MANAN-MY GUARDIAN ANGEL(Chapter-11 on pg.no.9)(25.2.2017)

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syami

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

that was amazing
wow manik beat all
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#32

Awesome Update
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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

amazing

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Sarahpeyton

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Hey guys...

I present you with another chapter.

CHAPTER -8

The police who were searching for Nandini caught the truck which had the smuggled sandalwood and arrested the people present in the truck.

Manik didn't have a slightest hint of all this.

He took Nandini alongwith him to Cabir and Navya's house.

Navya was as usual scolding Ansh for throwing tantrums and not eating food.

Ansh was running here and there and troubling Navya.

Suddenly he bumped into Nandini while trying to escape from Navya.

Ansh scratched his head while staring at Nandini.

He had never seen Nandini before so he turned towards Manik and said- Ye kaun hai?

By then Navya also reached there and asked the same question.

Navya- Manik ye ladki kaun hai?

Manik asked Nandini to have a seat and explained Navya everything.

Navya- Ohhh... Acha kia jo tum isey yaha le aaye. Jab tak iske parivar ka pata nahi chalta tab tak isey yahin rehne do.

Manik thanked her and was about to go when he saw Nandini and Ansh playing some kid games.

A smile crept on his face seeing the innocent side of Nandini.

He then composed himself and went to the office of his boss to check if the truck had arrived or not.

Once he reached there he came to know that his companions were arrested and the sandalwood also seized by the police.

Manik went to the room of his boss and found him seated on his chair with his eyes closed .

Manik- Boss...

The boss on hearing Manik's voice , opened his eyes and anger was clearly visible in his eyes.

He controlled hid temper and asked in the most polite manner-

Kaha the tum Manik. Itni badi galti kaise hogayi tumse...

Mujhe tumse ye ummeed nahi thi. Aisa kya kaam aagaya tha jo tum truck ke sath nahin the.

Pata hai hamara lakhon ka nuksaan hogaya tumhari is laparwahi ki wajah se.

Manik didn't say anything.

His boss got up from the chair and came towards Manik.

He kept his hand on Manik's shoulder and asked- Kaha reh gaye the tum??? Batao mujhe... Pata hai na tumhe hamare dhande me maafi ki koi jagah nahi hoti.

Manik- Janta hoon Boss. Aap jo saza dena chahte hai de sakte hai.

Boss- Saza to tumhe milni hi chahiye par kya karu mann nahi maanta . Mai tumhe apne Bete se badhkar samajhta hoon. Aur ye tumhari pehli galti hai isiliye maaf kar raha hoon. Ab tum jasakte ho.

Manik- Yes Boss...

Saying this Manik was about to go when his boss stopped him and said- Aur dhyan rahe ye tumhari aakhri galti honi chahiye. Dobara aisa nahi hona chahiye. Samajhgaye...

Aur haan Cabir ab theek hogaya hai. Usey jate samay lete jana.

Manik nodded and went to Cabir's room.

Cabir was already wearing his shirt to leave when he saw Manik.

Cabir- Oye ye kya kia tune. Boss ka itna bada nuksaan karwa diya. Tu gaya kaha tha waise. Aisa kya urgent kaam aagaya tha?

Manik remembered Nandini and a smile crept on his face.

This didn't go unnoticed by Cabir.

Cabir- Ek min... Kya mai koi sapna dekh raha hoon ya tu abhi muskura raha tha?

Cabir said this rubbing his eyes.

Manik- Kya bakwaas kar raha hai. Mai kyu muskurane laga bhala.

Cabir- Kuch to baat hai. Pata to mai laga kar rahunga.

Manik- Hogaya tera... Ab chale ghar. Navya wait kar rahi hogi .

Cabir- Haan chal...

Both Manik and Cabir left for Cabir's house.

Manik dropped Cabir to his house and went to his house to avoid the questions of Cabir on seeing Nandini.

Cabir went inside and shouted in excitement- Navya... Ansh... kaha ho tum log...

Both Navya and Ansh got really happy on seeing Cabir and ran to him and hugged him tightly.

Cabir lifted Ansh in his arms and hugged Navya.

Navya- Is baar bahut din lagadiye aapne aane me.

Ansh- Haan Papa aap itne din ke liye mat jaya karo.

Navya- Pata hai kitna tang kia aapke is ladne ne mujhe.

Cabir- Ansh ye Navya kya keh rahi hai. Tumne ise tang kia.

Ansh- Nahi Papa...Maine Maa ko bilkul bhi tang nahi kia.

Ansh said it making an innocent face.

Then he whispered in Cabir's ears - Ulta is rakshas ne mujhe bahut tang kia.

Cabir chuckled on hearing this.

Navya- Maine suna Ansh...

Ansh bit his tongue and ran from there after Cabir put him down.

Cabir shouted from behind-Ansh... Kaha jaarahe ho?

Ansh -Chachu ke ghar...

Cabir-Theek hai... Par sambhal ke jao. Aur haan Manik ko kehna ki mai khane pe intezar karunga...

