Originally posted by: bunny_fun
Hi Jagruti,
I have been reading this FF from the begining and following and had been waiting for each and every episode..... I was waiting for its conclusion to give my comments....
I love this FF and how you explain each and every scene and character in detail....I can practically visualize the characters.... how Shiv Singhaniya would look and How Shiv Kapoor would look and How Anupam would smile How nisha would be..... every aspect about this story has... a justification atached to it...
You can never hate any character in this FF, all characters are justified in how they are reacting to a particular situation.... I love how you are able to bring out emotion with so ease..... and I love the way you have a flow with words....
I have been a fan of your FF's and wait for your updates every day.....
I was able to literally see how a Singhaniya room would look where each and every small thing in the room is placed.... how Gauri's face expression would be when she is afraid, sad in front of Shiv Singhaniya....
and How in her flashbacks... the same Shiv... the Shiv Kapoor... would have laughed with her and How she would be so demure...and Shy and talkative and playfull and angry....
I love every aspect about this FF.... i didnot even realise when I had fallen in love with this FF... it was like reading a novel with no expectations and then suddently along the way you fall in love with the characters so much that you are not able to detach yourself from them.....
from the past 2 parts I have been having a small incling on how the ending would be.... and when i read it... it was exactly the same....
My justification to the characters.... Gauri had suffered enough for so many years... going through the wrath from Shiv Singhania... for the justifiable reason that Shiv had lost all of his family members, his status, he had to go to jail, he lost all his property for a mistake that Gauri had committed.... any person in his right mind would be as harsh to Gauri as Shiv is.....
Coming to Gauri.... She tried to help her Husband..... But she never knew that the material used was bad.... and she was there on the project nearly towards the end.... and I think Shiv should have thought about material being bad long before the project had started.... She didnot know much about the project.... She just thought she would have to represent Shiv instead of Him.....
She was a much attached to his family as he was... she has lost her family too.... Shiv is showing his anger on her for loosing everything.... But she has lost everything too.... and she has no one to complain... but just wait and bear the burn..... How many times she might have thought.... How good would it have been had she died instead of them.... ??? and how many times she would have thought.... Is there no penance to her crime.... and How many times she might have thought looking at the empty house.... I am responsible for all this silence, for all that Shiv had to endure... How I wish I had a chance to fix it.... I am responsible for all this disaster... i should be punished more....
Nisha .... she was a happy girl... she tries to be happy and satisfied even in small things..... all her plans of having a happy and lovable marriage came crashing down on having her first interaction with Shiv .... But after listening to the past of Shiv... she started loving the pain that he is going through..... she didnot just see the pain of Shiv but she saw the pain of Gauri too..... She is a person you can call a person with heart of gold.... she sacrificed her intrests about a marriage for her father.... she sacrificed her marriage for Gauri.... she melted for Shiv to take away his pain and give him a life he has long left back.....
A person with no real connection to the story or to Shiv or to Gauri...just comes into their lives like an Angel and cures everything like swinging a fairy wand... and then wanishes even before you realise the changes are permanent....
How wonderfull can a person get than this....
Anupam, the person who has seen both sides of the story.... who has seen both sides of Shiv, both sides of Gauri, both their pain, both their anguish, both their suffering ... He has been there seen all of it the happy times the sad times.... he was there when they needed him the most... he was there to support them.... he was there to bring them back together when he got a chance....
and now the pretty girl in the whole FF ...shanti.... she is the most adorable girl.... I could imagine the sweet little shanti talking her way out of every thing... with anupam, with gauri, with nisha and with Shiv.... I could see how she missed her dad... and how she cried herself to sleep the day her Dad had nearly thrown her out of the house....
I love every aspect , by now you should have understood.... I love every emotion, it is genuine...it has its innocence...it has its own aura and feeling... when you read.... you are always guilty for more....
Thankyou, for giving us such a wonderfull FF .... I will always remember how you bring character to life....
