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@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Heheh.
Interesting update.
manik is hahaha.
so much fun na...
haww nandu ko kisne utthaya..
waiting for next update eagerly.
Update soon

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navla

@navla

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

amazing update...
manik is shy...so cute...
manik n cabir conv. is too gud...
nandini ko koi kidnap kar raha hai...why they r kidnapping her?
loved d update...

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aarzooarora

@aarzooarora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

hi guys,

i think my story is not so good thats y so less response in the third part. i wanted to post a dhamake wala update but then seeing the response i am demotivated 😕😕😕

but anyways i ll post tomorrow and with 2 or 3 updates finish the story

Thank U

Love

Aarzoo

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Thoshna

@21July2014

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Whaaattt

Pehle toh I didn't know 3rd part was posted and mummaaa 5 parts zyada milega plz aarzoo??

And baapre this 3rd part! I just hope manik un goons ki lungi utaarde!! Lungi bhi jayegi aur insult bhi hogi😡

Manik uthake lejayega nandu ko😳

And awwwieee manik is blushing shooo much so cutee

And ManBir❤️

Cabira roxz haan😃

Plz 5 part aur❤️

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aarzooarora

@aarzooarora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: KYYtoshRCB
Whaaattt
Pehle toh I didn't know 3rd part was posted and mummaaa 5 parts zyada milega plz aarzoo??
And baapre this 3rd part! I just hope manik un goons ki lungi utaarde!! Lungi bhi jayegi aur insult bhi hogi😡
Manik uthake lejayega nandu ko😳
And awwwieee manik is blushing shooo much so cutee
And ManBir❤️
Cabira roxz haan😃
Plz 5 part aur❤️

Thanks girl u made my day 😆 Kitne naye ideaee diyen hain

5 parts i ll try , but today i can't post anything due to illness, will definitely do a dhamake daar post in 2 days

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navla

@navla

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

i love ur story...
plz dont stop ...
waiting for next part...

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aarzooarora

@aarzooarora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Chapter-4

Manik immediately called cabir told everything. Cabir told him to rush and save nandini, they are coming asap. Manik search everywhere, in a side road he found a bike ...ok guys it's not racing bike but it's normal bike which you will find in villages. He tried hard to start but it didn't. He kicked n kicked but no luck.

Each passing minute he was getting restless. He finally prayed to god to help him save his love. After that immediately the bike started. He soon reached the main road and his eyes scan the area to find the jeep. He was crossing the road when he heard nandini voice from the nearby temple which has long stairs like 50 above.

Manik long legs worked faster here. He soon reached and saw a giant black guy in complete white attire is marrying nandini by force. He has hold both her hands very tightly. Manik shout Nandiniii..then they shared a eye lock with him. The guy got angry leaving nandini to goons he walked towards manik and the fight started.

Though manik is not so muscle builder person but he did have tricks as he is a fighter pilot so he kept fighting and he succeeded in giving some solid punches to that giant fellow while he also had bruises. Lastly he took one big wood log kept in the side and strike to his head. To which he immediately got unconscious, the other goons leaving Nandu came towards but he is a good fighter .

Nandini was getting mesmerized but in the moment while beating a person Manik took the Sindhur thaal in his hand and by accident sindur was now in Nandini forehead(maang). He didn't realized , he kept fighting until he heard a shout from behind .The whole family was shocked looking at Nandini. While Rakesh and rishabh just folded their lungis and start beating the goons . And you won't believe they killed all of them because they have just touched their beautiful baby sister.

Manik & Cabir were in shock seeing the scenario. On the way to home Akash told the giant guy was a relative to them name is BALA. He is having a property dispute with Murthy brothers that is why to acquire the land he abducted Nandini to marry. Manbir were really feeling it hard to digest all things.

