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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chala bavundi... I mean very nice...
Read all five chapters at once...
Pls update regularly...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey dear sorry for not commenting last time! I read ch4 today only :(
Well.. Hmm.. The MaNan Wedding.. South Indian rituals.. Mummaaa bechare ManBir ko woh ganda smoke sehna padaaa... Well yeah there's so much smoke huh.
Lungi 🤣 🤣 🤣 Shit this is like 🤣 Girls like handsome guys in lungi 🤣 My friend who has a bf got a lil attracted to this lungi guy of my class 🤣 Yahan toh its Manik 🤣 Abey I picturized him in lungi.. He looks so so damn sexy!!☺️
Their complaining was so cute!! Woh goons ki toh.. I remembered chennai express 😆
Nandu kuch bol!!
To be serious, how are they gonna communicate?
And I had a lot of fun reading it 😃 I was in a bad mood due to the off screen shit and the article and some unnecessary a-holes.. And you just made me smileee... Thanks a lot for that 🤗
Please do continue.. Story thumba chennagide(Kannada lol, story is too good 😊 )
P.S - guys really look sexy in lungis 😳😆
Edited by KYYtoshRCB - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
amazing update...
cabir is so much irritated to wear mundu...
nandini is not looking happy ...what happen to her...is she love someone else...
all pic z too gud...
what to know nandini pov...what going on her mind...
loved d update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter-6

Hi Everyone,

I hope you people remember my story, or forgot?? Don't worry I will not make you forget my story.

After the sleepless night Manik and Nandini get back to her ancestral home. They just reached and everyone gathered around them. The ladies and girls took Nandini with them. Manik just stared her while she was conversing with the girls. She is not at all looking happy. And this is hurting Manik.

Cabiraa came behind him-Ohho raat main aisa kya kiya ke abhi bhi uss se teri nazar nahi hat nahi rahi 😛

Manik gave a glare to him. 😡

Cabir- Chod yeh sab jaldi ready ho jao tum dono we have to leave for Bangalore now, Chief called three of us.

Manik just said okay. He saw Akash , called him to tell that they 4 have to leave immediately to Bangalore and share the news with family and Nandini and tell her to be ready.

Akash went and told everyone. After two hours everyone is outside seeing off them.

Nandini cried looking at all of them specially her brothers. Rakesh and rishabh caressed her forehead and they eyed Manik to take her. Manik came forward but before manik can touch her she started walking fast, Manik felt bad. Akash told Manik that her brothers are asking his address to send some gifts, things on behalf them. And asked if he wants anything, they will give without any worry.

Manik said: Please don't give anything I am personally against this type of things, I will appreciate if you all bless us both for a happy life. Akash translated them and all got happy to hear him.

All 4 sat on the jeep, Cabir was driving, akash sitting beside him. Manik and Nandini behind. Nandini is seeing outside and Manik is seeing only Nandini. Cabiraa started "Do dil mil rahe hain, magar chupke chupke" 😉

They reached in the evening to the Air Force quarters. Everyone is staring at Nandini because of her get up. She got uncomfortable. Manik knew and called Akash told him to take Nandini to his room and tell her to take rest.

When Akash came, Manik was having a drink in the lounge with Cabir. He sat next to them.

Manik started: Akash baat kya hai, Nandini khush nahi hai? Kya kisi ne use jabardasti ki shaadi ke liye?

Akash got conscious and told: No Manik, aisa nahi hai but tu janta hai naa Shaadi kaise halat main hui..woh tumhare baare main kuch nahi janti, tum dono baat bhi nahi kar sakte kyunki nandu ko hindi English nahi aati aur tujhe kannada nahi aati. Isiliye shayad dari hui hai. Don't worry I ll teach her some hindi. U both can manage. I told her also that you are good guy and will keep her happy.

Manik and cabir agreed to Akash and sip their drinks.

