RAVIKA OS (CONFESSION) new update pg 8(consumation) - Page 5

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

I am eagerly waiting for your next Update Riya

Hey samreen..it feels great to nodat u ppl are waiting..I hv already thought of so much but not getting time to pen it down.. Sry for delay but will update soon..for sure..

Originally posted by: docritu99

Hey samreen..it feels great to nodat u ppl are waiting..I hv already thought of so much but not getting time to pen it down.. Sry for delay but will update soon..for sure..

No problem Riya
I became greedy 😛
Appne itna acha likha
To aur pedhne ka man kiya

Hey everyone..hope u all are njoying RaVika story from my point of view..so on special demand let's unwrape Ravi's surprise...

Later that day..

Ravi is in a meeting wid nivi and others but he is lost in devika's thoughts..he's cherishing all special moments spent wid devika..he is smiling cutely..nivi notices him and understands..she gets damn jealous..as usual she tries to distract him but he is so deeply lost in those moments dat he was immovable..nivi gets angry and leaves..
There devika remembers abt the surprise ravi mentioned..she thinks what it must be..she struggles a lot to guess but in vain..finally she decides to ask him directly..
D calls ravi..he smiles seeing her name and pic flashing in his cell..
R thinks : Ooo to miss kach kach b mujhe miss krri h..how sweet
He picks her call
D(sharmate hue): ravi..!!
R : hmmm
D: busy ho kya..?
R: tumhare lie ni..miss krri ho mujhe??
D: ni bhala mai q miss karungi.
R: for call q kia
D: vo.. Vo.. Actually vo..
R: vo vo kya krri ho..
D: vo actually Maine bht kosis ki surprise k bareme na sochu but reh ni pai.. Kch guess b ni kar ppari hu..batao na surprise kya h..plz ravi batao na..
R(smiles): ohh acccha to ye baat h..!! Sry devika but uske lie to tumhe wait karna padega..
D(sad): accha tho h..chalo tum kaam khtm karlo or jaldi aajana..
R: Jo hukum madam..accha sunk hosake to red saree pehenna plz..
She smiles and gets happy
D: hmm(nods)
Both hung up and smiles remembering each other..

Its evening..

D is ready wearing red saree wid golden border long sleeves..she is looking so sexy..she is desperately waiting for ravi..chachi comes and notices..she says she is very happy luking this side of her..she blesses her to be like this always and then teases her..
Ting tong..door bell rings..devika gets super happy and then controls her emotions..
Chachi opens door and its ravi standing there..he greets her..devika is hidden behind pillar and sneak peek through to check out on ravi..he is as usual liking dashing in black shirt and blue denims wid long brown boots..chachi goes to bring water for him..devika comes in front of him..he is mesmerised wid her beauty and staring her wid mouth open..both are lost in each oother and deeply looking in each other's eyes..
Chachi comes clearing her throat..both comes back to senses and gets shy..chachi happily let's devika go along wid her darling hubby..both takes leave from chachi..
Outside home..
Ravi is sitting in bike then devika sits..she keeps her hand near his waist..he smiles..he holds her hand and clutches it tight around his waist..devika feels shy and smiles cutely..they leave..
A car follows them..its actually nivi inside car..she is very angry and jealous and couldn't control her anger..

Later ravi stops bike at ambe maa's temple..devika gets delighted..
D: hum mandir me q ruke h?
R: surprise ni chahie..
D: yha milega..
R(holds her hand): chalo mere sath..
Inside temple ravi greets panditji who informs him dat all preps are done.devika is surprised hearing this and a bit confused also..
R: devika mai janta hu hamari shadi kin halat me hui thi or is chiz ka mujhe hamesha afsos rahega(bends down on his knees) islie mai aaj ambe maa k samne unko sakshi maan k bina kisi dhoke ya chaal k tumhare sath pure dil se firse 7phere Lena chahta hu..(extends his hand).. Mai janta hu phle Maine Jo kia that vo galat tha but mere intentions galat no the..or aaj mai pure dil se confess karta hu k mai tumse bht jda pyaar karta hu or hamesha karta rahunga..meri aatma me tum bas gai ho devika..I really love u.. Will u marry me with all ur consent????
Devika is touched..she has tears in her eyes..she is so thrilled and enlighted..ravi also has tears flowing down through his eyes..they are standing right in front of ambe maa..devika looks towards ambe maa's mufti and thanks her for giving ravi as her husband..she holds his hand and make him stand..she moves towards him and wipes his tears..
D: mere pass words ni h kch bolne k lie..bus itna kahungi k aesa surprise srf tum hi de sakte ho..has ravi mai apni itcha se pure dilse tumhare sath vo 7 vachan firse Lena chahti hu..
Ravi gets extremely happy..so is devika..
D: ravi plz hamesha aese hi rhna kabi mat Badalna..
He nods and smiles..
Panditji calls them for phere..they hold each others hand and take 7 rounds around goddess idol while priest enchant divine mantra..it was all so magical..panditji brings sindoor from idol's foot and ask ravi to fill her mang..ravi takes sindoor and again ask devika's permission through eyes and gestures..she nods and permits..then ravi fills her mang..and she is enthralled..she feels to be completed..
Panditji ask abt mangalsutra..devika says she is already wearing it..how can she wear another one..panditji is also in thoughts..ravi says: mere pass ek solution h..devika is confused..he shows her a gold pendant set of heart shaped..he opens heart inside which it has both of their pictures..devika is amused..she is speechless..
R: kya ye pehna due..??
She shyly nods..then ravi makes her wear dat pendant set..she is so happy and continuously watches her new gift which has now become most imp gift of her life..she is overwhelming ly happy..
R: devika iss heartkheart k roop me Maine tumhe aapna dil dia h..or aab ye hamesha tumhare dil k karib rahega..
She notices its length which is actually reaching up to her heart's level..
D(teary eyed): srf ye dil ni issue dene wala b mere dil k bht karib h..
R(rejoiced): kya matlb??
D(turns away and tries to avoid his intense look): kch ni..(starts to leave)
He holds her hand and pulls her close..he doesn't say a word but his eyes were demanding something and devika understood exactly what it was..
She then cups his face and caresses it..
D: ravi kch dino se times kch kehna chahti tthi..himmat hi ni juta pari tthi..phle to kch smjha hi ni k mujhe kya hua h..ek ajib si beqarari rhti this hamesha..tumse bilkul b dur no reh pati this..but be chain hojati hu tumse Milne k lie..butfirse smjha ki issi feeling ko pyaar kehte h..pata ni kab kaise kaha but I hv fallen for u..rok hi ni pai khud ko..khichi chalk gai tumhare taraf..tumhari acchai or sacchai mere dil ko chuu gai..tumse bht pyaar karne lagi hu ravi..bht jda..I really love u..suna tumne..(she shouts stressing each word) I.. LOVE...Uu...
She runs here and there and shouting and enjoying...yes.I love u..I really love u..
Ravi is jolted wid happiness..he is unable to believe dat she actually confessed..he is standing still and smiling non stop..
She comes running towards him..hugs him catches her breath and again says in low tone..I love u..he clutches her tight and reciprocates..both HV teary eyes..
Nivi who was following them watches all this from far and xtremly angry..

