Manan SS:Karwa Chauth Valentines day: page-7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Everyone,

Here is a little story about our own popular Manan.I wanted to post it on Karwa Chauth but couldn't due to work commitments. This is my first work, please let me know how is it 😳


Karwa chauth an auspicious vrat festival in North India. Married woman keep vrat for longer life for their husbands. But though many heard in South India still they don't know about this puja. So how come Nandini Murthy Sorry 🤔 Nandini Manik Malhotra will know ?


Nandini Murthy (18 years) a small town girl from Karnataka is the heart of their brothers Rakesh Murthy and Rishab Murthy. They kept her with all needs and comforts of the world. Their parents died in accident so they wanted to give all the love to their little sis 😊

Flight Lieutenant Manik Malhotra(22 years) As you can read he is an Air Force defense pilot who keeps the border safe. Born and bought up to a defense family in Dehradun. Previously was posted on Jammu base. But for some internal work purpose he came to Bangalore Air base.


Lets see how this two will end up with each other?

Love ,

Aarzoo

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Chap - 2: Page 3
Chap-3: Page 4
Chap-4:Page 5
Chap-5: Page 5
Chap-6: Page 6
Chap-7: Page 6
Chap-8: Page 7
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow..
looking super interesting ...
Let's see how they gonna met.

waiting for it..
Edited by gtilwani45 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sounds very interesting
please continue soon
would like to read how the story progresses
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting concept dear...cont soon...Manik pilot... Wow...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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After the morning saute Flight Lieutenant manik malhotra got down from Su-31 fighter plane with his co pilot and friend Cabir Dhawan . There is continuously sound of the jet planes.

Making everything check they came out from the runway. Chilling out in the cafeteria manik and cabir bumped into Akash Ramchandran another pilot and he was their training mate in Air Force Academy. Always silent but with good heart. Manik was the handsome and most popular guy and Cabiraa was the most wittiest among them. He can trick anyone.

Convo:

Manik: Hi Akash how r u , long time no seen buddy

Akash : Am good, how come you people are here in Banglore?

Cabiraa jumped in between 😆

Cabir : Arey hum, hum to tahalne aaye the from jammu to banglore...accha sa garden hai naa yahan par 😉😉😉

Listening to this akash got confused whereas manik was like saale tu nahi sudhega look


Than manik: we came for internal office work and tell me why are you rushing out?

Akash blushes ☺️ and this two got curious 😲

Cabir said dude jo batana hai jaldi bata mujhe neend aa rahi hai am going 🥱🥱

Akash: Actually kal meri engagement hai ☺️, am going to my home town.

Manik and cabir: Congrats buddy

Akash: arey tum log bhi aao naa ghumna phirna bhi ho jayega, please its my humble request

Before manik kuch bole Cabir said arey hum jaroor ayenge 😛😛😛 South ki ladkiyaan bhi dekhni hain naa (in mind)

Akash: Okay phir you people get ready in 30 mins, i ll take you from the quarters.Ok they agreed.


Manik and Cabir Outfits


Manik sit in front seat of the ranger jipsy whereas cabir sit back side with his camera in hand to get some cool pics.

After tiring 1 hour drive they got down before traditional house of Hampi.

Manik was so impressed with the place, the scenery. He was just looking everywhere while cabir and akash was discussing something.

At the time manik just heard a beautiful sound of payal, he turned back to see the a beautiful girl in a traditional wear playing with her friends and laughing all along


Nandini Outfit
Manik was awestruck with the simple beauty goddess before. Just then someone calls "Nandu...Kanna" and she starts running...but while this suddenly she turns look at manik and than starts running again.

Cabir: Gaya manik malhotra...pyar ka bhukaar chad gaya flight lieutenant ko 😆

And manik came out the stance 😃


So how is it? Do reply me

Aarzooo


Edited by aarzooarora - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i luved it...pyaar in air,,😉😉😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cabira ko south ki ladki chahiyeee?????? Shit yaar nandu k jagah manik mujhe dekh leta toh☺️
Ohh ManBir in Hampi😲 Yeh dono mujhse fast hai😆
The plot is fresh and interesting.. I liked it...
Umm can I picturize any actor for Akash? Ya toh I can picturize my friend.. Isi bahane engagement mein mananbir se milungi main😆
Cabira is so funny man😆
MaNan.. Yeh talli ho gye🤣
Nicely written.. Plz pm me😊
P.S - I'll be glad to suggest some commonly used Kannada phrases/words😛
Edited by KYYtoshRCB - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful start
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KYYtoshRCB

Cabira ko south ki ladki chahiyeee?????? Shit yaar nandu k jagah manik mujhe dekh leta toh☺️

Ohh ManBir in Hampi😲 Yeh dono mujhse fast hai😆
The plot is fresh and interesting.. I liked it...
Umm can I picturize any actor for Akash? Ya toh I can picturize my friend.. Isi bahane engagement mein mananbir se milungi main😆
Cabira is so funny man😆
MaNan.. Yeh talli ho gye🤣
Nicely written.. Plz pm me😊
P.S - I'll be glad to suggest some commonly used Kannada phrases/words😛



Thank you for the help. Yes you can suggest some words which will help , i will definitely let you know. But abhi to pyar ki gaadi patari par bhi nahi utari 🤣

Stay tuned
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...
Excuted to read furthur...
Awesome story line...
Waiting eagerly for next😊😛😉

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