MANAN-MY GUARDIAN ANGEL(Chapter-11 on pg.no.9)(25.2.2017) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Story keeps getting more and more Intresting
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CHAPTER -5

Nandini,Mukti and Aliya were all set to go on their trip.

Mukti's Mom gave them a long list of Dos and Dont's which they had to follow in the forest.

Mukti's Mom wanted to send someone with the girls for their protection but Mukti refused.

Mukti - Comeon Mom we are not kids . We can take care of ourselves. We don't need anyone.

Mukti's Mom had to give in to her demands.

Mukti Mom - Ok as you wish. But take care.

Nandini,Aliya and Mukti bid bye to Mukti's Mom and left for their destination The Marayur Forest(Kerala).


The three of them boarded the flight to Kochi.

Within 2 Hours they reached Cochi.

At Kochi airport they were received by the tourist guide who was appointed by Mukti's Mom as she was worried that the girls might need the local guide to enter the forest.

The local guide took them to his car and they started their road trip from Kochi to Marayoor. It was a five hour journey.

The three girls were very tired of the journey and went directly to their rooms at the guest house booked by them near the forest.

Mukti and Aliya slept but Nandini wasn't able to sleep.

So she went to the balcony of her room and was admiring the nature.

It was afternoon time and was very sunny.

Nandini thought of exploring the place till Mukti and Aliya woke up.

So she went out and was just walking towards the forest when a bike sped past her.

Nandini moved sideways to save herself when her leg hit a rock and she lost balance.

Nandini was about to fall when someone held her hand and pulled her towards him.

The person made Nandini stand straight and left her and started to leave from there.

The guy stopped midway and said-

Yahan Par akele ghumna safe nahi hai ladkio ke liye.

Nandini - Hellooo... Suno Mr... Arey ruko to. Thanks for helping me...

But the person left without saying another word.

Nandini - So strange. Bina jawab diye hi chala gaya. Pata nahi kaun tha.

Saying this Nandini walked away from there to the guest house.

Nandini entered the guest house and found that Mukti and Aliya were awake.

Mukti - Nandu kaha chali gayi thi tum akele. Hume jagaya kyu nahi.

Nandini - Tum dono thak gaye the. Aur mai bore horahi thi . Isiliye bahar ghoomne chali gayi.

Aliya - What yaar Nandu mujhe to jaga deti. Is kumbhkaran ko sone deti.

Mukti - Acha mai Tumhe kumbhkaran dikhti hoon . Ruko tum abhi batati hoon tumhe.

Saying this she ran behind Aliya.

Aliya went and hid behind Nandini.

Nandini- Aliya I think you are right. Ye sach me kumbhkaran hi hai.

Mukti - Nandini tum bhi? This is not fair.

Tum dono ne team banali mere against.

Nandini - Ab Jo sach hai wo sach hai. Right Aliya!!!

Aliya - Right...

And Nandini and Aliya started laughing.

Then they started their tom and jerry fight and the room was filled with laughter of the three girls.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Stay tuned to read what will happen next...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story read it in a go continue soon waiting eagerly take care 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story plzzz update regularly
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CHAPTER -6

Nandini,Mukti and Aliya started their tom and jerry fight and the room was filled with laughter of the three girls.

After spending some quality time with each other, the girls freshened up and
went to have lunch.

After lunch the girls set out to explore the forest.

Though Mukti's Mom had warned them to take the local guide along with them but they left the guest house without informing the guide as they didn't want anyone to intrude their privacy.

Mukti,Aliya and Nandini took some important stuff with them (like things to set a tent and basic food items)

And then went deep in the jungle and enjoyed the beautiful sceneries Of the forest and enjoyed a lot in the nearby lake till it was night.

The three of them set up a huge tent for themselves by the shore of the lake and cooked dinner and ate it.

Then the girls started playing various games to keep themselves entertained.

They were hell tired and were about to go to sleep in the tent when a group of men attacked them.

The men started misbehaving with them.

Man1- Dekho Bhai log yahan pe kya Mila Hume. Itni khoobsurat ladkiya hai. Uthake le chalo in teeno ko.

Man2- Haan uthalo inko.

All the men tried to come close to the girls.

Mukti - Agar kisine ek kaam bhi aage badaya to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga. Hume aisi waisi ladkiya mat samjho. Hume hath lagane ki galti ki to haath tod doongi.

Saying this Mukti hid Aliya and Nandini behind her as they were very scared.

Man1- Acha... Kya karlogi. Zara mai bhi to dekhu.

Saying this the man held Mukti's hand.

Mukti slapped the man hard with her free hand.

The man fell on the floor with the slap.

Man2- Aye ladki zyada hoshiyari mat dikhana samajh gayi. Tujhe kya Lagta hai ye dekhkar hum dar jayenge. Tu Janti nahi hum logon ko.

Man3- Aur Agar zyada chalaki dikhayi to humse bura koi nahi hoga.

Saying this he fisted Mukti's hair and threw her on the ground.

