FF:Ansooni Dastaan ch14/pg31 conclude+notep34 - Page 24

Originally posted by: blue-jen

as always it was also a nice update..😳😳😳..i too first didn't like nisha as anupam did..but now i like her.. now she gonna leave the house..poor girl..😭😭
the papa-beti covo was very cute..😳😳😳..shiv playing piano 7 singing song for shanti was also cute part😳😳😳.
sahiv-gauri's part is also nice..
this shiv is different from shiv ki gauri..
both ur ff's r completely differnt from each other..u r managing them perfectly👏👏👏...
luved this part..😛😛😛
eagerly waiting for next part..continue ASAP...
jeni

Originally posted by: xx-ReenO-xx

umm i really dont remember if i commented or not.... FAB PART JAGU!!!!!!!! updt asap

O.M.G!!!!!!!!!!!!tht ws soooooooooooo AMAZIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!finally shiv n gauri r gettin sumwhere in der relationship.lovly song n shanti is sooooooo sweeet!!!!jus hope all goes well.sumwhere down,i hav a feelin dat shiv is probably pretndin 2 loose hs mmory 4 sum reson,ny wy, con VRY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!(wid both ff's)!!!!!☺️

Originally posted by: starfan.shrk

O.M.G!!!!!!!!!!!!tht ws soooooooooooo AMAZIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!finally shiv n gauri r gettin sumwhere in der relationship.lovly song n shanti is sooooooo sweeet!!!!jus hope all goes well.sumwhere down,i hav a feelin dat shiv is probably pretndin 2 loose hs mmory 4 sum reson,ny wy, con VRY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!(wid both ff's)!!!!!☺️

Originally posted by: soniayk6

as usual iam late yaar.read it long back but couldn't post my comments .iam sorry 4r being sooooooo lazy yaar😭.

n coming to ff oh goddddd i didn't expect this progress in their relation soooooo soon😳😳😳.really a very cute n fabulous part yaar.i just loved it.shivgauri r looking soooo cute with one another😍.ahhhhhhh i just loved the whole shivgauri part.n the song it simply suited the situation yaar.rocking song.i added one more song to my fav list.😊😊😊.

n coming to ur work hummmmmmmm is it really necessary to say something about ur work.u r always the best.so keep on rocking jagruti.👏.

n coming to the update again ,i loved the last part where shiv filled gauri's mang with sindoor.i just loved.when i was reading it i was recollecting the part where gauri comes to know the truth of ippi n comes back to take revenge n gauri hesitates fills her mang but shiv comes there n fills her mang with sindoor.its such a adorable scene.once again u rocked it yaar.i just the whole part👏.n coming to nisha feel sorry 4r that poor girl.seems like she lost everything😭😭😭 4r our dear shivgauri😳😳😳.

felt sad but still happy that she is going away 4rm their 4r ever😳.so now waiting 4r ur next update yaar😍

A guess that before i do update theres a need for a note. guys conclude well yey it is a conclude for thats what i had planned originaly so here it is but as soon as you read the update you will see where its heading so i hope you all like i thank you soo much for all your lovely comments read them all !! replyed too sonia sorry your i replyed to a bit late but.. thanks guys..and here goes. ...

Ansooni Dastaan Chapter 14

The next morning as shiv gets ready still in the surroundings of there room putting on his shirt with caution to a avoid pain he happens to take a glance and notices gauris just out of the shower look..dressed in pale yellow gauri carries out her touch ups in front the mirror while shiv watches from behind with a smile. Stopping gauri from behind just as she is about to apply her sindoor shiv applies it for her..glancing at gauri through the mirror shiv smiles whilst placing the sindoor perfectly in her parting just when gauri is to speak there is a knock at the door both shiv and gauris attention is drawn towards the entrance as they see the presence of nisha. Looking like is ready to go somewhere, nisha is accompanied by luggage.. "gauri di.kya mein aapse baat karsakti hoon?" gauris has a wash of reality within and seeing nisha shes makes realision of the situation and feels a surge of sadness and guilt. A moment of awkwardness and intensitiy..what would nisha be feeling have walked in to see her husband completing a ritual that by right of marriage could be said was hers. Gauri scattered her sight a little looking for the right words feeling only a sense of guilt this very minute the beginnings of regret were forming within. For she was reliving her relationship with shiv whilst nisha was watching her own marriage break and even aiding for it to do so. With the passing of that certain moment which shiv as oblivious to and smiled gauri finally found the words and turning to look at shiv tried to excuse herself. "mein woh..nisha se baat karloo?" a smile from shiv said yes "hah magar yey, looking down at his partially worn shirt shiv was struggerling to pull it over that certain arm and gauri knowing that this could take some time responded. "mr kapoor woh..shankar chacha ate hein honge, mein.." shiv accepted gauris reasoning and smiled letting her walk out all the while trying his best to get dressed. As gauri stepped out of the room looking at nisha and that certain luggage bag a worry took over her face.