Meanwhile in quarter Nandani took bath and did prayer to Ayyappa, wore a simple half saree and went to kitchen. Manik entered, and saw her in the simple look. He just sat in sofa and kept on admiring Nandini looks. His trance broke when Nandini patted his hand to give Coffee.

He smiled to her, but didn't have any revert back. He wanted to say so many things but but she can't understand her...poor boy.

He saw Ayyappa photo kept on a corner with agarbati , some flowers he prayed: Nandini ke Ayyapa please isse jaldi hindi sikha do please"

Lets see Ayyappa will listen to Manik prayers or not 😆

Till than

Love

Aarzoo - Do comments please I love to read them 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm feeling so bad for Nandu😒
At least Manik has Cabir to talk with and seems like Nandu doesn't talk much to Akash..
I hope Aiyappa listens to Manik.. Aise chup chup nhi dekh sakti😒
Thnx for the PM :)
And I don't want this story to end! It is so lovely!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
amazing update...
manik loves her so much...but nandini behaviour making him think that what she is thinking...
hope nandini understand his feeling...
loved d update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi dear ur story is awesome dear I read all parts in one goi thought nandu wil speak something poor manik pls update soon
And pls pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter-7

Hola People,

How r u all? Last update I got some good response and good comments. I am happy that you people are feeling sad for Manik s misery well guess what Ayyappa ne uski sunli 😳😳

Manik took the coffee cup and gesture her a thank you...no no iske liye gesture kyun he scolded himself and loudly said Thank You. And she smiled. Arey wah reaction! Manik smiled to the fullest 😃. He gestured her to sit & have her coffee. She did. Good going Manik Beta...not bad.

Like this isaaron isaaron main raat bit gayi. Next day while getting ready for duty he said to Nandini or say hand gestured her that he is going to office. Nandini smiled like telling she understood. She said Okay...Ohh God Nandu boli 👏👏👏.

In the day while Manik was on his saut, Akash came to Nandini taught her some words English/Hindi jobhi manage ho paaye dono ke bich main kyunki Manik ko Kannada teach karna matlab one year waste .

In the evening Manik and Cabir came, and Nandini open the door & she said Namaste, They were shocked but smiled to her n did Namaste.

Cabiraa taunted Shayad Akash ne isko sanskaari hindi lesson padha diya hai. Than she asked Coffee?

Manik smiled, but nandu couldn't understand. Cabiraa went to manik ear n said "are mere majnu tu smile deta rahega to who kaise samjhegi haan nahi to yes bol"

Manik immediately shouted Haan to which both got shock. Than Nandini said baitho, main kitchen coffee. To which they both understand n smiled. Nandini went to kitchen,

cabira said" I am feeling pity on you. Bichari kitna try kar rahi hai hindi sikhane ki"🥱🥱

Manik glared to Cabir 😡. Nandini came with coffee mugs and said doo. They look surprised. Again she said doo while gesturing to coffee mugs in tray. That time manik understood and by taking the coffee mug he corrected her doo nahi loo. She smiled n said okay.

Aisa kaisa chalega Manik ki pyar ki gaadi. Let's see in next chapter, till than asta la vista. And Happy Republic Day to you all.

Love

Aarzoo

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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Loved it...loved nandini ki tuti fhuti Hindi...but nandini kya illiterate hai...coz usse English kyu nahi aati...plz clear this. And pm me for next one.Cont soon.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: manancraze

Loved it...loved nandini ki tuti fhuti Hindi...but nandini kya illiterate hai...coz usse English kyu nahi aati...plz clear this. And pm me for next one.Cont soon.😳



No she is not illiterate but she is village girl where they only read and write in regional language. She can read and write English too but just for sake. in your words tuti fhuti.
This is the fact in south India other than Hyderabad all other cities don't know hindi, villages to baat chod do. And English how many people of Indian villages speak good English although they have graduates, this is India's current situation.
Edited by aarzooarora - 8 years ago

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