The other two men held Nandini and Aliya.

Mukti - Hath mat lagao undono ko...

The men laughed at her and said- Hume Marne se Pehle sonchna chahiye tha. Tum logo ko koi nahi bachayega Ab .

Nandini and Aliya struggled to free themselves but the grip of the men was much stronger.

The men took the three girls away with them and tied their hands and leg with ropes.

And the men got busy in talking.

Mukti saw that in a hurry the men had tied Nandini's hands loosely.

Mukti took this opportunity and said-
Nandini your rope is loosely tied.
Ise kholo aur Jake help lekar aao. Tab tak hum unpar nazar rakhenge.

Nandini - But Mukku hum sab sath me bhag sakte hai na. Mai tum dono ke ropes bhi khol deti hoon.

Mukti - Haan. But Agar sath me bhagenge to ye log Hume pakad lenge. Itna time nahi Hai hamare paas. Tum jao jaldi. Behes mat karo.

Nandini opened her ropes and escaped from behind.

In the meantime,the local guide along with the police officials entered the jungle to search the girls.

The kidnappers saw that Nandini was missing.

So few of them went to catch her.

But to Nandini's badluck, she got lost in the jungle and was caught by the kidnappers.

And to Mukti and Aliya's good luck, the guide along with the police officials rescued them.

In the meantime, on the other end of the forest, Manik with his companions were successful in getting the sandalwood that was being smuggled by outsiders.

He got the wood loaded in a truck and was about to sit in the truck when he saw a girl being dragged by few men.

Manik to his companion - Tum log truck leke niklo mai abhi aata hoon.

One of the companion - But Manik tumhe yaad hai na Boss ne kya kaha tha???

Manik - Haan pata hai. Tum log chalo. Mai peeche aata hoon.

Saying this he went to save the girl.

Nandini managed to escape again and ran in the direction of Manik.

As soon as she saw Manik, Nandini ran to him and hid behind him.

The kidnappers also came to them and said - Ladki ko hamare hawale kardo. Theek hoga ki tum bina Kisi tamashe ke yahan se chale jao.

Aaj raat ye hamari hai. Uske baad Agar tum chaho to use rakh sakte ho.

Manik's anger knew no bounds on hearing this.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update... Loved it.. Manik probably gonna save Nandu...
Thanxx for the update

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
awesome one
so heroine and hero met
and he'll save her
prolouge part is coming up
woahh ho excited
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Awesome update love it continue soon please now update regularly I love your story
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CHAPTER -7

Manik's anger knew no bounds on hearing the bad words of the people for a girl.

He made a fist and punched the guy very hardly.

The guy fell down and blood started oozing out from his mouth.

In the meantime few more men came and joined the kidnappers.

Manik was surrounded by a group of people who had swords, rods and other dangerous weapons in their hands.

Nandini was hiding behind him holding his shirt tightly and her eyes were full of fear. She had bruises all over her face and hands as she was dragged.

One of the person holding the sword from the group came forward towards Nandini.

Before he could touch her, Manik snatched the sword and with one stroke he beheaded the person's head.

Anger was clearly visible in his eyes. Anybody could make it out that he was even willing to set the whole world on fire to save the girl.

Manik to the kidnappers - Ek kaam bhi aage badaya to tumhara bhi yahi haal hoga jo iska hua hai.

One of the kidnappers - Dekho hamari tumse koi dushmani nahi hai. Ladki ko hamare hawale kardo. Hum yaha se chup chap chale jayenge. Waise tum kyu usey bachana chahte ho. Kya rishta hai tumhara Uske saath?

Manik - Insaniyat ka rishta hai .

Nandini felt really happy on hearing this. She was feeling safe with Manik.

One of the kidnappers - Lagta hai tum aise nahi manoge. Chalo bhaiyo maaro ise. Pehle hum Iska kissa khatam karte hai. Fir ladki ke baare me sochenge.

With this all the goons attacked Manik together.

Manik signalled Nandini to move back.

Nandini moved back and stood near a tree.

Manik started beating the goons one by one and within few minutes, all the goons were lying on the ground with bruises.

Manik turned towards Nandini whose eyes were widened seeing Manik's strength to beat the goons all alone.

Nandini - Wowww... Tum to bilkul hero ki tarah fight karte ho. I am impressed.

Then she bit her tongue and said- Sorry sorry mai to tumhe thanks bolna hi bhoolgayi. Thank you for saving me from the goons.

Manik - Chalo yahan se isse Pehle ki koi aur aajaye tumhe pakadne.

Saying this Manik started walking.

Nandini followed him.

In the meantime, the police who were searching for Nandini caught the truck which had the smuggled sandalwood and arrested the people present in the truck.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it .

The prologue part is done.

Ignore the typos if any.

I know it's small but didn't have time to write a big one .

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey... lovly update... its okay if u give small updates
The story is getting better n better
Looking frwd to read more.


Thank u for continuing
:)

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