|MaNanBir Joint FF| - DREAMERS (Chap 10 by Prats Pg 34) , 24 August

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja
Oh god.. the story changed like completly...
I think this is the best part about the concept...
Everytime u read the next part it has some major jhatka so major twists...
There will never be like filler chapters in this story

The update was really really good... kiss bhi ho gya.. n manik chala bhi gya... so excited to know aage kya hoga...

Thanxx for the wonderful update

Keel smiling
Stay blessed
:)

thanks a lot dear

i am glad u liked it

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1
oh gal u gave a romantic angle to this story

awesome

I read Rahul s dhamki
I think he s going to make a love triangle thr 😛

thanks dear

and even i am scared of rahul now

he will do anything

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: gtilwani45
Hahaha. That was one nice. Interesting surely ... Manan's First kiss 😳 Aww so Passionate na ... Totally Loved it.. Amazing ... Cabir poor baby. Feeling bad for him ... Manik told nandu ab kuch. haww. he really likes her. n nandu she is too crying . aww. both feels something something. Ab manikk chala gya .. m so eager to know how the story will proceed.. Waiting for next update eagerly. Thanks for pm.. !! Keep Smiling !!

thanks a lot dear

ur words really encourages us all

even i am waiting for the next one

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic
Hahaha..
Finally Manik said the truth...
Manan kiss aww...
The Story is turning too much...
Let's see how bira reacts...
Luved it..
Waiting for next...
Update soon...

thanks a lot pari

i am glad u liked it

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: yashikalily
yeh kya ho gaya re baba...
yeh kya kr dala...writer...
matlab ...itna...sab kuch ek hi...
part me...
but seriously...it was an intresting...one...
hahaha...dat manik curses god...lol...
omg they kissed...well it was totally unexpected for me...
n they separation...nahiii...
matlab...relation start hone se pehle hi khatam...
ho gaya...
this update goes like...
funny mode... ...to ...shocking mode...to ...to senti mode...to sweet sa confession...to heart breaking mode...
seriously it was a bumpy ride...indeed...
great job.../
superb update...

thanks a lot dear

i am glad u liked it

and dont worry u can get many twists in coming ones

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Tejamanaswini
Loved this di
Never expected it to turn all around but still it seemed so nice to read.
I am waiting for other writer to turn it all around.
This is amazing work, keep it up.
😊😊😊

thanks teju

even i am waiting for kirti chapter

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prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

HI all i am posting this part on behalf of our writer kirti who is a writer in wattpad so here is the part

CHAPTER 4:

Manik sat in his car n started the engine to go back to his flat...
but before moving he again saw nandini ... she was still looking at
water... he was feeling bad for hurting nandini and cabir at the same
time... but it was needed as he can't lie more... he was feeling
suffocated with the lie he made... but his one part was satisfied
somewhere that nandini won't think him as a gay...

Finally after looking one last time to nandini he drove back to their flat...

on his way back he was just thinking how to confront with cabir... it
was difficult for him...it was hard as he know cabir attraction
towards himself. ...

after a long drive he stopped his car infront of his flat...

manik- hmmm... what i will say... should i say it directly.. ah nah.
he will be hurt... but if i will say indirectly then also ... what
should i do..aahhh..

finally after a long session of self taking manik stepped down from
the car and headed towards entrance...

manik rang the door bell... n cabir open with a smile on his face.

cabir- thank god manik uh r here... I was cooking your favorite food
for dinner ..n see Na nandini is still not back... so careless she's
... acha come inside...

manik self thought - ohhh goddd...help me to get rid of this lie ...
he's so happy ...how can I ruin his happiness... no no manik dnt get
flow in emotions... today by hook or crook uh have to tell him ... yes
..I will say all to cabir
..cabir voice bring me back from my self session

cabir- what happen manik... uh r lost some where

manik- nah nah. .WO cabir i want to tell uh something important... WO
I was saying ki..

cabir- we will talk later...first let have some food..

manik- naahhii... we will talk first...

cabir- OK fine..don't get hyper... acha tell me..why uh want to talk
so important

manik(in mind- yes manik uh can say..speak manik..yeah uh can do it)
WO..cabir...WO I was saying... ki WO i'm ..WO...

I was about to say when I heard a loud sound saying or I should say
shouting STOPPP

.

I turned my face back to see nandini at back... face with sweat n her
breath was uneven as she run in some marathon...

Nandini POV

It was one of the hectic day for me... in morning I was happy for
cabir... as he's the only family I have... I went for shopping where I
met manik... n due to circumstances we kissed
... it was mine first kiss... that kiss was not wrong but the
situation in I m is wrong...

manik told me all his truth... wait a second... he's not gay..mean I
have a chance...yes I do like him... like he's every girls dream...his
pysic..his chocolatey brown eyes... his charm...

but its not possible coz cabir loves him... but this is wrong... manik
is not gay... n manik is going to say all this to cabir... ohhh
shit..oh freaking shit I have to stop manik to create this
blunder...yes I should run.. I mean...should ask for a cab.. yeah m
sweating ..as I need to hurry up...

I call for a cab...n within half an hour reached back home..

I run to open the door n to shut manik mouth as I know what step he
will take... he will break cabir's heart...and I have to stop him
anyhow...

