Hi Jagruti,
I have been reading this FF from the begining and following and had been waiting for each and every episode..... I was waiting for its conclusion to give my comments....
I love this FF and how you explain each and every scene and character in detail....I can practically visualize the characters.... how Shiv Singhaniya would look and How Shiv Kapoor would look and How Anupam would smile How nisha would be..... every aspect about this story has... a justification atached to it...
You can never hate any character in this FF, all characters are justified in how they are reacting to a particular situation.... I love how you are able to bring out emotion with so ease..... and I love the way you have a flow with words....
I have been a fan of your FF's and wait for your updates every day.....
I was able to literally see how a Singhaniya room would look where each and every small thing in the room is placed.... how Gauri's face expression would be when she is afraid, sad in front of Shiv Singhaniya....
and How in her flashbacks... the same Shiv... the Shiv Kapoor... would have laughed with her and How she would be so demure...and Shy and talkative and playfull and angry....
I love every aspect about this FF.... i didnot even realise when I had fallen in love with this FF... it was like reading a novel with no expectations and then suddently along the way you fall in love with the characters so much that you are not able to detach yourself from them.....
from the past 2 parts I have been having a small incling on how the ending would be.... and when i read it... it was exactly the same....
My justification to the characters.... Gauri had suffered enough for so many years... going through the wrath from Shiv Singhania... for the justifiable reason that Shiv had lost all of his family members, his status, he had to go to jail, he lost all his property for a mistake that Gauri had committed.... any person in his right mind would be as harsh to Gauri as Shiv is.....
Coming to Gauri.... She tried to help her Husband..... But she never knew that the material used was bad.... and she was there on the project nearly towards the end.... and I think Shiv should have thought about material being bad long before the project had started.... She didnot know much about the project.... She just thought she would have to represent Shiv instead of Him.....
She was a much attached to his family as he was... she has lost her family too.... Shiv is showing his anger on her for loosing everything.... But she has lost everything too.... and she has no one to complain... but just wait and bear the burn..... How many times she might have thought.... How good would it have been had she died instead of them.... ??? and how many times she would have thought.... Is there no penance to her crime.... and How many times she might have thought looking at the empty house.... I am responsible for all this silence, for all that Shiv had to endure... How I wish I had a chance to fix it.... I am responsible for all this disaster... i should be punished more....
Nisha .... she was a happy girl... she tries to be happy and satisfied even in small things..... all her plans of having a happy and lovable marriage came crashing down on having her first interaction with Shiv .... But after listening to the past of Shiv... she started loving the pain that he is going through..... she didnot just see the pain of Shiv but she saw the pain of Gauri too..... She is a person you can call a person with heart of gold.... she sacrificed her intrests about a marriage for her father.... she sacrificed her marriage for Gauri.... she melted for Shiv to take away his pain and give him a life he has long left back.....
A person with no real connection to the story or to Shiv or to Gauri...just comes into their lives like an Angel and cures everything like swinging a fairy wand... and then wanishes even before you realise the changes are permanent....
How wonderfull can a person get than this....
Anupam, the person who has seen both sides of the story.... who has seen both sides of Shiv, both sides of Gauri, both their pain, both their anguish, both their suffering ... He has been there seen all of it the happy times the sad times.... he was there when they needed him the most... he was there to support them.... he was there to bring them back together when he got a chance....
and now the pretty girl in the whole FF ...shanti.... she is the most adorable girl.... I could imagine the sweet little shanti talking her way out of every thing... with anupam, with gauri, with nisha and with Shiv.... I could see how she missed her dad... and how she cried herself to sleep the day her Dad had nearly thrown her out of the house....
I love every aspect , by now you should have understood.... I love every emotion, it is genuine...it has its innocence...it has its own aura and feeling... when you read.... you are always guilty for more....
Thankyou, for giving us such a wonderfull FF .... I will always remember how you bring character to life....
Hope you write many more FF's and some day .... I would love to read a very beautiful romantic and emotion based novel written by you...
Do remember me.... and PM me .... about your new FF's even if this forum closes... hoping to be a friend ... with you ....
With Love,
Bunny.
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