FF:Ansooni Dastaan ch14/pg31 conclude+notep34

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"Ansooni Dastaan"

"jis insaan se meine shaadhi ki, pyaar kiya

woh insaan badal gaya magar badla nahi woh pyaar

aaj bhi une itna hein pyaar karti hoon jitna kal karti thi..

Mein gauri..dunya ke lighyey Mrs Gauri S K Singhaniya us umeed mein jee rahi hoon

ke shyaad ek naa ek din mein unki ankon mein phir se mere leiye woh pyaar dekhoongi

apne aap ko ek baar phir se Mrs Shiv kapoor bulasakoo'."

Gauri has been left in an unknown world where her husband who she once shared a loving relationship has faded from Shiv Kapoor to Shiv Singhaniya. She lives now only a life of sorrow, still devoted to her husband and overlooks his changed persona in the hope that one day she would once again live the life that was left behind 5 years ago and once again will be able to call her self Mrs Shiv Kapoor.


Gauri shiv.K.Singhaniya: Gauri, a traditional Indian wife.. a simple girl from a middle class background married into the millionaire Kapoor family as Mrs Shiv Kapoor. Her relationship with her husband and her life has taken her through many challenges' married to man who she was never introduced to, was someone from totally different background rich and powerful high in status in comparison to her he was from a totally different world and yet she..slowly fell in love him, she her world with him, he became the essence of her very existence and now 5 years later her relationship is left in broken pieces, memories from her past. The man she had devoted her life to, cared and loved..the one person who loved her unconditionally now looks upon her with only bitterness and acts Oblivious to even her existence as his wife.

Shiv Singhaniya/kapoor: Shiv Singhaniya once a man who lived for his family believed in the bond of true love and loved his wife uncondionally is now completely the opposite, affected by past bitter experiences Shiv is now a man with very little believe in feelings and emotions.. The softness inside him has been killed off by betrayal and tragedy leaving only a hard exterior resistant to the feeling of happiness relation and love. In the change from Kapoor to Singhania shiv has gained immense power and rank in the business world as one of the richest personalities in the world but along with this..he has lost his touch with himself. He lives only for himself, his business empire and the one lady who he thinks Is the love of his life Gana Virani, obsessed with Ganga Shiv has spent his four years in search of his so called love which if seen from gana's point of view is nothing but lust a relationship that even she is not ready to give consent for.

Ganga Virani: A successful and independent business woman..known for her successes as a millionaire business woman she owns multiple enterprises and Is partially responsible for shiv's up rise as Mr shiv Singhania. Ganga sees her relationship with shiv as only existent on a professional basis and therefore has been forced in leave her life behind to avoid shiv.

Anupam Bhatachariya: An old friend of shiv's Anupam is incredibly supportive and shares a strong bond with Gauri who he thinks of as his sister..being a writer Anupam is naturally very trusting In love and relationships and his self has a very light and cheerful personality. Being a very successful writer Anupam is not always around but he greatly values his relationship with gauri and does everything within his capability giving her support to help bring back the lost happiness in her life.

Rishab Bannerjee: old friend of shiv Singhania's farther, Rishab Bannerjee once a successful business man in his own right forced by the downfall of his own empire is now been living a life of poverty for the past five years. His personality portrays traits of not an ex business man but an honest working class farther.

Nisha Bannerjee: Daughter of Rishab Bannerjee, a simple middle class traditional Indian girl. She wants nothing more than happiness of her farther. Like any other girl of her age Nisha dreams of the perfect future.

Years of neglect for gauri and one sided love obsession for shiv' this is now shiv's life what he wants he gets through powerful Influence and financial status but blinded by his bitterness will he become aware of what he has really lost..what he is overlooking..a heartfelt relationship lost in time.. a world that he has closed his doors to..will he regain his personality as shiv kapoor?

contents:

Chapter 1: page 3 (life as Mrs Gauri Shiv Singhaniya)

Chapter 2: page 4 (a dieing fathers wish, a daughters love and Shiv Singhaniyas desire)

Chapter 3: page 8 (gauri leaves singhaniya mansion???)

Chapter 4: page 11 (welcoming a second wife into the house? )

Chapter 5: page 14 (Nisha enters Sighaniya mansion)

Chapter 6: page 17 (Nishas world as mrs singhaniya and a secret behind closed doors)

Chapter 7: page 17 (painful past is revealed)

chapter 8 page 21 (trying to help a relationship..with the means of a little help)

chapter 9: page 22 (return of mr kapoor?)

chapters 10 and 11 page: 25 (shantis longing for her farther and gauris for her husband finaly
seems to come to an end but nisha?)

chapters 12 and 13 page: 28 (candle light dinner, bedroom lockout)

chapter 14 (ansooni dastaan forever??)


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jagrutid thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok guys there goes, sketch of my new ff ansooni dastaan..have a read and let me know what you think..if you like it i'll continue. and o yes i'm also going to try and update shiv ki gauri today as well...working on it..but thanks for waiting so patiently..😊 jagruti

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Posted: 16 years ago
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excellent story line hun... can't wait for it to start... so pls start soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woww gud conceptt infact very different concept i know u will unite SHIVGAURI ofcourse well lukin fwd 4r ur first update n shiv ki gauri as well 4r u 👏

saba😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Jagruti thts a cool intro.. Seems very interesting.. Very eager to c knw abt the journey of Shiv frm SK to S.S............ Plzz continue soon....n do Pm me when u update.......😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice intro. its interesting, so what made shiv hate gauri so much and did shiv actually had anything to do with rishab being in poverty? plz update this part and shiv ki gauri part ASAP! oh n thax for the pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The characters and the story line seem to be really interesting .comes across as heart warming story of Gauri and Shiv. Do continue looking forward to further updates.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice concept sounds different and interesting
looking forward for first part
plz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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jagruti!!!, itz ur fanfic nd it has 2 b interesting!!!!!!!!
ive nt yet read da intro...bt read the replies of members....go ahead yaar im sure it will b as gud nd even more succesful den shivkigauri
cmon giv it a try...nd update all updates asap! plz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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jagu.......i read it... u r rpqin darling.....start it soon

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