Gauri: "Kya hua nisha, baat kya hai tum aise?"

Nisha: "Gauri woh, mein yaha se jaa rahin hoon. hamesha ke leighyey."

Gauri: "Kya..kaha jaahon gi tum aur kyun?"

Nisha: "Ab mere leighyey yaha kuch nahin hai. aap ko mr kapoor mil gayey. ab meri yaha koi saroorat nahin hai aur rahin baat kaha janeki toe kahin bhi chali jaaongi. Shayad baba ke paas thode din rukugi."

Gauri: "Nahin nisha aise kaise."

Nisha: "Please jane dejyey muje" Gauri just looked.. feeling responsible and hurt for nishas circumstances today.

Nisha: " Aap mere leighyey kuch kar sakti hai?" Mein chahoongi toe nahin magar agar zindagi mein kabhi aisa vakt ayey jab woh mr singhaniya ho toe kya aap une yey dengi. It was a white envelope with the words "mr singhaniya" written on it. Noticing the certain mellowness in nishas eyes which was about to melt any moment gauri took the envelope from nisha with a nod and watch a certain tear drop tracing down her expression. The silence was overwhelming between them and as gauri made a note of the situation and the emotions that nisha was flowing through and shed tears of her own. But even with such sadness nisha traced a certain smile trough her expression.

Nisha: "Kya mein unse mi…"

Gauri: "Nisha please aisa keh kar muje sharminda mat kaho." Just as gauri is about to go on and speak

A Loud tone of voice calling from a distance is audio "gauri!!!" seeming to be anupams voice both nisha and gauri recognise it. "woh lagta hai anupam da aagayey…mein dekhti hoon" saying so and wiping her forming tears gauri takes her leave taking with it the envelope given to her by nisha. As nisha watches gauri dispeare into the distance of the corridor she takes a glance at the room infornt of her. shiv and gauris room and catching a glance of shiv through the partially open door she captures the moment closing her eyes to delay the reality that she was going to say her last goodbye to her husband. With the thought of all that had happened in there relationship nisha was at the stage where she had devoted her life to her husband and whatever his characteristic were like she had hoped to be his wife all her life and that she would continue to do but this was the end..she would no longer feel the presence of her husband in her life and with this certain thought..what ever moments she was to spend with him now would be eternal. Moving towards the door and placing a soft knock on the door nisha pushed open the door slightly. Inside the room shiv tiydying his look but still struggling fiddles with the cufflink for his sleeve as he turns to react to the sound of the door opening. Giving a glance up and smile to aknowlage nishas presence he goes back to adjusting his cufflink which he still has problems with all the while nisha is silent as not to let go of her emotion tries hard to cover up her feelings but that certain sadness was visble in her eyes.

Shiv: "Yey tumari behen, chali gayee aur mein ab is musibat ke saath reh gaya"

Nisha: " Ji woh mein gauri di ko bulati hoon."

Shiv: "Ek minute,tum bhi toe karsakti ho …"

Nisha; "Mein?"

Shiv: "If you don't mind please"

As nisha walked towards shiv silently her encounters of the past came back to her. the many times that she had tried to help shiv do the exact thing but her help was rejected and maybe acosompted to that nature of shiv singhaniya even today nisha expected the same. Feeling of deep emotion within and a certain longing for an interaction that would remind her of her husband nisha took hold of the two ends of sleeve that shiv had drawn out for her and adjusted them together carefully all the while not moving he sight from her husband.

