|MaNanBir Joint FF| - DREAMERS (Chap 10 by Prats Pg 34) , 24 August

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: nirvisha
Thank you so much Rahul.. .
For wishing me and giving this update on my Bday.. . 😊

Nd now I'm going to read it so review badme.. . 😉

NISHU

You R WELCOME😛😛😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: nirvisha
Rahul.. . 😕

Ye kya tha yaar.. .
Tune to pura ka pura way hi badal diya story ka.. .
Ab mei kya likhungi yar.. .
Muje dimag ghisna parega.. .for next update. ..

But still it's actually nice update. ..nd i think it was needed to contain the main concept of story. ..
So over all its good job.. . 😃

NISHU

Sachi me
mujhe to laga hi nhi
lol
tere se pahle apn story ko ek aur writer likna chahta hai to tumhari turn uske baad hai

btw Thank You😃😃

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_MonsteR_Stuff_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja
The update was mind blowing
Nandu sacrificing her love for cabir n now thinks that may be Manik as well has feeling for cabir...
Could the story get any more Intresting
All the diffrent writer concept leaves us with major twists n turns in every update,., thus a treat for ya readers

Loved the update
Eagerly waiting to know how the story turns now

Thank got the update
And the PM

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

Thank You ji
Mujhe to Saram hi aane lagi etni badayiya sun k
Dil Baag Baag kr diya ji

yeah thats y it is intresting
i request
ask your other friends to give this is a Chance😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1
dude u r back n back with a bang

😛

wht a superb update

manik confused seeing kabeer in the hospital

nandini trying to stay far from manik

kabeer s confession

awsome

Thank You Ji😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: rockstarlover
awesome update
it is getting more interesting
waiting for next
thanks for pm

Thank You Ji😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: prathyushaeluri
Rahul so ur bomb landed
And yaar sach mey I was shocked
Itna jaldi confession now
What nirvi will write
Nirvi I am telling u u have to use ur brain so much and then rahul what the hell u changed the complete story
I hate u for this
But update acha tha
Loved it
It was awesome
Thumara bomb na blast hua
Now Waiting for nirvi chapter
Mera chapter toh bahot time hey mey maza lunga tab tak
Superb job rahul
All d best nirvi
And once again happy birthday
Enjoy it

Prats Prats Prtas
Tum to Kuch jyda hi Khush lag Rahi h
Chapter jyada hi pasand aa gaya kya
mujhe pata hai
mai hu hi etna acha writer
aur ye vese bhi 2 dimago ka kaam hai
tera brain bhi mere pass hi hai na tabhi to tujhe idea nhi aate dhang k

lol
btw thank you
bura mat maan
aaj friend ship day
😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: gtilwani45
First of all
Happy Birthday Nirvi.
may god bless u...
JUSt stay happy.
stay Blessed..

Oh god..

ye kyaa tha..
Hr koii different different
view me story hi badal deta h.

wow I liked this..
Nandu is so confused wid her own..
She sacrificing her love for cabir.

cabira in hospital ...
Manik is confused.

ab kyaa hoga..
Let's see how the story will get more
interesting.

Waiting for next update eagerly.
thanks for pm..
!! Keep Smiling !!

Thank You Geet
We will continue soon
thank you for long comments
it real feel amazing after reading your response
please continue this
thank you once again😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: shaan...
Amazing update...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

Thank You Ji👏

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Swarna

@manancraze

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

CHAPTER 7

(By MaNan craze)

Dhruv and alya were quite silent...first they knew about cabir and then manik's agreement make them so shocked...they all r thinking why manik agree to live with them...is he...but before they can think cabir spoke up

Cabir: Accha guys bohat ho gaya yeh confession and all...now manik needs some rest...I think we should call off the party...

All: Ok...

And they call off the party and wished cabir for his luck.

Cabir: Nandini...raat bohat ho gaya hain...go to sleep sweety...

Nandini: Ha...main manik ko fresh hone main help karti hu...then I will go to sleep

Saying this she about to hold manik's wheelchair but cabir remove her hand tell her

Cabir: No need...main hu na manik k liye...

He said looking lovingly towards manik...seeing her brother's gaze nandini felt a ping in her heart...she admits in her mind that she is jealous of her brother...she wanna take care of manik...instead of cabir...but A SISTER inside her was stopping her continuosly...

Nandini: Oh..accha..koi baat nahi...aap jao...mujhse jayada khayal to aap rakh paouge manik ka...