To be continued...

P.S... Devika has confessed...

OMGG Finally she confessed 😲😳 ... This was such a beatiful confession right after those 7 pheras in front of Ambe maa ,.. so well thought by you 👏👏 ... Also I loved how Ravi puts the heart shaped pendent around her neck like a mangalsutra , again very creative dear 👏👏 ...

I really hope in real show too confession is similar to this .. I mean they r kidnapped but they can run away in jungle and find some Ambe maa's mandir na 😳 ... This scenario which u wrote really fits well for RaVika ... Confession was really hearttouching ⭐️

Cant wait for your next update .. is the suhaagraat coming up ? ☺️

PS :One suggestion .. whenever u do your next updt , just edit the title with page no. too , so then members will automatically know about it 😳

Wow
Great start 👏
Mesmerizing
Splendid write up Riya

Finally Devika confessed her love for Ravi
It's just romantic and thrilling
I visualized every thing. 😳 😳

You wrote it beautifully 👏 👏
I throughly enjoyed it.
Keep writing and share with us.
Bohot bohot bohot muzza aya perhne mein

Thanks a lot Riya.

PS: Thanks for the PM. 👏

Loved the confession! Great imagination and great writing waiting for the next post eagerly Riya

Great!! 👏 Loving the way u r bringing this story to the high point!! My anticipation is increasing day by day! Can't wait for the next update !!!

Wowieee...!!! 👏 this is just...i am speechless. Not getting any word to describe this story.

It has everything. Its complete package. Its flawless and complete.
Even the Chotu Chotu cute phn conversations have so much love and romance that I feel butterflies in my stomach reading that. I also loved that bike wala part.
Actual serial needs to be like this only. U portrayed Ravi's depth of love and emotions so well and perfectly. Each and every word n situation and scenario were perfect.
Even u touched show's theme also jisko cv's b bhul chuke h.

Great imagination buddy. Cv's should read this. I really want actual confession in show to b somewhat like this.

That pendant part was also superb. Very creative. Confession was so touching. Itna wait Marne k baad finally ravi has got something awesome in return. For d first time u include nivi here. Hope there is no trouble coming in further part.

Really want to no what's next in spare for us. Is it what m thinking? The consumation

If so plz do update soon. Really want to read more and more.

Great job. Well done. Do write more..

One thing want to ask do u write professionally? Or its just hobby?

Look at d views man. Its almost reaching 4k. No doubt this is the best topic here to be followed. Can't wait for next update.

I m actually disappointed with silent readers here. Guys she is really doing great work. If u want her to continue and if u like her work do take some effort to appreciate and encourage her. I request u all to share ur views also. Even u can suggest what u want next. I don't think she'll mind. 😉

Originally posted by: jyoti06

OMGG Finally she confessed😲😳 ... This was such a beatiful confession right after those 7 pheras in front of Ambe maa ,.. so well thought by you👏👏 ... Also I loved how Ravi puts the heart shaped pendent around her neck like a mangalsutra , again very creative dear👏👏 ...

I really hope in real show too confession is similar to this .. I mean they r kidnapped but they can run away in jungle and find some Ambe maa's mandir na 😳 ... This scenario which u wrote really fits well for RaVika ... Confession was really hearttouching ⭐️

Cant wait for your next update .. is the suhaagraat coming up ? ☺️

PS :One suggestion .. whenever u do your next updt , just edit the title with page no. too , so then members will automatically know about it 😳

Thnk u so much dear.. Ur comment has great importance..
Yeah abt suhaagraat its not far away.. So keep following..
Feels great to hear u guys want confession to be like this in reality also..

Buddy m not actually net or mobi kind of person.. I don't no hw to edit title..I hv already tried so many times but in vain..can u plz help..??