RAVIKA OS (CONFESSION) new update pg 8(consumation) - Page 7

Originally posted by: 09raju

Wowww... What a creative idea for their confession. U nailed it buddy.


Even want to see the same kind of confession in show too.


I could specifically imagine the scenario and everything going on there.. Ur writing skills are very good. M totally impressed. I must say the convo u write here are so cute I just read them again and again. And the words are exactly those which ravika use mostly in show. I even imagine the tone they used to say coz the words are also same.

So hatts off for that.

Keep writing and sharing dear. Want read more and more of ur story.

Eagerly waiting for next update.

Thnk u dear.. Glad to hear ur responses.. And really happy u liked it..
Yeah I try to use those words to keep it real and related to show.. Glad u noticed..
Next update is already made.. Check it out..

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Loved this part .. U hv written it so well without going too much graphic with the scene yet making it as sensuous and aesthetic as possible
⭐️ .. Loved the whole oinment idea which eventually leads to their consummation 😳 .. Ravi is a dream hubby any girl can ask for ..no wonder Devika was so overwhelmed with his gesture 😳 .. would love to see a morning continuation of the scene 😳

Wonderful updt 👏👏

Thnk u so much dear.. I personally feel this part is not up to d mark.. I really wanted to write more but was short of ideas n even words.. So kept it simple..
Morning continuation...HV some idea abt it.. But thinking to stop OS here only being disappointed wid the responses..
Nywy will think abt it.. If possible will pm u but won't post here..
M as a writer highly disappointed..

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff00ff">WOW</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff00ff">Very sensuous and mesmerizing update</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff00ff">Ravi's care and love for Devika is fanatical😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff00ff">you took me on a vicarious thrill ride RIYA</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff00ff">Best write up</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff00ff">I love it and definitely I would also love to see a morning continuation</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff00ff">as jyoti said😃</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff00ff">Thanks Riya</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff00ff">ps: Thanks for PM</font>

Thnx for always encouraging buddy..
Glad ur liking it.. But m really disappointed for now atleast ..
I don't think will b able to continue it..
But if i'l write morning continuation will pm u for sure..
Thnx for ur support always..

Originally posted by: docritu99

Thnk u so much dear.. I personally feel this part is not up to d mark.. I really wanted to write more but was short of ideas n even words.. So kept it simple..
Morning continuation...HV some idea abt it.. But thinking to stop OS here only being disappointed wid the responses..
Nywy will think abt it.. If possible will pm u but won't post here..
M as a writer highly disappointed..

I can understand .. I will suggest u to continue and then mayb PM your buddies so that they know u hv updated your OS .. I hv seen most writers doing it .. but again its your wish in the end .. will love if u continue 😳

I loved this part .. u kept it sweet simple yet sensuous .. and I can see even writers of the show r taking ideas from here .. I mean shaadi part .. so definitely u hv grabbed eyeballs somewhere 😉😃

Originally posted by: jyoti06

I can understand .. I will suggest u to continue and then mayb PM your buddies so that they know u hv updated your OS .. I hv seen most writers doing it .. but again its your wish in the end .. will love if u continue 😳

I loved this part .. u kept it sweet simple yet sensuous .. and I can see even writers of the show r taking ideas from here .. I mean shaadi part .. so definitely u hv grabbed eyeballs somewhere 😉😃

Awww.. Dats so sweet of u.. Will continue definitely just for u buddy..
Actually I already have some idea abt it so will update soon..
The last line made my day.. Thanxs dear.. Dat was a really sweet kinda encouragement.. Would love to write more now..

just read ur os in one go... really enjoyed it plz cont...

nice os
keep writing ...
waiting for another one or next part

Originally posted by: mariajamal

just read ur os in one go... really enjoyed it plz cont...

Thank u soo much dear..
But dry continuation won't be possible..

Originally posted by: mariajamal

just read ur os in one go... really enjoyed it plz cont...

Thank u soo much dear..
But sry continuation won't be possible..