Saying this she went off and cabir take manik in room to help him in freshend up.

AFTER SOMETIMES...

Manik's pov:

I don't know why u r doing this with us nandini...but aj jo maine dekha woh simple attraction to nahi ho sakta...u r jealous...!!!

Bohat ho gaya tumhari manmani nandini...main ek bar thik ho jayo...then I will do something...coz agar maine kuch step nahi liya to shayad u and me can never be US

(pov end)

TWO AND HALF MONTH LATER...

Manik is recovering very fast...all thanks to cabir's over caring nature...he litterly treat manik like a king...he make sure to fulfill manik's every need...so manik is almost becoming stable...he can walk but on sketcher...during this time of span nandini was getting very restless and insecure...ek taraff his brother aur dusree taraff her love...so once she decided to left the country...but when ManBir came to know about it manik trickily stopped nandini.

Both sibling's feeling for manik was growing up...even manik is aware of it...he is happy but as well as guilty for using cabir to get nandini...coz cabir isn't lefting any stone unturned to make manik feel out of the world.

Trio were having dinner with some chit chat...after dinner nandini went to terrece and cabir went to sleep...manik wants to talk to nandini so he made a bahana of tv to cabir and goes behind her

IN TERREACE

Nandini was gazing star and thinking about manik and her moments...though it was little but thoose r precious for her...manik silently stood behind her...may be he gussed what she is thinking all this while...

Manik: Agr itna hi bura laag raha hain to kyu jaane de rahe ho mujhe tum ???

Listening his voice nandini was startled and surprised also how came he know about it...

Manik: Aur jayada matt socho...itna to tumhe main jaan hi gaya hu nandini...kyu kar rahi ho aisa...kya galti hain mera jo tum mujhe aisa saaja de rahi ho...

He asked with a chocked voice...

Nandini: Kuch v nahi kia tumne manik...it's just destiny...main cabir ko sad nahi kar sakti...he is really close to me manik..

Manik: Aur main...kya meri koi chahat nahi hain...and plz maat bolna yeh mere attraction hain coz I know what it is...

Nandini didn't snap back or protest may be they be she is too tired to fight back...

Manik: Nandini...it is LOVE...LOVE for U...LOVE for us...plz give me a chance trust me I will make every things ok...and..

Before he can continue more nandini just crushed in his arm and began too sob...

Nandini: Mani...plz don't make it difficult for me...main already bohat pain main hu...

Manik: Phir se say it na...

Nandini: What..

Manik: Mani...phirse bolo na...this word is healing me...

Nandini: Woh main galt..

Manik: Ssh...nandini...humare beech main jo kuch v hua hain aur hoga woh kabhi galat nahi ho sakta...never...tumhe nahi pata tumne yeh jesture karke mujhe kitna happy kia...it is pure and blissful...all this r came from our love only nandini...don't tell it mistake...!!!

He said cupping her face...Nandini was all this while looking towards manik...she can say how pure his confession is...how true his feelings are...her heart become so overwhelmed to see manik's love...unknowingly she said to manik..

Nandini: Then heal me too manik...!!!

Manik was shocked and happy...finally he can see somee ray of hope gor THEM...he is ready to do anything for his lady love...he just placed his lips softly on hers...sensing his touch nandini got alarmed and began to think about cabir...but may be this night is for these love birds.

So removing all this thought nandini make a movement and begin to kiss manik...both r sucking each others lips...chewing...bitting...but there is no lust...they both r sharing there pain and longing by this KISS...

Under the moonlit night these two r having THEIR MOMENT...forgetting about the world...just these two lovers...who r right now HAPPY and CONTENT in each others arm...They don't bother kal kya hoga...they will regret this moment or not...they just want to hide in each other...!!!

But...there is another one who is a silent inspector of their moments...and he is no other than "A heart break and betrayed" CABIR...

He came to find out manik...but what he heard and what he is seeing made him numb...his love and his sister r kissing and confessed about their feeling...and he had no idea about it!!!

Somehow he gather himself and left them in their moment...he is feeling like a used d*******ag...and he need explanation why did they do this to him...why...and he made his mind to confront them...coz now it's matter of his SELF RESPECT...!!!

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I m a new writer in this story...plz batana kaisa laga...!!!

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kishubedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Thanks for the pm
It was amazing
Lol funny was that Nandu still thinks that manik is gay
But now I wanna see how manik handles the situation
Specially after cabirs confession

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