Manan SS:Karwa Chauth Valentines day: page-7 - Page 2

Originally posted by: aarzooarora

Thank you for the help. Yes you can suggest some words which will help , i will definitely let you know. But abhi to pyar ki gaadi patari par bhi nahi utari 🤣

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interesting concept...
1st chap is gud...
cabir n his jokes...manik is fida on nandini at first sight...
loved it...

Awesome start.Manik to fida hogeya nandu par.Waiting for next update.

Hello everyone ,

yaa I am sorry about the late update but kya karen modiji ne to rest lene ka time bhi nahi diya. All is well now of course.

Chapter-2

After Manik came out of the stance or sorry cabir made him out of it .Than they both entered the ancestral house looking so traditional every furniture made of fine wood and the look was royal south Indian home.

Akash introduced with all members of the home which includes Rakesh and rishabh also. Rakesh and rishabh are akash s cousins they have joined them for the engagement. Manik and cabir were feeling like out of place as none of them could speak hindi or English it's only Kannada, everyone only told one word "Swgata"
Cabir as usual looking for some good beautiful gaaon ki goris 😛...whereas manik was thinking about payal girl ...ohhooo They settled in a room where in the front was a big mango garden, it was looking beautiful.

Cabir jumped in the bed said dude main thak gaya...
Manik said come change yourself first than we will go to some site seeing..
Cabir: Whattt...No I ll sleep..i know y you want to do sight seeing ...😉
Manik: tujhe ana nahi hai mat aa Okay. Then he got freshen up came out of the room with camera. He entered the mango garden ..Again he heard the payal chimes..He stopped looked everywhere founding nothing again walked ..Than the payal sounds became strong he stopped looked straight to a mango tree .And guess what to his luck he saw the beautiful again , sitting in the tree, having raw mango. She looked so beautiful that he was just seeing her, than the girl saw him asked him through sign kya dekh rahe ho, he smiled love sick puppy u know.

He couldn't understand the language of the girl, he got the idea that she is saying him to help her in getting down. Ohhoo Manik mauke par chauka lag gaya 😆.

Manik helped her, she again asked his name in Kannada, manik idiot got confused 😲. Than she like shouted pointing hand to herself "Nandini" Manik was thinking what a beautiful name 😳..stance got broken by nandini , she just throw a mango towards him. He said pointing him his name "Manik". She smiled. WOW 😆

Than again someone called her Nandini..she started running manik followed her dheere dheere but to manik's luck she entered in the same house. Than manik got a idea that Nandini leaves here

Did you like it? Tell me...

Love,

Aarzoo 😊

Awww...

Ahaahhh I'm enjoying conpletelyyy⭐️

Hahaha that's funn..
liked it their chotu si mulakat.

waiting for next update eagerly.
Update soon

nice update...
first meet was too good...
loved d update...

Hi the story is really cute
Great work
Please continue soon

Chapter-3

Manik POV:

WOW kya ladki hai yaar 😛...long and soft hairs like sea waves... Her skin so soft ...milky white skin. Her scent goddd it was so intoxicating...her eyes dove eyes so innocent eyes . Her pouty lips...I just want to relish them at once. Wait what I am thinking...I don't know anything about her till now than why so much feelings...god I can't stop myself thinking about her.

Thinking all this he just entered the house , he was looking here and there to just a get a glimpse of his beauty .but she was nowhere to be seen but there are other girls who are like stunned seeing the handsome hunk...aur koun manik of course. But the way they were staring n giggling he got shy 😃 and got back to room.

Room main unse bada teaser baitha tha Cabiraaa 😆

Cabir : Mili teri sapno ki rani 😉

Manik got excited on the convo and he started

Manik: Mili bhi nahi bhi 😕

Cabir : what do you mean mili bhi nahi mili?? Saaf saaf bata mujhe uthane ke baad bhuk lagti hai to mera dimag thik se kaam nahi karta

Now manik glared at him like deadly glare but cabira to cabira kyun darega

Manik : yaar she lives in this house only but patanahi kaise dhundhu...aur again she speaks kannada and I don't know anything about this language

Cabir: ohoo to yeh baat hai. 😉 .manik kya tu use English naam nahi puch sakta tha

Manik: Naam to pata chal gaya isaaron se ...he blushed NANDINI ☺️

Cabir: Ohoo mere sher..to ab kya kisiko chalke puchtain hain nandini ke bare main

Manik: pagal ho gaya kya , yahan par sab traditional and conservative log rahte hain agar sab gussa ho gaye toh

Cabir also agreed with him, patted his shoulders in sympathy

Cabir: idea thodi der main akash ki engagement hai sab log to rahenge na tab mil lena

Manik agreed to it.

They started to get ready. And come out. Everyone was ready to go to temple for akash engagement. Manik was about sit in the car but he remember about his phone he had left in the room, he told cabir to start off, he will join later.

Manik was just coming out of the room, and suddenly heard someone's scream like a girl is begging to protect her. He ran to the front door and saw some goons all in white attire (shirt and lungi) were taking Nandini by force in the jeep.

Manik shouted nandini...nandini was trying get out of their holds she was struggling and screaming but when Nandini heard manik called she looked him with pain in the eyes . Manik was running to save her but the goons had already started the jeep and nandini was trying to extend her hand to manik like saying SAVE ME...

So cliffhanger...kya manik nandu ko bacha payega .. kaise 😲?

To know the answer wait for next update

One more thing guys I can't update Nandini POV as the surprise will over than...sorry

Comment me if you like it not...🤗

Love

Aarzoo