Ansh- Theek hai keh doonga.

Saying this he ran away.

Navya- Cabir aap shayad bhoolgaye ho ke Manik apne ghar par hi rehna pasand karta hai. Aapne usey bula to liya par hume nahi lagta ki wo aayega.

Cabir was about to say something when his eyes fell on Nandini.

Phewww...

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

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mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Amazing update

Liking the story a lot

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SONIAGHOSH

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Awesome Update love it please update regularly

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Sarahpeyton

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Hey guys...

I am here with another update of this story.

CHAPTER -9

Nandini was standing at the door of a room.

She had come out of the room as she was getting bored of sitting alone in the room.

Cabir looked at Nandini and then asked Navya -

Navya tumne bataya nahi ke hamare ghar mehmaan aaye hue hai. Waise kaun hai ye ?

Navya - Ye to Hume bhi nahi pata ye kaun hai. Manik lekar aaya hai ise yahan.

Cabir- Haainn... Manik lekar aaya hai ise. Matlab ye Manik ko kaha se milgayi?

Cabir went towards Nandini and said- Waise tumhara naam kya hai?

Nandini very innocently said- Nandini...

Cabir - Nandini... Tum Manik ko kaise Janti ho? Aur kabse Janti ho?

Nandini narrated the whole incident of her kidnapping and how Manik saved her from the goons.

Cabir- Ohhh. To ye baat hai. Theek hai.

Navya - Nandini tumhe bhook lagi hogi na.

Nandini - Haan bahut bhook lagi hai. Mujhe Parathe khana hai...

Then Nandini bit her tongue as she realised that she was in the house of some strangers and said- Sorry...

Navya and Cabir smiled seeing Nandini's antics.

Navya - Isme Sorry bolne wali kya baat hai? Tumhe Jo bhi khana hai bejhijak batao. Ise apna hi ghar samjho.

Cabir- Haan Haan apna hi ghar samjho ise. Waise bhi tum Manik ki khaas mehmaan Jo ho.

Saying this he looked at Navya and winked.

Navya smiled and pursed her lips to control her chuckle as she understood that Cabir was upto something.

Cabir went to his room to freshen up.

In the meantime, at Manik's place -

Ansh ran straight to Manik's house and shouted - CHACHU... Kaha ho aap?

Manik was sitting on a chair lost in some thoughts .

Manik - Kya hua Ansh? Tu aise bhaag kar kyu aaya? Kahi fir se koi shararat to nahi ki tune?

Ansh- Nahi CHACHU Maine Kuch nahi Kia. Mai to apko bulane aaya tha. Aapko Papa bula rahe hai khana khane ke liye.

Manik - Cabir ko bolde ki mujhe bhook nahi hai.

Ansh- Par CHACHU, mujhe warning mili hai ki apko sath lekar hi wapas aau.

Manik - Jaa na Ansh. Mera Mann nahi hai . Tu bolde Cabir ko.

Ansh- Par CHACHU...

Manik in a stern voice - Maine kya kaha abhi?

Ansh- Ab aap bhi daatlo mujhe.

With this Ansh faked a disappointed face.

Manik - Ansh mai daant nahi raha hoon.

Manik came and kneeled infront of Ansh.

Ansh turned his face to another side.

Manik held his ears and said- Acha baba Sorry . Fir se Nahi hoga aisa.

Ansh- Promise??

Manik - Haan Promise...

Ansh hugged Manik tightly.

Manik - But Iska Matlab ye nahi ki mai tere sath Chal raha hoon.

Ansh- Ok. Mai apka khana yahi le aata hoon.

Ansh was about to go when Manik stopped him and said- Ansh baat sun...

Ansh- Haan CHACHU...

Manik - Woh... Usne Kuch khaya?

Ansh- Kisne???

Manik - Wahi ladki Jo tere ghar pe hai.

Ansh- Oh Nandini... Usne bhi Kuch nahi khaya.

Manik -Kuch kaha kya usne tujhse?

Ansh- Haan wo apne friends ko miss kar rahi hai. Bahut hi sad thi. Fir Maine uska mood Acha Kia .

Manik- Acha tu ja mai thodi der me aata hoon.

Ansh- Ok.

And he left.

Manik took out his mobile and dialled a number.

He instructed someone to find out about Nandini's friends and disconnected the call.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

I know it's a short update. Please bear with it for now.

Ignore the typos if any.

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ROOP0605

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Amazing

Cute

Eagerly waiting for next part

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SONIAGHOSH

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Awesome Update
love it
continue soon

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Sarahpeyton

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Hi guys...

I am back with another update...

CHAPTER -10

After disconnecting the call, Manik went to Cabir and Navya's house.

As soon as Manik entered the house, Cabir and Navya exchanged looks and this didn't go unnoticed by Manik.

He instantly knew that Cabir was upto something. But Manik chucked it as right now he wanted to see if Nandini was Ok.

Manik looked here and there but couldn't find Nandini. So he went and sat beside Ansh.

