur tho kiya....aye pagli, kaaya...tjhe kisne bola k didi humien chor k chali jaye gi??didi yaheen par tho hogi shaadi k baad bhi...kahin america ya door tho nhi bhej raha mien apni beti ko...beta bus tu samajh le k tu shift horahi hai 1 ghar se doosre ghar mien..wahan sab log tera bht khayal rakhenge..yahan se bhi zyaada!...aur phir mahen ka ghar door thori na hai...aati rahegi yeh...
gauri nd kaaya cm..nd hug shashank...
end!!....yaar i think dis part wz a bit borin...wat 2 do...i had sum tym in my hands bt the story wznt cmin out as i thought it wz...watever it is...however u found it..plz do cmnt!!!!😊😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice update.... loved the part where Shiv Gauri goes for the walk and also the part how their parents interprets their 'ji' as yes😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivgauri

nice update.... loved the part where Shiv Gauri goes for the walk and also the part how their parents interprets their 'ji' as yes😆

thnku jaanu.......luv ya! keep readin...will updt nxt part asap!

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