Waiting Room|| Prologue || 11.8.16

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Hello forums. A new concept came into my mind and without wasting any time I am just pouring out my new story here. It's a different concept for this forum and for me also. Tried my best what I wanted to convey through my writing . Happy reading :)



PROLOGUE


In Mumbai

For the past six months life became a burden for Manik. This was not the life he had ever imagined even in his nightmares. He is alive, just ALIVE, barren of all emotions , all the love and affection he was once filled up with .

One accident , just one accident and his life rotated upside down .

It was their first marriage anniversary . They were so happy , especially Alia , after all her husband who she dated for 1 year before marriage and the young couple tied the sacred knot last year and started their conjugal life blissfully.

Alia and Manik met in their high school and were good friends initially. Alia and Manik both bragged from the riches families of Mumbai. Same background, same lifestyle , Manik's personality and Alia's beauty all together and their young crazy infatuation made them a couple in their last year of graduation. After dating for a year, with both the families consent, they had grand wedding and was passing a blissful , young , carefree married life.

Everything was going perfectly. Perfect family, perfect hubby , perfect bank balance .

Their anniversary was going perfectly right from their 12 am surprise to going to their farmhouse for another honeymoon. But everything changed in that road to the farmhouse where all on a sudden ,a truck coming from the opposite side loosing its break, collided with Manik's car .

After that incident , the couple were immediately taken to the nearby hospital by the local people . After contacting with their parents , the couple was taken to the Mumbai Jaslok hospital.

It was Alia who was badly injured since the track came from her side on the other hand , Manik was driving the car, so he wasn't that injured.

After that day Manik gradually recovered but it was Alia who slipped into coma.

Now all Manik is left with , his daily routine of going to the office , then to the hospital where he remain sitting silently in the waiting room for god knows how long staring at the ceiling and then coming back home.

This one accident took away all his happiness, all the peace of mind. After that dark night , he almost stopped talking unless it's important whereas he's the same guy who used to be the popular guy in his high school for his all time fun loving talkative personality.




In Delhi

Nandini and Aryaman.

It was an arranged marriage but Nandini had no problem with it. She was the obedient child of her parents who can go any extent to make her parents smile . During her 3rd semester in Literary department of Delhi university, she got married to Aryaman, a middle classed , quite good looking guy with a decent family background.

Before marriage even though Nandini and Aryaman met a few times but they weren't that close. Even after marriage Aryaman and Nandini decided to take their relationship slowly. In matter of their relationship, Aryaman was always considerate. He was sweet , he was caring but still there was always an emptiness inside Nandini. Though she could never realise what that was , not that she had someone else in her life. She was always focused on her studies that she had no time for thinking about love, unless she got married and feeling something was missing.

Already they were married for 2 months.

Days were the same after her marriage. Aryaman always encouraged her to complete her study , so she continued studying even after her marriage. Life was all about waking up , preparing breakfast and lunch for Aryaman, going to University, coming back at home, preparing dinner and waiting for Aryaman. At night they used to have dinner together , a little chit chat about the whole day and going back to sleep. Of course in different beds since Nandini was still feeling uncomfortable and Aryaman was comfortable in giving her space and she was grateful to him for this.

That day was no different then other days but the day didn't end the same way.

She was busy making dinner when her phone started ringing . She hurriedly picked up the phone since the caller was Aryaman. But what she heard after receiving the call made her knees go weak , her body stated shaking .

It was a call from Delhi hospital telling Aryaman had a accident with his bike and he was badly injured . She needs to come soon.

On the way to the hospital she called her in laws and told her about the incident. They all hurriedly went to the hospital . Nandini by now was sobbing continuously seeing Aryaman in such a critical state. How could she not ? If not lover , Aryaman surely had become a good friend to Nandini.

After long 2 hours of operation , the doctor informed her and the family that his condition deteriorated further due to huge amount of blood loss and he needs to be shifted to Mumbai Jaslok Hospital where the famous Surgeon Dr . Sri vastav is in charge .

Immediately the family decided to send Nandini along with Aryaman to Mumbai in Air ambulance.


Two people, same situation , same pain. What will happen when they will meet each other in this phase of their life ? Will they remain just strangers or there will be more to come in their path ? Will life give them a second chance to be happy ? If so, will they accept the chance ?