Manik slowly whispered in Ansh's ears-Ansh ... Wo kaha hai...

Ansh too whispered in Manik's ears - CHACHU wo fresh hokar aati hi hogi.

Manik - Ok.

Cabir - Ansh aur Manik tum dono ye kya khusr pusr kar rahe ho???

Ansh- Kuch nahi wo CHACHU mujhse puch rahe the ki...

Manik didn't let him complete and said- Ansh tujhe bhook nahi lagi hai kya???

Ansh- Haan lagi hai...

Manik- Navya jaldi khana lekar aao. Bhook to mujhe bhi bahut lagi hai...

Navya - Abhi layi...

Then Navya while going to the kitchen winked at Cabir and said- Ansh tu jab tak Nandini ko bula la.

Ansh nodded and went to Nandini's room.

Navya served the food to Cabir and Manik.

Cabir was talking continuously to Manik about random topics but Manik's total attention was on Nandini who came out with Ansh .

Cabir shaked Manik a bit and said- Oye... Kaha khogaya tu. Mai tujhse baat kar raha hoon...

Manik - Nahi .. Kahin bhi to nahi... mai to bas ...

Cabir- Haan pata hai mujhe. Tera dhyan kaha hai sab samajhme aaraha hai...

Manik - Tu kya baat kar raha hai???

Kaha hoga mera dhyan???

Mai to teri hi baatein sun raha hoon.

In the meantime, Nandini came and sat down to eat.

Navya came back from the kitchen and served all of them with Aloo ke Parathe.

Navya -Lo Nandini tumhe Parathe khana tha na. Garma garam Aloo ke Parathe khalo.

Cabir- Nandini tumhe bhi Aloo ke Parathe pasand hai??? Is room me koi aur bhi hai jise ye pasand hai.

Nandini - Haan. Bahut pasand hai. Aap kiski baat kar rahe ho???

Cabir - Manik ki baat kar raha hoon main. Tum dono to bilkul ek Jaise ho. Achi jamegi Jodi tumhari...

After a pause, he said- khane ke maamle me...

Nandini smiled looking at Manik while Manik glared at Cabir.

Manik finished his food quickly and said- Mai chalta hoon. Kuch kaam hai mujhe.

Mai Subah me aake milta hoon...

Saying this Manik got up to leave.

Nandini- Suno...

Manik stopped but didn't turn.

Nandini got up and rushed to Manik and held his hand.

Nandini - Mujhe yahan nahi rehna.

Manik looked at Nandini and said- Matlab???

Nandini - Mujhe ghar Jana hai...

Manik - Tumhara waha jaana theek nahi hai abhi.

Ek baar mai sure hojau ke tumpar se khatra tal gaya hai fir mai khud hi tumhe tumhare dosto ke paas lejaunga.

Tab tak tum meri responsibility ho.

Saying this he was again about to go when Nandini said -

Agar mai tumhari responsibility hoon to fir mai tumhare sath hi rahungi tumhare ghar pe.

Manik - Nahi ... Tum mere sath nahi rehsakti. Tum yahan Par safe ho.

Nandini - No... Maine Kaha na tumhe. Mai tumhare sath hi rahungi.

Manik - Bas... Maine ek baar keh diya to keh diya.

Nandini - Toh maine bhi ek baar keh diya and that's final.

Navya and Cabir were looking at Manik and Nandini with wide-open eyes as they were shocked at the way Nandini was being stubborn with Manik and even he was arguing with Nandini as a kid and was not getting angry on her for being stubborn (That was completely new to them.)

Navya intervened and said- Nandini Manik sahi keh raha hai tum Uske ghar pe Kaise rehsakti ho?

Nandini - Kyu nahi???

Navya didn't know how to explain it to Nandini.

She looked at Cabir for help.

Cabir went to Manik and said- Tu ja hum samjha lenge usey.

Manik on hearing this went away.

Cabir then said to Nandini - Nandini... Tumhe yahan pe Rehne me koi problem hai kya??? Agar aisa hai to batao mujhe ya fir tum Navya ko bhi bata sakti ho.

Nandini - Nahi problem to nahi hai mujhe yahan pe. Par Agar mai Manik se saath rahungi to usme kya problem hai?

Navya - Problem ye hai ki Manik ka ghar chota hai. Tum waha adjust nahi karpaogi.

Nandini smiled and said - Ok.

Then she went back to her room.

Cabir-Arey Waah kamal hai. Itni jaldi maangayi ye. Abhi thodi der Pehle to Manik se behas kar rahi thi.

Navya - Offo...Ab maangayi na. Tum zyada socho mat.

Cabir-Haan Chalo...

Navya - Kahan???

Cabir-Apne room me aur kaha?? Kuch zaruri baatein karni hai tumse...

Navya - Cabir... Kuch to sharam karo. Ansh ko Pehle so to Jane do ...

Cabir - Arey yaar tum bhi na Navya... Theek hai jaisa tum kaho.

Few hours later...