Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 Thread 1 - till chapter 63 - Page 21

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

love the update

why such a small comment.. Dont b miser with ur words or love

Excellent update...

Sorry for not commenting on last chapter actually i m out at my cousin visiting simhasth mela in ujjain and now a days i do nothing rather roaming around the temples and crashing down on the bed anyways lets come to the update, last update was actually good and this one was awesome


"that his past is like an impenetrable wall and the more he tries to dent a hole in it, the more it bruises and bleeds his arms."

My favourite line i wanna ask kha se lati ho aise lines sach me skills bases par toh you're awesome you defined his inner turmoil and helplessness very well i m in love with this update it sounds like real manik malhotra like kyy is back i m so glad i came through this fiction and you gave me my manan back thank you so much
Anyways waiting for the next update, update soon

Yup thts right..small update is better than no update..!! And update like always bahot achha tha..! The staring part was really very nice..! Its good to see how slowly slowly they building their frndship all over again..!! & tht dialog of nandini when she came out of the car in btw her sleep.." Wolf will take me somwhere.." Haha too good..!!

And i loved the way how acurately u turned manik's feeling tht he shud not trust her also..& .the venom rising inside him..this scene was brilliantly penned..!! & our dear nandu slept..wake her up on tym to see the sunrise..!! & u write many beautiful lines in ur story..i really like it alot..!! Awesome update. UPDATE SOON..!
God Bless u

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Sorry for not commenting on last chapter actually i m out at my cousin visiting simhasth mela in ujjain and now a days i do nothing rather roaming around the temples and crashing down on the bed anyways lets come to the update, last update was actually good and this one was awesome


"that his past is like an impenetrable wall and the more he tries to dent a hole in it, the more it bruises and bleeds his arms."

My favourite line i wanna ask kha se lati ho aise lines sach me skills bases par toh you're awesome you defined his inner turmoil and helplessness very well i m in love with this update it sounds like real manik malhotra like kyy is back i m so glad i came through this fiction and you gave me my manan back thank you so much
Anyways waiting for the next update, update soon

Originally posted by: Boomchelesa

Yup thts right..small update is better than no update..!! And update like always bahot achha tha..! The staring part was really very nice..! Its good to see how slowly slowly they building their frndship all over again..!! & tht dialog of nandini when she came out of the car in btw her sleep.." Wolf will take me somwhere.." Haha too good..!!

And i loved the way how acurately u turned manik's feeling tht he shud not trust her also..& .the venom rising inside him..this scene was brilliantly penned..!! & our dear nandu slept..wake her up on tym to see the sunrise..!! & u write many beautiful lines in ur story..i really like it alot..!! Awesome update. UPDATE SOON..!
God Bless u

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

hey roh

so u r back with one more amazing update

manik teasing nandini about her weird ideas 😊

making him eat his dinner at a street food stall 😊

she tore her chappals n he got one more chance to tease her 😆

I don't know why I alwys land up in trouble look 😃

the both were emjoying each others company laughing out on silly silly things

manik felt envious seeing her sleeping without any tension

she trusted him a week old frnd

he was planning to tell her next da that she shud not trust anyone so easily

but he don't know that HE was the person who already broke her trust n her heart

i will also stand here if i feel too sleep then i ll just collapse here n then wolves might carry me some where

😃😃😃

manik don't have a chance

she slept holding his hand with her

a beautiful update

thnx dear👏

thanks for the update dear
this chotu update was better than no update

loved the update
manik was fighting with his feelings
he is envy of nandini's carefree life
it's true that when a person loses his memory he becomes hollow
it's the same situation with manik
but finally he is again finding his peace in nandini😃
it's a fresh start for manan
and i'm loving this journey

thanks for pm dear
continue soon

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

beautiful update
loved it

thank u thank u '