Hope you write many more FF's and some day .... I would love to read a very beautiful romantic and emotion based novel written by you...
Do remember me.... and PM me .... about your new FF's even if this forum closes... hoping to be a friend ... with you ....
With Love,
Bunny.
Hiya bunny
How to reply to your comment is really beyond me what can I say apart from thank you!. I wasn't even aware that you were following my ff and It was a lovely surprise when I saw your comment. Realising just how devotedly you have read my ff is touching thank you ever so much. I think the comment you gave at this stage is just wonderful and im so happy, your words made me realise that my ff is just not mine but means something different to all my readers. Im so glad that you have read my ff and also enjoyed it and like you had mentioned that you can visulise my words…I am so grateful for that thought of yours. Its always been my aim to put into words the picture that I had painted in my mind and when you say that you can picuture It that means the world to me. For me that's always been the magical element to reading for the reader to peseve things as the writer has imagined them for me always seems magical and hearing that complement from a reader im just over the moon thank you ever sooo much.!!! I am also really touched to hear that you feel attachment to my characters as I never thought I would be able to bring my characters alive and hearing that you have fallen in love with them for me seems unbelievable. For I didn't really expect my characters to create such a trademark but its nice to hear that you've fallen in love with them as much as I have whilst writing them.
As for the justification you have of my characters I don't think I could have described them so deeply. The way you said gauris character was as much apart of the pain as shivs but still overlooked is just the it was. her family too but blinded by pain and bitterness shiv failed to see that. For when I wrote shivs character I thought about the emotions a person would go through in a situation like that. In a situation where there is only pain and hurt a person looks for something or someone to blame and that's just what shiv did. I guess his character was so deep that putting into the right words was hard and you were perfectly right about gauri she blamed herself never forgive herself for shivs pain for that's just the way she is. Devoted loving caring in every manner imaginable that she overlooked all of those bitter moments with shiv singhaniya..his every harsh word she accepted and even his unfaithfulness towards her with other wemon..i think that shows the extent of goodness that is within gauri.
As for nisha..i loved the way you mentioned the magic wand because that was exaxtly what she did. I think other characters were to close to the intensity of the sitation that an outsider was needed and nisha was the perfect choice. For me she was the character the turned the story completely without her shiv and gauri stood no chance. Even more importantly like you mentioned nishas relationship and loving the hurt that was within shiv. For me nisha and shivs relationship was on so many diffent levels that I loved writing It. for he was a sacrifice that she had made, she was under his authority at all times but still managed to touch that weak spot within that was love for gauri. she lived with him with no expection of love in reward yet she devoted herself to him in everyway and till the end and forever will remain so. The one person if I had to say tops gauri in her goodness that has to be nisha.
Anupam for me the distant well wisher in all this and the one person who never fails to pass a smile. I think thoughout the ff anupam has been the cure to all the depression, harshness in the ff…he created the balance and without him…well I don't think there would be any of this without his character.
O and like you said shanti…keeping the best to last. For such a little character she plays a huge part and im so touched by your picture of shanti and its just how I had perceived her cute..little naugty yet very sensitively attached to her farther…all the perkiness of shiv and sensitively of gauri.
From reading your comment im fully understood the depth in which you have read my ff your love for it is clear and im so glad that I have been touch your thoughts with my ff. you have truly visulised and lived the moments I have written and for that I am greatful thank you ever so much and you have proved to be an expeectional reader and not only that writer too. Im as always in wait of your ff updates of pyaara sa lovestory and for me that happens to be one of my fravrate ffs. Your writing skill are fabloulas and im always waiting for your updates. Enjoying each one more than the last you leave a certain wanting for a few more words from you which show how good you are as a writer. I cant thank you enough for your kind words only say thank you! And as for writing more ffs im sure when I do I will let you know..as for a novel well I doubt my skills on that matter but I will surely write more ffs and you never no maybe someday.. but will always keep in touch with you..in regaurds to my ffs your ff which I am waiting for a certain update and of course as friends………..thank you again ….jagruti
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