MaNan FF: Down The Memory Lane. 9th Chapter updated Page 11 - Page 2

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I LOVED THE LAST PART.."MISSED THE MONSTER..?" NICE!!
MANIK IS THERE..
BUT WHO IS THE DULHA? CABIR?
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Chapter 4 - Surprises.

"What's written in that note, Nandini?" Asked Mukti.

I didn't know what to say. Am I thinking too much? This could be just a co-incidence, right? A boy comes running and accidentally bumps into Mukti, then she sees this note and that guitar. This was just an accident! This wasn't suppose to happen like this, right? Just a co-incidence. Yeah, a co-incidence. But..'Monster?' Oh God, Nandinii! This parcel was for someone else. Stop thinking so Much.

"Nandini!" Mukti shouted, "Are you even listening to me? Kya likha hai usmey?"

"Erm, nothing..Just some random stuff." I said hesitatingly.

"You sure?" Asked Alya raising her eyebrow.

"Yeah, obviously. And Um, We should leave now.. We're late."

"And what about this guitar?" Asked Alya.

"What about it? What do you mean?" I asked immediately.

"I mean, should we like, keep this with us?" She asked.

"WHAT? NO!" I shouted, "I mean, We shouldn't. This is not our guitar!" Alya and Mukti looked at me in a confused state.

"What?" I asked. "Why are you behaving so weirdly? Relax!" Said Mukti.

She was right. I was behaving weirdly. I don't know why, after reading that note, I was feeling awkward. I had this strange feeling that I couldn't express.

"Uh-Huh," I said, "No. I'm normal..I mean, I'm calm.." Mukti widened her eyes and held me by my shoulder, "What's wrong Nandini? Is anything troubling you?" She asked.

"N-No. Nothing.. Yeah, Nothing. I'm okay. Chalen?"

Alya and Mukti nodded and we started walking towards the main hall.

We finally reached there. What a perfect setup it was! So traditional and elegant. I was looking around the whole hall and I saw Navya. I was awestruck! She looked so Pretty.

"Wait..Is that Navya?" Asked Mukti, widening her eyes.

"I guess." I said.

"DAMN! She looks so gorgeous." Said Alya.

"Well, I agree." I said, checking her out.

Navya came running towards us. "Kaisay Lagrahay hainhum?" She asked excitedly.

"Theek he lagrai ho.." Said Mukti. "Bas theek?" She asked, making a sad pout.

I giggled and held her hands, "You look breathtakingly beautiful, Navya." I said, looking into her eye.

She smiled and hugged me.

"Acha Acha, Now can we see the dulha, pleasee?" Mukti pleaded, Like a small kid.

"Itni jaldi kya hai?" Navya asked, and ran away from us.

"What the hell Navya! This is not cool!" Shouted Mukti. Navya turned, and winked.

That was so unlike Navya. I mean, why is she hiding this from us? The person she was going to marry, was unknown to us. Like, seriously? "Duh-Uh! Kia batameezi hai yaar. Why isn't she telling us?" Said Alya.

Suddenly, the lights went off. "What the!! Ab ye kya naya drama hai yaar!!!" Cried Mukti.

There was a guy sitting on a chair. His back was facing all the guests. The spotlights were on him. We were all standing there, looking at him in a confused state. Who is he? What is he doing here? Why are the spotlights on him? These were the only questions running in our mind. We had no idea what was going on.

"Let's do this!" He said, in his mike. Mukti looked at me and I looked at Alya. Confusingly, of-coarse.

He extended his hands and picked up some sticks that were lying on the floor. Those were drumsticks!

"Who is he?" Mukti immediately asked, looking at me.

"I don't know." I replied.

And then, That guy starting playing the Drums. We were all Shocked listening to the drumbeats.

"Oh My God." Cried Alya. "That is..That is..Ca-" Said Mukti but her sentence was broken by the percussionist. "You're Right Mukti. It's me, Cabir." Saying this, he turned his face towards us.

We were all just staring at him. We were shocked. Dhruv immediately ran towards him and hugged Cabir tightly. We finally came back to our senses and went to him. Mukti and Alya hugged him but I just smiled and said, "Glad you're here."

He smiled back. "Mere bagher yeh function hota he kaisay?" He replied

"Tu toh aisay bolraha hai jaisay tu he dulha ho!" Said Mukti Sarcastically.

Cabir widened his eyes listening to this. "Han toh..Mae-

"To kaisa laga?" Navya interrupted.

Dhruv looked at her with questioning eyes. "Kya?" He asked.

"Dulha! Aur Kya!" She replied, excitedly.

"Navya! Par abhi hum us sey miley he kahan?" I asked.

Navya looked towards Cabir and they both started laughing crazily.

