|MaNanBir Joint FF| - DREAMERS (Chap 10 by Prats Pg 34) , 24 August

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: nirvisha
Haye.. .prats.. .you made me emotional at the end of the chappy
But seriously the update was very nice. ..
Nd you penned it beautifully. ..
Nd yah.. .this update also gave a turn to this story as other updates.. .

Love
NISHU

thanks a lot nirvi

yeah i said before only

so dont blame me now

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: bikita
What was this u separated manan.
But whatever it is I loved it.
It was just amazing.

Hope the alm8ghty makes them meet again.

Feeling bad for cabir.

But however the update was awsome

thanks dear

and dont think that

u will have a twist in next one

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Oh god.. the story changed like completly...

I think this is the best part about the concept...

Everytime u read the next part it has some major jhatka so major twists...

There will never be like filler chapters in this story

The update was really really good... kiss bhi ho gya.. n manik chala bhi gya... so excited to know aage kya hoga...

Thanxx for the wonderful update

Keel smiling

Stay blessed

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thamannamanan1

@thamannamanan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

oh gal u gave a romantic angle to this story

awesome

I read Rahul s dhamki

I think he s going to make a love triangle thr 😛

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nirvisha

@nirvisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: prathyushaeluri

thanks a lot nirvi
yeah i said before only
so dont blame me now

Ohhh never dear.. .
Infact that's the thing i love about this joint ff.. .
Readers can have a totally different concept and storyline by each passing chapter. ..
You know that's the beauty of this story.. .
and I'm totally liking this new concept for the story. ..

Love
NISHU 😊

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@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Hahaha. That was one nice. Interesting surely ... Manan's First kiss 😳 Aww so Passionate na ... Totally Loved it.. Amazing ... Cabir poor baby. Feeling bad for him ... Manik told nandu ab kuch. haww. he really likes her. n nandu she is too crying . aww. both feels something something. Ab manikk chala gya .. m so eager to know how the story will proceed.. Waiting for next update eagerly. Thanks for pm.. !! Keep Smiling !!

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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Hahaha..
Finally Manik said the truth...
Manan kiss aww...
The Story is turning too much...
Let's see how bira reacts...
Luved it..
Waiting for next...
Update soon...

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: nirvisha

Ohhh never dear.. .
Infact that's the thing i love about this joint ff.. .
Readers can have a totally different concept and storyline by each passing chapter. ..
You know that's the beauty of this story.. .
and I'm totally liking this new concept for the story. ..

Love
NISHU 😊

Even mee too nirvi

We should thank rahul for this

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yashikalily

@yashikalily

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

yeh kya ho gaya re baba...
yeh kya kr dala...writer...
matlab ...itna...sab kuch ek hi...
part me...
but seriously...it was an intresting...one...
hahaha...dat manik curses god...lol...
omg they kissed...well it was totally unexpected for me...
n they separation...nahiii...
matlab...relation start hone se pehle hi khatam...
ho gaya...
this update goes like...
funny mode... ...to ...shocking mode...to ...to senti mode...to sweet sa confession...to heart breaking mode...
seriously it was a bumpy ride...indeed...
great job.../
superb update...