I entered n shouted on top of my voice STOOPPP
..

Cabir and Manik looked at me like I'm an alien though I don't look
like them... But my act make them think so..

cabir- hey nandu..what happen

nandini- WO cabir WO I was..

cabir- offo uh r also stuck like manik

nandini- han WO cabir I was saying ki

.han wo an mai jab shopping pe gai thi Na..tab wah par..

cabir nodded his head n ask me to continue
and manik was shock as nandini will speak about kiss!!

nandini -han to i met one of my friend their...
cabir-thats great... call her home... uh both spnd some tym
together.. ok..chlo... have dinner n then off to bed..ok
nandini nodded her head n looks at shocked manik..

manik was in utter shock as why nandini stops him from saying the
truth instead she lied ...

manik- but cabir i have to tell u something
cabir- ye manik.. tu bata dena but tommorow
nandini- han manik tell cabir tommorw ..she said greeting her teeth yet smiling

cabir left to bring food from kitchen... n getting the opportunity
nandini dragged manik to cabir's room..to have a word with him!!

manik-why did uh stopped me
nandini- coz i dont want uh to hurt cabir
manik-but one day he will get to know
nandini-he wong get to know about ur lie..coz uh r going to leave our house
manik-whattt
nandini- yes mr.malhotra... leave our house as soon as possible..
manik-ok fine ..ms.moorthy... but listen to me very carefully ..
before leaving i will say whole turth to cabir..

nandini- no uh r not gonna do that
manik-i will... not out from my room
nandini-ha going!!

nandini carefully left his room n..freshned up for dinner...

cabir had his dinner smiling.. where as manan were eating food like
they r eating each others face.. :p

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at night...

manik was again not able to sleep due to his encounter with nandini
and was continuously thinking about their kiss... yes it was his first
kiss n he was happy tht he kisswd a girl whom he likea..but he was sad
as that girl will never accpt him by hurting his own brother...

manik thought to call mukti..as she can only help.him out with this mess

manik called her... n after 5-6 calls mukti finally received the call

mukti-what the hell manik..why dont uh let me sleep peacefully
manik- and what about my sleep..jo tune udha ke rakhi hai
mukti-what did i do
manik- mukti ..am in a great mess..pls help.me dude
mukti- manik uh r sounding serious..what happened??
manik- dont freak out after listening me
mukti- dont tell me cabir ko sab pata chal gaya
manik- nahi..lekin.. he narratef what all happened between him and nandini
mukti- ohhh shit.. ye tune kya kia manik
manik- thats the problem mukti..now pls help me..and find a new place for me..
mukti- ok..i will..abhi so jao..n let me also have some sleep

here nandini situation ws not better than manik

nandini- why m not able to sleep..whenevr m closing my eyes..that kiss
is only coming infront of me..
yes it was her first kiss too... but yet she was not wrong for the
kiss ..as she too somewhere like manik.. but when she thinks about
cabir..she shook her head negatively... as she's the one who knows
cabir have feelings for manik..

both of them was not able to sleep as their mind has some other
equation whereas heart has its own equation..as they like each other
but afraid to accept that...

it was the longest night for both of them...finally after few hours
they slept thinking about each other...

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Next morning

manik and nandini woke up late .. n cabir was out for his work..

manik get up with the constant ringing of his phone while nandini was
in shower

manik without seeing the caller id spoke

manik-yes ..who's this??
mukti-its me mukti manik...
manik-yess
mukti-get ready to look for your new house
manik-hmm
mukti- abe gadhe uth ja...
manik- ha ha.. he with jerk woke up.. sachi mukti mil gaya ghar
mukti- mil nahi gaya..mil jyega..agar tu time par agaya
manik- ha coming in half an hour

with that he got up to freshn up.. ..

whereas nandini comes out from her room n was going to prepare lunch for herself

manik- cabir pls give me some brkfast i have to leave

nandini-cabir is not at home.. n waise bhi mr.malhotra make a habbit
now to do your work own
manik- so FYI i dnt need anyone to help me..m capable of to do my work
nandini- han wo to dikh hi raha hai
manik- ohhh really ms.moorthy...
nandini- yes..n if uh wanna have breakfast then do your work by your own
manik- no need..i will have it outside
nandini- nice idea manik malhotra (note sacarsm)
manik with smirk on his face left buttoning his shirt!!!

nandini- samjhta kya hai apne aap ko... jao nahi dungi brkfst na lunch
na dinner... pata nahi isme gadhe me kya dikhta hai cabir ko... cabir
like nahi krta hota isss manik ko to abhi isko apna famous punch
deti... but i have handle his attitude for cabir!!!

manik- samjhti kya hai apne aap ko... jao mujhe kya hai..uh lost
yourself by rejecting me... pata nahi samjhti kya hai... jaise queen
victoria ho... cabir ki sister nahi hoti to batata mai iss ladki ko
... but i have to handle her tantics for cabir!!

Scene freezes on manik and nandini's angry face!!

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So what will happen next...?? will manik be able to find a new
house... will nandini and manik be able to hide truth from cabir?? or
cabir heart will be broken ??? lets see what gonna happen next!!!

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Edited by prathyushaeluri - 9 years ago