RAVIKA OS (CONFESSION) new update pg 8(consumation) - Page 2

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Wonderful continuation👏 .. I hope whoever is knocking at the door gets lost soon in your next part and the confession can complete unlike in the actual show😡😆...

Loved the whole dancing part especially the neck kiss followed by their passionate dance ☺️..do continue soon 😳

Thnks buds.. i think only 2 persons want me to continue..
I hv thougght of some special way for there confession.. for dat u hv to wait and read..
But it will come before in actual show for sure..
Thnks for d feedback..i really appreciate it..

Originally posted by: TR25026

Whenever devika wants to say something,he makes her mouth shut. Now eagerly waiting what she has to say!!! It s ridiculous . Her hand was in pain ,not her tongue.

Just dragging ,dragging, dragging!!!!!

Nothing else. I think,ekta is out of scripts & stories. I had stopped wathing her serials ,since,kasam se,that too i skipped the end. i watch life ok progs,becoz,it ends soon,not like star plus serials ,lasting for yrs.

Better end it on proper time,ekta. Pls

Yeah xactly dragging... when devika wants to say ravi shuts her mouth n when ravi wants to say devika shuts her mouth..they'l take 1 mnth to confess n another month to consumate..
Now kidnapping track will come that wil b dragged for months jus as in kb..

Originally posted by: docritu99

Thnks buds.. i think only 2 persons want me to continue..
I hv thougght of some special way for there confession.. for dat u hv to wait and read..
But it will come before in actual show for sure..
Thnks for d feedback..i really appreciate it..

I m sure there r many silent ones here who read it but might not comment .. hope they drop their comments too .. mayb if u hv friends , u can PM them whenever u updt your next part 😳

And yes cant wait for the confession that u hv planned .. who knowsCVs of the show might take idea from here 😉

Originally posted by: jyoti06

I m sure there r many silent ones here who read it but might not comment .. hope they drop their comments too .. mayb if u hv friends , u can PM them whenever u updt your next part 😳

And yes cant wait for the confession that u hv planned .. who knowsCVs of the show might take idea from here 😉

Wohhh...dats really a graet compliment for me.. n yeah there r so many silent readers but likhne wale ko b to pata hona chahie na whether ppl r liking it or not.. nywy i'l continue for sure..
N m really new to this forum.. i jus love writing n like RaVika so hv combined them.. no matter what but i'l continue..

Well.. I didn't comment yet obviously because I was speechless... 😉

I thought it was very intense, passionate and well written and developed exactly like a confession track would need to be in the serial as well...

Originally posted by: _Meena_

nice os

😊
Thnk u dear..

Originally posted by: LordRiddler

Well.. I didn't comment yet obviously because I was speechless...😉

I thought it was very intense, passionate and well written and developed exactly like a confession track would need to be in the serial as well...

Also can't wait to see how you plan to continue this and possible other OS's😛since you are such a good writer.. Ty for the effort and it looks amazing like I have already mentioned..

Btw.. count the likes on your posts as votes to continue as well..😉

Tysm..means a lot to me...to be called as a good writer is what i always look upto..
N yeah more other OS will surely come in future.. 😆