"Thank you" on shiv saying so nisha had realised that she had done her job and not to do any thing that would be strange and queationable for nisha stood quietly. As shiv pulled out a red tie to fit his white shirt and swung It around his neck looked to his side..towards nisha with a smile. "Kya tum muje milna chahti thi..sorry woh cufflink wali baat mein bhool gayay" fairly hesitantly

"Ji, woh..aaj is ghar mein mera akhri din hai toe aapki permission chayeyth" knotting his tie and pulling the strand of it to perfect the knot shiv looked to his side, at nisha to question. "Kyun kaha jaarahin ho.?." Nisha was stuck for words and with shiv looking at her pulled together an reason. "Who muje delhi mein job mila toe.". her explaination was a little uncertainly put forward but shiv didn't seem to find that strange he just smiled adjusted his look in the mirror and then glancing over to nisha to speak. "Aw I see , Jaao , magar vapas aana saroor. Kyun ke yey bhi tumara hein khar hai. aur tumari behen bhi tume bhot miss karengi." Saying so shiv carried a comforting smile but by some instinct within nishas next comment asked weather her husband two would miss her. "Aur aap?" realising what she had just said nisha dropped her gaze wishing she hadn't done so. As shiv had finished fining his appearance slipping his hands into his pockets turned to face nisha and question her comment which he was a little in question too. Shiv "Mein kya?" Nisha nodded a no .."kuch nahin" and taking a step closer..hame ashirwad dijyey saying so nisha had lowered herself to the level on the floor waiting for shiv.

Looking over nisha shiv was in question to the words that she had used. "Hame?" Nisha looking up towards shiv explained herself "Woh mere maatlab mein nayee zindagi shuru karne jaa rahin hoon toe kisi bade ke blessing..."

Shiv smiling placing the palm of his hand on nisha head but listening to what she had said shiv was sure that she had used the word "hame/ us" and she sounded like it was meaningful of something, like she was referring to herself as two. Feeling a certain emotion to the whole situation shiv put it down to just his perception of her comment and smiled looking over that detail. As nisha moved up to look at shiv, shiv noticed the mellowness in her eyes and put it down to the fear of leaving home. Smiling shiv gave of an understanding sentiment but strange enough inside he was feeling a certain hollowness. "mein jaaon?" somewhere hoping that her husband would stop her nisha sounded the two words quite deeply and shiv answering nodded with a smile. Watching nisha walk out of the room she had left a strange feeling for shiv, undiscribale and as he watched her leave emptiness filled him. Stepping out of the room..as teardrops trailed down her expresstion silently, nisha took hold of her luggage and talking it with her..walked down the corridor..all the while thinking of shiv, thinking of the time she had entered the house...but stopping her steps inbetween nisha turned back to face the room she had come out…"Maf kardijyey muje mr singhaniya, meine aap ko appne zndagi ki woh baat nahin batayi jo ehem hai." looking down at her stomach and placing one hand on it…magar yey vada karti hoon ke aapke dnsh ko aapka naam saroori doongi. Saying so nisha made a turn leaving kapoor house as mrs shiv singhaniya took with her those memories and love alongside it the symbolism of a relationship which was now none existent.

………………. As gauri spent her time in her room thinking about nisha having left and looking at that certain envelope she had given her…with the opening of the door shiv walked in returning from office. Walking towards gauri who looked engrossed in that certain enverlop. Walked up behind her to silently..

"kya baat hai gauri" gauri realising shivs presence quickly sloted the enverlope into her diary which was sitting on her writing table and looked towards shiv who questioned gauri. "nisha ke jaane pein upset ho?"gauri nodded a yes and shiv smiled "aap change karlejyey mein coffee laati hoon." saying so gauri was ready to walk of and just before she could so so.

Shiv: "Ek minuit gauri.."Gauri turned in her tracks and looked at shiv.

Shiv: "Muje tume kuch dikhana hai"

Gauri: "Ji?" gauri looked a little worried wondering what shiv was talking about.

Shiv: "Mere saath chalo"

Gauri: Kaha?

Shiv: "Chalo toe sahi"

Following shiv down the staircase and into a certain area of the lounge..shiv had bought to face a certain wall but it wasn't just that it was the significance of the photographs on the wall. Potraites of kapoor house famly members the ones that shiv had kept looked away in that store room. Seeing them displayed on the wall a smile came to face for gauri and listened to what shiv had to say. "yey hamare parivar ki tasvirer muje store room mein mili toe meine yaha lagvadi. Yey sat ch hai ke muje hamara parviar yaad toe nahin hai magar phir bhi woh khaaz hai toe isleighyey meine yey kiya." Seeing a smiling gauri shiv was certain he had done the right thing and the way she had fallen onto his chest for a hug confirmed so. After a few seconds and parting from shiv gauri had a question.