When they reached the Main door they were just about to enter , a old fellow shouted on them "Nirkisi" Akash told them to stop.Then the oldie started in Kannada language and Manbir were just staring at him.Akash translated Manik that though by accidentally sindoor fell from his hand to Nandini forehead but they are considered as married now. So he have to wed Nandini properly now with their all traditions and customs. Is he ready to marry Nandini?? Manik and Cabir were shocked they were just looking at the oldie like he is a ghost but soon cabir took the charge said yes to which Manik confusedly looked at him. Cabir whispered to him that her brothers are too dangerous to handle , if he says no they will kill them and anyways he loves Nandini so there is issue right? Manik just stared them for few time and nodded his head finally agreeing for the marriage.

Kaise laga ...LOL 😆😆😆Do comments and share your views Love Aarzoo

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navla

@navla

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Amazing update...
Manik long legs worked faster here...this lines is hilarious...
manik fight with goons...but accidently sindur was now in Nandini forehead...omg they are married...
nandini bro more strong then manik...
old lady tld them to marry with all rituals...so finally manan marriage is on the way...
loved d update...

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aarzooarora

@aarzooarora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Chapter-5

Hello guys.

Long time ...I know. But I was some kinda depressed with the rate of updates in manan forums. So every day I was battling with myself to update the SS which I started on Manan. Alsa I got motivated today thanks to our FF queen @Mawara_Ejaz, and my personal favorite Dheere dheere FF. It was so beautiful and so fresh although being 1 year long, that it made my day.

Manik and Cabir clad in white lungis were amusedly staring at the Lagna Mandap in front of them. Seriously they looked like some village guys instead of cool dudes of India Air Force. Atleast Cabir was wearing shirt with lungi But Poor Manik With lungi and a white piece cloth to hide his chest. Poor Baby, I feel sorry for him.

Cabiraa started his ranting: "Shaadi to kar raha hai...to mujhe kyun yeh Mundu pahna diyen hain?"

Manik just made bad face and said "Aur Haan bol"

Akash made Manik sit in the mandap , Manik requested him: " Yaar Akash please, can I please wear something normal kurta pyajama...I feel like naked yaar. It's so uncomfortable, I am scared if the knot will open than?" Akash started laughing along with Cabir and said "Sorry Yaar can't help"

One Oldie came with Nandini's brothers and the Shaadi rituals started. There was one interesting rasam Kaashi Yatrewere Manik will started to leave for Kashi Yatra Rakesh will plead Manik to marry his sister by pleading him hand folded. Rakesh worships Manik by washing his feet. And Manik is good guy , he felt bad that they had to touch his feet, he gestured them to not do it.

Then came the bride Nandini..all in her red glory wearing red and golden pattu sari with all gold jewelries. Manik got mesmerized with her beauty. Cabira came near Manik: "Muh band kar Machchar gush Jayega"

Nandini

Manik had to stand up to exchange the garlands, and they both sat. Again Rakesh came handed a coconut and betel leaf to Manik with Nandu's hand . The instant Manik touched her hand both feel tingles, Nandini shivered and her hand was cold. Manik sensed something is wrong with her. Again he got up to tie the Mangalsutra, and then they take Saath Pheras.

garland exchange

After that the marriage got over as told by the Pujari. But cabir asked where Sindur, Manik didn't applied it, than Akash told him it's not in their Shaadi rituals. Cabira just said "Weird rituals!! But Shaadi is over naa can I change now"

Shaadi is Finally over Phewww...They took everyone's blessings, Manik was only looking towards Nandini's face she was acting like expressionless. Manik wanted to ask her but when...she was taken by the women of the house and he was taken to a Boat, It was decorated with all flowers,coconut leaves and all. He went inside and by seeing the dcor he got a idea that it's for their first night, he started blushing...Awww cutie pie.

Than after some time he heard some girls giggling and the beautiful sound of Nandini's anklets, how much he love the sound. He turned to see, Nandini devoid of the jewelries with a simple white and golden border Saree standing in front of him. He came near her; she got nervous and took two steps back. Manik sensed her uneasiness. Just gestured her to be relax and sleep in bed. After some time he saw Nandini is sleeping like a baby in the bed and he is staring her from the sofa, a smile came in his face. But the major problem is how to communicate with his girl...a smile on thinking only that Nandini is now his..Officially HIS.

Done with the update.

Ignore if any typo mistakes, Please like and give your views

Lots of Love

Aarzoo