Hello guys..m back wid yet another part oof our beloved RaVika OS..
So lets continue.. ravi (disappointed wid interuption in his romance) opens door to find manju standing there.. she was tensed and horrified..
R: maa..kya baat h aap itte pareshan q lag rhe ho..kya hua h aapko??
M: (stammers) ravi..puttar..vo tere papa ka accident hogya h..hume abi nikalna hoga..unhe hamari jrurt h..
R: but maa abi to bht raat hogai h..esa karenge hum subah hote hi nikal chalenge..
M: ni puttar hume abi jana hoga..mera dil bht ghabra rha h..maine taxi bula li h tu jaldi se aaja..
R: thk h maa aap chalo mai abi aata hu..
Saying this manju leaves making ravika sad..
Later devika is packing his stuff..her sadness was evident as she was now unable to live a single moment without him..
Ravi comes after changing and speaks: sry devika vo mera jana bht jruri h varna mai yu tumhe akela chaod k kabi ni jata..tum ek kaam karna mere ate tk chachi k pass chale jana..unhe b accha lagega..
D thinks: ab mai tumhe kaise batau ravi tumhare bina mera kahi b mann ni lagega..
R: mai jaldi aane ki kosis karunga..apna khyal rakhna..
Saying this ravi takes his stuff and proceds to go..devika is sad and continously staring him..
Ravi reaches near door, turns and say: devika mai janta hu tumhare mann me kch feelings h jo shayad tum keh ni pa rahi ho..shayad tum comfortable ni ho..koi baat ni take ur own time..mai vo 3 magical words sunne k lie bekrar hu..or unhe tumhare mu se sunne k lie apni akhri saas tk intezar kar sakta hu..
Devika is touched by his words..her eyes get wet..within a moment she run towards him and hugs him tight almost..ravi also hugs her back..ravi then breaks hug wipes her tears and leaves waving byee to her..
Later that night..
Ravi is in car smiling and remembering everything in fb..their hug dance and everything..
He says in heart: hayee meri miss kach kach sharmate hue b kitti cute lagti h..uski to har aada pe pyaar aata h..mujhe to vishwas hi ni hora devika ne kaha k vo mere bina ni reh sakti..iss pal k mai kabse wait krra tha..pata ni jab vo mujhe ILU kahegi to kahi mai khusi se pagal na hojau..ILU meri miss kach kach..
He becomes restless and again n again looks at d screen saver in his mobile which has devika's pic in it..he think: devika se baat karne ka man hora h..ha ek kaam karta hu usko msg karta hu..but agar vo so gai hogi to disturb hojaegi..ni ..kal call hi kar lunga..tabtk ravi beta apne dil ko smjhao..
There in room devika is lying on bed..she is also restless turning sides on bed and unable to sleep..she then sits hold teddy bear which ravi has gifted aand start talking to it: tum q itna muskura rhe ho..tumhe pata h na meri kya halat hori h tumhare bina..
Ravi plz jaldi ajana..tumhare bina ye room bht khali khali lagta h..m missing u ravi
She also remembers everything and thinks to talk to him..
D messeges ravi : so gae kya??
Ravi gets her message and rejoices wid happiness
R replies: ni..mai abi tumhare bare mw hi soch rha tha..
D: kya soch rhe the??
R: yei ki tum mujhe miss krri ho ya ni?
D: mai q tumhe miss karungi
R: to fir abtk jagi q ho??
D shyly smiles reading this..and says to herself : isse na kch b ni chupaya ja sakta..bina bole sab smjh jata h..but ab time aagya h kch bolne ka..
Ravi is desperatly waiting for her rply..
D messeges a cute poem that says everything

Na jane kabse bus yuhi tanha chale ja rhi thi..
Na koi maksad tha na koi thikana..
Na koi ummide thi na koi tarana
Na koi sathi tha na koi afsana
Kch tha to bus ek vishwash k AMBE MAA h hamesha mere sath
Na hone dia h unhone kabi kch galat na chodengi kabi vo mera hath..
Unhe to tha mujhe shaitan se bachana
Jo ban gya tumhe meri zindagi me lane ka bahana..
Tum apne sath leke aae meri zindagi me bahar
Phli baar khushiyo ne dadtak di mere dwar..
Apni kismat pe mujhe na hua jara bhi atbaar
Kya ye sach h ya sapna yei sochti rahi bar bar..
Jis bandhan ko na maan dia, smjha apni barbadi
Tumhare roop me vo to bana meri khushiyo ki chaabi..
Ha mana laga dia thda samay na pai tumhe pehchan
Tum to nikle AMBE MAA ka bheja hua VARDAAN
Par ab na karungi koi der srg itna kahungi
AB TUMSE HAI ZINDAGI TUMHI HO MERI JAAN

Tumhari or srf tumhari
Miss Kach Kach

Ravi understood each and every emotion of devika which she depicted through this poem.. he was on d top of d world.. he almost jumped saying.. YESSS SHE LOVES ME..
He kisses his mobile phone out of excitement..
There devika is relieved and plesently smiling taking her phone near her heart..

To be continued..

that is absolutely beautiful loved thanks for sharing with us ❤️

Hi ritu