Gauri: "Kya mein aapse kuch pooch sakti hoon?"

Shiv: "Hah pucho?"

Gauri: "Aap jaante hai naa ke muje likhe ka shokh hai..toe mein ek gitaab likhna chahti thi. Anupam dada ki madat se agar aap ko koi.." shiv smiling at gauris innocence interrupted.

Shiv: "Gauri isme poochne vali kya baat hai…Of course…magar ek shaarat par" shiv looked at gauri as if to have a

Demanding condition which gauri felt worried at "Ji?"

Shiv: "I will be the first to read." Gauri nodding a yes and Both amused downed the moment in soft laughter.

The next day and as anupam and gauri sit down to a cup of tea in his house, talking about nishas absence anupam touches on the real aim of the conversation…… "kya tume socha hai ke tum kya likhna chahti ho gauri?"

gauri: "hah", handing anupam her personal diary..anuapm gave gauri a certain look. He had figured gauris intentions. "Gauri yey tumari dairy hai", Anupam looked at gauri in surprise she was thinking what he had predicted was she?

Gauri: "Mere har pal…kushi..gham mr kapoor ke saath ghuzre hue woh pal. Mr singhaniya ki woh karvahat…nisha ke kadam sabkuch..aaj tak ki meri zindagi."

Anupam: "Aur tum ise ek gitaab ki taara publish karna chahti ho? Tum jaanti ho ke is se satchayee samne aajayeygi. Aur shiv ko pata chal gaya to woh phirse kahi… nahin gauri tum asisa nahin karsakti."

"Please dada…" there was a certain determination in gauris eyes that anuapm noticed and maybe this was the way that gauri wanted it to be. Maybe she wanted shiv to find out this way or maybe for the world to read her story. Anupam reluctant to do so takes the diary from gauri making it clear that he doesn't agree but if she wanted to be saw.

…………………………..

Sometime later and anupam had done as asked by gauri and and a draft version of the book was complete. Sitting in the surroundings of kapoor mansion lounge anupam dropped a certain copy of a blue printed book on the coffee table in front of gauri.

Anupam: Here is your draft…bas aab ek title ki saroorat hai.

As anupam made a note of gauris expression he could read nothing from it. he had tried to persuade gauri not to make this publishment but she had made her mind up and now that finally the job was near completion she had nothing to say but moments of silence and then …

Gauri: "Ansooni dastaan.."

Anupam: "Kya?" Just as anupam is about to question gauris comment. Shiv walks in taking a seat in front of gauri he questions the silence.

Shiv: "Kya hua..yey silence kaisi"

Anupam: "Shiv woh gauri apne gitaab ke leighyey title ki baat kar rahi thi."

Shiv: "O toe yey baat hai..kya mein pad sakta hoon.." reaching for the book gauri stops shiv.

Gauri: "Mr kapoor" Shiv looks up at gauri "Meine naam soch leya hai… ansooni dastaan shiv looked rather impressed by the name and smiled. "Magar yehi naam kyun?" Shiv was in question but anupam smile was aware of all. Gauri had finally changed her mind…deciding to keep things hidden saw she could carry on living as mrs shiv kapoor was just what she had changed her mind to.

Gauri: "Kyunke mein chahti hoon ke koi ise naa pade … aap bhi nahin. Shiv looked at gauri estranged to what she was asking but the look in her eyes seemed devoted, this is what she wanted and he accepted. Theek hai..jaisa tum chaho, Shaayad kuch daastein ansooni hein behtar hoti hai." shiv and gauri both with a sense of confort on there expressions agree…leaving a certain..story unhear and untold, a certain past captured in words which would never be heard, never be told leaving an ansooni dastaan.

Conclude of ansooni dastaan… 18^th may 2009

…………………………………………………

The past maybe untold but it still lies as reality as shiv and gauri spend there lives with one another the truth still exisits in the form of nisha…her letter for her husband and the signifance of the child she carries…will shiv ever read the words he has agreed forever to be unheard or will…it remain an ansooni dastaan forever????

You choose..do you want to read a sequel??