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Liked it ? Want to read more and want to tell me anything about this concept ? Then do drop your suggestions, feedbacks about this concept. I will be waiting for it and don't forget to like , if you are up for this story . ThankYouu :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Alia is in coma and Aryaman needs medical attendance..hmm interesting..
They both are married yet Manik is waiting for his love and Nandu is cmng along with Aryaman..

is this a plot on friendship ...that could be the only possible relation now...

coz Manik is in love with his partner immensely and Nandu is coping up and she is married too...

Quite interesting..will wait for the update..

Thank you so much Sweety..all the best for the story and keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
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And there you go again with another promising concept! You know... I've come to that stage where I must stop when I see your name around in this forum. Because I know that whatever you dish out to us readers will be unique. Entertaining. Spellbinding. ⭐️

Coming to the story, it's really tragic how their lives have turned out to be. I can't say whose plight is worse. Manik's or Nandini's. Both of them are going through an equally tough phase.

We have Manik who is deeply in love with Alya. So many dreams. So many hopes and aspirations all shattered in moments. It's something which happens out in the real world and that's why it got our hearts thumping. Fate can be cruel sometimes.

Fate has been equally merciless with Nandini. Though she never engaged physically with Aryaman, those feelings of love and bonding are obviously there. It's very sad what's happening now.

But then... it seems like Someone up there has got different plans. Yes. Fate may be cruel. But sometimes, for the right thing to happen, it has to be that way.

All in all, a lovely start! Besides comedies, thrillers and horrors, dramas are something that tops my list. I'm in love with this story already. Do PM me and please do continue soon! 😃
Edited by Archana_Vinod - 9 years ago
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Diffrent story plot... Unique... Manan... But they r love in with their partners
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That was superb
An entirely different plot
Continue soon
Waiting to discover more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

Alia is in coma and Aryaman needs medical attendance..hmm interesting..

They both are married yet Manik is waiting for his love and Nandu is cmng along with Aryaman..

is this a plot on friendship ...that could be the only possible relation now...

coz Manik is in love with his partner immensely and Nandu is coping up and she is married too...

Quite interesting..will wait for the update..

Thank you so much Sweety..all the best for the story and keep it up




Well this story will be based on two people struggling with the worst phase of their lives but together. Yes , it is a plot in friendship, a bond of togetherness gradually. Well is that friendship the base of every relationship? 😉 😉

Anyways THANKYOU dear 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod

<font size="4">And there you go again with another promising concept! You know... I've come to that stage where I must stop when I see your name around in this forum. Because I know that whatever you dish out to us readers will be unique. Entertaining. Spellbinding.⭐️</font>

<font size="4">Coming to the story, it's really tragic how their lives have turned out to be. I can't say whose plight is worse. Manik's or Nandini's. Both of them are going through an equally tough phase.</font>

<font size="4">We have Manik who is deeply in love with Alya. So many dreams. So many hopes and aspirations all shattered in moments. It's something which happens out in the real world and that's why it got our hearts thumping. Fate can be cruel sometimes.</font>

<font size="4">Fate has been equally merciless with Nandini. Though she never engaged physically with Aryaman, those feelings of love and bonding are obviously there. It's very sad what's happening now.</font>

<font size="4">But then... it seems like Someone up there has got different plans. Yes. Fate may be cruel. But sometimes, for the right thing to happen, it has to be that way.</font>

<font size="4">All in all, a lovely start! Besides comedies, thrillers and horrors, dramas are something that tops my list. I'm in love with this story already. Do PM me and please do continue soon!😃</font>




O my god . ThankYouu so much Archana. You surely knows how to appreciate others work , that too so gracefully 😃 😃

And about this plot, you even described the prologue so nicely in your words . That's what I love about you, so genuine to what you feel ⭐️

Hope I can do justice to my characters in the upcoming episodes. Thank you so much for the support . Really thank youuu 😊 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soothu

Diffrent story plot... Unique... Manan... But they r love in with their partners



Tried to make this story relate able with the reality. Reality can be harsh, and it has been for both Manik and Nandini . It's a story which will take us on a journey where reality will be both harsh but beautiful, if you want to make it beautiful.

Anywayss, thanks 😃 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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different but interesting concept
cont soon
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Originally posted by: rockstarlover

<font size="2">different but interesting concept
cont soon
</font>



ThankYouu 😃

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