Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 Thread 1 - till chapter 63 - Page 19

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

hey yaar

how dare you think like that

there is no chance

I mean it no chance at all that I will dislike ur updates

iam total fida on your story n u r telling like this

wht man ?????????????

😊

sorry I was late bcaz I saw the update late only

more over iam following u in wattpad also

so just chill 😉

coming back to this update

wow manik kissed nandini isse kehthe hai chance maarna 😆

and he was waiting for her reaction

she just avoided him

she don't want to get caught

then she shouted at him

that was epic

he finished poha fully

😃

monster wanted kebabs then how come he finished poha...

then she took him to road side food stall

but monster wanted some 5 star restaurant

but who is talking here

when nandini told we ll have dinner here that's it monster don't have any choice

he joins her for dinner

then when she told she s teaching music he got another shock

most interesting part was again NANDINI MURTHI gave MONSTER MANIK HOPe 😊

hooo

iam lovin it

awesome

superb

mindblowing

I have to check dictionary for more adjectives

sweet heart

thanq so much for the update

tc

waiting for next part

😛

u had me in splits... I m glad.. Very happy that u liked it.. ' Thats wat i write for.. To give u a glimpse of what we all deserved..but were deprived of ( season 3)love love love u too

My my my god...What an update. It was wowww..just woww..!! I think this wud b one of my fav update till date..! Everything, the scenes..the dialogs..building the intenstity..comedy everything was present & tht too at its best..!

Loved how manik felt about nandinis tears..u wrote his dilemma very nicely.!! And this line which u wrote.." He also hated crying coz it reminded him of his own tears.." was alluring..beautifulll..!!! I think u r deep thinker may b...!! Itni deep thoughts kahan se aate hai..??!!

Sabse best part tho it was HOPE..!! Hum kyy fandom Hope pe jeete hai..bhale wo pani wala hope kyun na ho..haha..just kidding..! Nandu asks him to keep hope..aww..it was tpuchong scene..!!



And the kaka ki tapri scene was hilarious..!! Dialogs were amazing here..! And tht dialog which manik said ki kahan se pick karti ho aise dialog... Sachhi mein tht was some dialog..! Awesome..!

And yess i have already told some of my frnds about ur story..!! And dont worry u'll always find me in ur every updates comment..! Loved ur writing..! Update soon.

God bless u

Originally posted by: Boomchelesa

My my my god...What an update. It was wowww..just woww..!! I think this wud b one of my fav update till date..! Everything, the scenes..the dialogs..building the intenstity..comedy everything was present & tht too at its best..!

Loved how manik felt about nandinis tears..u wrote his dilemma very nicely.!! And this line which u wrote.." He also hated crying coz it reminded him of his own tears.." was alluring..beautifulll..!!! I think u r deep thinker may b...!! Itni deep thoughts kahan se aate hai..??!!

Sabse best part tho it was HOPE..!! Hum kyy fandom Hope pe jeete hai..bhale wo pani wala hope kyun na ho..haha..just kidding..! Nandu asks him to keep hope..aww..it was tpuchong scene..!!



And the kaka ki tapri scene was hilarious..!! Dialogs were amazing here..! And tht dialog which manik said ki kahan se pick karti ho aise dialog... Sachhi mein tht was some dialog..! Awesome..!

And yess i have already told some of my frnds about ur story..!! And dont worry u'll always find me in ur every updates comment..! Loved ur writing..! Update soon.

God bless u

loved loved loved your comment.. Each n every point u mentioned. Hope se yaad aya.. Did u see parth's instagram post today? Check it if u hvnt and after so mny days he too is missing it.. I love this fandom.. I love manan.. N i love u. I do read all d comments n try to understand wat i need to change or tweak from d reader feedbacks. Keep them coming so that i can give u lovlier updates.

The update was soo cute...
No words to says...
Well written...

First of all let me say the idea of this story s brilliant thanks for it, the story line, structure n the term you're using is awesome too,

This update here compelled me to comment and to be honest it worth it n you deserve a feedback in each of the updates, so here for this update n all the other I couldn't comment on,

Sorry for not been commenting, but from now on ll give you my feedback, n ideas if I have any , for now I most say your thinking is good the story s going well, everything is nice pinned so far

One request please, make it a long story,
And about readers don't worry as time goes on everyone will be aware of it n you will see rain drops of love for the story

Hahahahaha Neel is a one badass guy I swea down his witty sens of thought make me burst into laughter, nice update it was really good but I feel something was missing, would suggest you to try n go more into details in the scenes specialy when manan is together

Let the readers feel the, pain,love,anger, lost,generally let it be like you're watching, the dance scene was beautiful
But feels end as soon as they start and I think there should have been some kina blurry flashback memories from Manik,

Keep writing , am loving this story

Yes this part took me back to kyy, it's really very good keep writing I lo the story

Oh God
This reminds me of the situations we all Ve in daily light reality,

Epic kyy3
1-26 done n still yearning for more n more n more n more of the story, your thinking s great, your writing skills n scene discriptions r comforting n overwhelming, thanks for this dear for comming up with this idea n thanks to my very own sweetheart #boomchelsea for directing me here,it's really an amazing story read

I like how Nandini forget all her anger n hate avenue at the narrow escape scene, the mighty hug n forehead kiss make that part more colorful, it's going slow n surly beautiful, #Manan having enough time together it's also cool,

Navya trying to uplift Mukti too s also awesome

Dear please explore Manik a bit as you continue the story ,like AIsha said earlier let him be in search of his past n take Nandini's advice on how to find himself , I pictured a very interesting n fun moments should you decide to go that way,

One suggestions please, for the Hindi part if possible please translate it in English for the benefits of does who can't understand the language eg (me)
Looking forward to reading further, update soon , big love n hug