"What? Why are you guys laughing like maniacs?" Asked Mukti.

"NO!" I cried. Mukti, Alya and Dhruv looked at me. "You gotta be kidding. Don't tell me you're marrying-

"Marrying who?" Asked Alya.

"Am I guessing it right?" I asked, looking at Navya.

"M-Hmm." She said, nodding her head in a yes.

"Oh My!" I cried.

"What's happening? Koi mujhe batayega?" Shouted Mukti.

"Navya is marrying Cabir!!" I shouted back immediately.

Mukti, Alya and Dhruv were shocked hearing this whereas Navya and Cabir were continuously laughing.

"What?" Said Dhruv looking towards Cabir. Cabir just smiled. Naughtily, though.

"So does that mean you two were in touch with each other all this while? Shit, I mean..You guys are marrying each other!!!" Cried Alya.

"We wanted to surprise you people." Said Cabir.

"Surprise? Are you frickin' kidding me, Cabir? it's more like a shock!" Mukti replied.

"I'm so happy for you buddy!!" Said Dhruv, as he hugged Cabir.

"Yeah, whatever! Congratulations to both of you." Said Alya, angrily.

"Whaaat? Why are you saying like that?" Asked Cabir.

"As if you don't know. Cabir, Why didn't YOU tell us?" Asked Alya.

"Agar mae batata to surprise kaise rehta, you dumbo!" He replied.

Mukti rolled her eyes and said, "No Cabir. This is so unfair! So uncool."

"I'm sorry guys! Sorry, please?" Said Cabir, Joining his hands.

Mukti, Alya and Dhruv giggled and hugged him.

"Chal ab zada senti na ho!" Said Mukti.

I went towards Navya and whispered in her ear, "Smart, han. I'm so happy for you!" She smiled and side hugged me.

"This calls for Celebration! Guys, let's Dance!" Shouted Cabir.

(NOTE: PLEASE PLAY THIS SONG BEFORE READING FURTHER. SONG: DISCO DEEWANE)

Cabir Singing, looking towards Navya.

There's something about tonight, Something really special, Something about the way you move that thing, Something very special. Something about the way you lookin' at me. Something really special..Here we go..

Saari ki saari, Dunya bhula kay, mae to tere naal nachna, Baby you're so sexy! Navya joins in.

Boy you could be my, one and only, mae to tere naal nachna.

Dhruv goes to Alya and sings,

Then I see you lookin at me, aaja baat karley dil ki. Cabir joins him and both sing together, Honey lagenge afsaanay! You know it, so sing it, Now do your hands up and say, Mukti, Alya, Navya and Dhruv dancing together. Disco deewnay, ahan, ahan. Disco deewanay, ahan, ahan.

Cabir goes to Nandini and drags her to the dance floor. Nasheeli hai raat, Ho haathon mein haath. Naachen gayen saath.

All of them dancing together,

Disco deewanay, Ahan. Ahan. Hoo, Disco Deewanay, Ahan. Ahan.

Cabir sings, looking towards Navya.

Khel ja raton ka, khel ye thori der. Naya sings,

Bhool ja baahon me tu aakey ab meri thori der..

Dhruv sings looking towards Alya, Nazron me hi main (Ahaan) Tujhko samjhadoonga.. Navya sings,

Raat baki hai saari hosh uraday, bas thori der.

Mukti Sings, Dance like a deewana tonight. Move like a mastana tonight. Party like a parwana tonight. Jo kehna hai kehdayy! Cabir sings with Dhruv, DDD D I S C O, When everybody knows where we wanna go. Hotay Hotay miltay hain miljatay hain bahanay.. Everyone singing together. You know it, So sing it now raise your hands up in air. All dancing together, Disco Deewanay. Ahaan. Ahaan. Hoo, Disco Deewanay, Ahan, Ahan. Nasheeli hai raat, ho haton mae hath. Naachen gaayen saath,

I felt a little uncomfortable. My dress was bothering me alot. I walked away from everyone and headed towards my room and Boom! I bumped into someone. I was about to fall but the person held me by my waist.

Ishq wala Love..

I looked up, I was shocked.

Ishq wala love..

Ishq walaa.. Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love, Hota hai jo love se ziada waiay wala love..

Back with the chapter! Do tell me whether you liked it or not and yes I'm leaving on a cliff hanger. ;)

Ps, No proof reading done. Forgive me for the mistakes, If any. :)

That's was shoo cute!

superb amazing update .
sorry for late response exam u see
but u write awesome ok .don't be disheartened .
so back to story
nandani fell on manik right????
wow so navya and cabir is gonna marry.
good choice of song .
cliffhanger y y y ????
do update soon. waiting eagerly..